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ashrr

PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:07 pm


Very cool, I love the concept. I think you could actually make some money if you sold it.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 10:55 am


Warning: I do not intend to hurt anyone with my critiques, but I have a history of people taking my words personally. I mean no one harm, I am here only to provide advice. That said...

I disgree with version 2
I liked version 1 better for many reasons. I think the (CTRL) + (ALT) + (CREATE) should be lower, I think it'd look nice if the orange text and the logo were overlapping by the parentheses. What if you set it lower and faded the bottom logo a bit under the text?

Also, I liked the detailed keyboard, but I think it would make your statement stand out a bit if you took the detailed keyboard and took the text from all the other keys out so the only keys with text are the orange ones that you want people to see.

... hmmm... also, if might help to simplify your message. it's a bit repetative. It might look better if you placed "if only all of life's choices were so easy" under the "(ctrl) + (alt) + (create)" and I think a more powerful message for the body might be something like "Why Destroy, if Creatiing is just as Easy?" (but that's -just- an opinion)

as for some fine tuning... the "Create" text on the keyboard needs to move to the right and up just a scootch

Again, please don't take my critisism hard -_-

Supervising


biscuit tec

PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 2:53 am


I don't know if I like the typeface ("ctrl+alt...") I think the fact that its elongated makes it looked crammed in. Maybe change it's composition? Other than that, its great!!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 7:47 pm


Vagabond
Warning: I do not intend to hurt anyone with my critiques, but I have a history of people taking my words personally. I mean no one harm, I am here only to provide advice. That said...


Hey, as long as it's *useful* criticism and not just something like "You suck!", I'm happy with it. And you had some pretty good ideas which I will have to be sure to use when I get around to redoing it again. 3nodding

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