Los Gangstas. [LG]

[kaiser321]

Chang524

No.

I second that stare  

[Femmunition]

z-bandit

Wuz cracalakin yo homie G pop tart fiddle faddle yanker doodle.

Kno wuz I sayin yo?

Uhh.. you like pop-tarts? sweatdrop  

[Femmunition]

You can rap battle people in LG. Anyone want to challenge me?

I leave you with splattered brains, my name is femmunition,
When I'm done with my aims, I'll be leaving you in critical condition,

 

[z-bandit]

Femmunition

z-bandit

Wuz cracalakin yo homie G pop tart fiddle faddle yanker doodle.

Kno wuz I sayin yo?

Uhh.. you like pop-tarts? sweatdrop

Just trying to fit in sweatdrop  

[Chang524]

... *Pulls out Glock 18* Fit in with this, foo'. Who you reppin', cuz?  

[Chang524]

Femmunition

You can rap battle people in LG. Anyone want to challenge me?

I leave you with splattered brains, my name is femmunition,
When I'm done with my aims, I'll be leaving you in critical condition,

Eh, not like I have anything else to do and after listening to SPM for the last two hours...

You can talk the talk but you can't walk the walk
Not when I pull out my .45 Glock
Best check yo self fo' I wreck yo health
Gonna make Femmunition into a premonition
Slap in a new clip filled with hollow-point tips  

[Femmunition]

Chang wished he was commie, but he's better off being with his mommy,
I leave you with water flowing from your eyes, destroyed, like tsunami's,

Could'nt fire anything, even if he was Donald Trump,
He be running away from me, call him Forrest Gump,

Your glocks are immaginary, I can tell, you missed me,
I'll reject your advances, just like a general, leaving you thoroughly dissed G,

[Sorry, I don't really mean it...
It's nothing personal, it's a rap battle. ^^]  

[Chang524]

((I know, this ain't the first rap battle I've seen/been a part in. Although, most of mine were dissing contest that usually led into a fist fight, but that's common in Texas sweatdrop )

Yo flow is weak, like a geek playin' Halo
Let a true OG show you how the game goes

I may have missed with my shots but I ain't surprised
It's hard to hit somethin' that can't be seen with eyes
There ain't nuthin' to shoot and there ain't nuthin' to hit
'Cause Femmunition, you know you ain't s**t

Better watch yo self fo' you lose the other eye
Just back on out, little baby Femmy
You just got crossed by the Barton Town OG.  

[Femmunition]

[Never seen street battles directly. This is keystyling. On the internet, people can rap battle other people using audio. LG offers fun rap battles and feedback so you can improve, sign up now. xD]

You want to talk about my flow and geeks, look who's talking Halo,
Chang is an OG at videogames, more like a mass of fail though,
Due to my extremely violent attacks, he became an Angel,

After I was done with you, I left you stranded in Texas,
Crossed you off the hitlist and burried you six feet under the fishes,

If I ain't sh*t, then I'll leave the title to you,
Like a pile poo, your flows messier than the battle of Waterloo,
 

[Chang524]

(Street battles flows together alot better and sounds less forced)

In Texas, we blast first, forget the questions
They need to search the world to find you after my torture sessions
A suggestion: Fo' you ******** with the best
Make sure you pack a full-body bulletproof vest

Don't you even know how to rap, little Femm?
Talkin' bout Waterloo and formulas in Chem
It's pathetic, don't know why I'm wastin' my time
You like a 5 year old tryin' to make s**t rhyme

In school my favorite subjects are fightin' and f***in'
Step wrong and my crew make sure you be gushin'
Can't make a turn fo' you see me rushin'
With a knife held high reminds me of junior high

So you need a new title, I won't waste my breath
'Cause I can already see that there ain't nuthin' left
A name means that you worth a little bit
But as I already said, Femmy ain't s**t

I'm the Hustle-Town Hustla
Barton Town bustin' ya
Beat the drawers off of ya
SO When yo flow's betta
Step into my office.  

[Femmunition]

[If I rapped this out loud it'd probably sound lessed force but as this is a text battle, you can't tell the flow that well. My previous post, by flow, I meant your verse drops. I'm too lazy to continue, I'll post later.]  

[Chang524]

((Eh, I'm used to listening to the street battles that go on around my school where they're short and to the point.))  

[Femmunition]

[FYI, if you take another person's verse and turn it around, it's called biting. I realize that I was biting but it leaves very little improvement when it comes to coming up with something different and new on the spot; being creative. Biting isn't really encouraged in LG but I didn't really feel like coming up with something. The purpose of this battle is to showcase keystyling in LG and what kind of feedback you can expect.

Yeah, street battles you come up with on the spot, it's hard to be creative, well flowing and insulting at the same time, well some people.

If you just say "yo you suck, I just don't know why, you just do" the insult doesn't seem to insult the opponent much.

Try going on the offensive, instead of saying the other opponent is wrong and you're way better.

In street battles, the disses along with the flow are important, creativity is a bonus. In keystyle battleling, it's the same. However, when it comes to impacting people or becoming an artist, creativity and flow are key.]  

[Chang524]

(In Texas, street battles don't last long. It takes about 3 minutes before a fight breaks out for one reason or another sweatdrop )  

[Femmunition]

[No wonder George Bush is gangsta. xD]