Emo Poems

[narutorocks1109]

Rutalia

Kaydelz

it is so funny watching you guys talk anyways you guys are awesome poet writters
keep writting it is getting intresting

Why don't you take a turn Kaydelz! Let's hear from ya!

yea! *everybody starts chanting* KAYDELZ! KAYDELZ! KAYDELZ! WRITE IT! WE WANT TO HEAR U (YEA THAT IS PERFECTLY IMPOSSIBLE) WRITE AN AWESOME POEM! (and yes this IS getting really interesting.... to give u some ideas... i guess ill try to write another poem.. that sounds like an eleven year old wrote it... wait i am eleven... o watever
my lungs were collapsing
my heart was failing
my feet running
fear followed me wherever i went
the people who died
it was all because me
i could not save them
and they could not save me.....
(at the end of this poem blood is splattered all over it)  

[Kaydelz]

ok ok
fine

As my legs began to burn my legs began to sweat.
that dark sky leaning over me crushing every single bone in my body.
the only thing i see is my getting poured into the ground....
was my weight began to fail, i wish that it wouldnt have
pain is better than no pain at all,
i was over, couldnt feel anything.....
just all my thoughts seemed to cary away.....

Thank yu i know i did a ood job didnt i???

lol
no anyways thanks  

[Kaydelz]

grrrr!!!! all these stupid typo's what is wrong wth my keyboard!!!!! damn it!!
na it was my fault
and that was my secound peice.......
hatred of the keyboard  

[CelticPrincessMe]

I like it.  

[Rutalia]

I'm not sure what it is about exactly, but it's very interesting. i like it!

i think I'm gonna start a happy poems post though smile  

[narutorocks1109]

Rutalia

I'm not sure what it is about exactly, but it's very interesting. i like it!

i think I'm gonna start a happy poems post though smile

noo!!! i cant do happy poems
see! ill just keep on doing emo poems as this thread says
my face was soaked with blood
as i was dragged to my death
the sky was red
the crows were soaring
the salvo of jeers roamed the air
the shiny guillotine lay before me
who knew somehing so violent had a sense of beuaty
but within one second, blood splattered
then everything went black....  

[Kaydelz]

nice going naruto!!!!!
lol... i am bored  

[Marbh_Leannan]

My Selfish Nature

I Know I Can Be Selfish
I've Claimed You As My Own
I Wish Not For Anyone Else To Have You
I want You As Only My Own
And I Know It's A Selfish Thought
I Am A Selfish Person
I Admit
But I Can't Help It
That's My Selish Nature
I Want To Keep You close
To Never Have You Go
To Basicaly Keep You In My Pocket
And Never Have You For Show
And I Know It's A Selfish Thought
I Am A Selfish Person
I Admit
But I Can't Help It
That's My Selish Nature
I Want This Selfishness To be Love
But I Cannot Tell
I Am Selfish, Wanty and Needy
And I Know This Very Well
But I Can't Help It
That's My Selish Nature

((Does this poem fit the criteria))  

[Rutalia]

Marbh_Leannan

((Does this poem fit the criteria))

Yeah I think that's emo? mebbeh  

[narutorocks1109]

well its emo enough for me! let me do another poem cause i am having a really emo day today
the sky was bright
the birds chirped
the children played (wait for it....)
the church bells rang
but that would ALL END
the sky turned black
the evilness appeared
everyone died
and those who did not
never remembered what happinesss felt like  

[Rutalia]

that sounds like a book i read  

[narutorocks1109]

Rutalia

that sounds like a book i read

o really? well i never heard or read it cause i would NEVER plagerize something like that  

[Rutalia]

narutorocks1109

Rutalia

that sounds like a book i read

o really? well i never heard or read it cause i would NEVER plagerize something like that

uhm. I definitely did not insinuate that you were plagiarizing.  

[narutorocks1109]

wtf does insinuate mean???!?!? *checks old vocab book* o it means (reading from the book ) a verb to suggest or hint slyly;to edge into something indirectly.... so thats good that u dont think that i would plagerize something..... but wats the book called????  

[Kaydelz]

lol, haha
i am sorry, but nice naruto....
and george lopez is on!