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Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:33 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:36 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:32 am
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xXlildizzle1516Xx ◉◉◉◉xxxxxxxxxxx青竜のかぐや xxLikexxluridxxliquidsxxinxxaxxsanguinexxstreamx.x.x. Thexxenemy'sxxbloodxxflowsxxinxxendlessxxtorrents.xx xxxx"My will to fight has not yet diminished ..." "I shall continue to battle until you have been finished."xxxx ┫xxRyugan Kaguyaxx┣xxxxxxxx┫xxKumogakurexx┣xxxxxxxx┫xxChuuninxx┣xxxxxxxx┫xxOinin Commanderxx┣ Ryugan knew that he had been immobilized, he could feel it. The instant his attack hit, the clone sent static strings into his body. Though thanks to the force of his strike, the clone fist would go flying over his head and due to this the clone's knee would hit him in the face as he was flying forward, so Ryugan would fly back. The wings on Ryugan's back would be his savior. As the clone fell over Ryugan, it would first hit Ryugan's wing, which at the force he applied to the attack and steel strength of his bone wings, would sever the strings as they both tumbled backward, though due to Ryugan's awkward position, his arm would break in the process. They both tumbled to the ground, causing a mild dust cloud to form around them, a sudden poofing sound would be heard coming from it. As the dust cleared it would reveal Ryugan standing alone with the blood red blade pointed at Kazuo and his left hand tightly gripped on Jinsoku Yaiba, for he had destroyed the clone while enveloped in the smoke. His eyes remained cold, he seemed to open his mouth coyly to utter "Release" then just begin to glow. Suddenly Ryugan would be engulfed in a ominous teal glow, bright teal flames would begin to dance around him and his wings as he stood there eying Kazuo. He then manipulated his arm back in place. "My turn" Ryugan said before dashing forward, the flames on him sweeping back as he ran with a great speed. There would be a sudden jerk in Ryugan's body as he progressed rapidly, but it wouldn't be noticable.
(I'll edit if you dont like it, just the way I hit the clone it would go over me and hit my wings, my wrist would go along with it, so the strings wold hit the wings dead on)) x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x - x◉◉◉◉
(The thing is, just because you hit my wrist hard doesn't mean that my clone is going to go flying into the air or nor does it mean that my arm will even continue more then a foot upwards or that my knee will even move. It's not like my clone will just sit there and let his arm go flying he will stop his arm after it would be hit and still remain standing on the ground. That is how I responded even, "The clone would stumble then regain his posture from the hit." This is one of the issues some crew members were having an issue with. You can't RP my character, example: "Though thanks to the force of his strike, the clone fist would go flying over his head and due to this the clone's knee would hit him in the face as he was flying forward, so Ryugan would fly back." Expecially after I already RPed him. Thus we are still in the standstill facing eachother as we were. I'm not mad or anything i'm just trying to help you so you get in less trouble in the future. So i'll allow you to edit your latest post to fix this issue. Just so you know here is the techniques description. So reply accordingly and correctly.
Sai Sen no Jutsu (Rewire Technique) Description: Making physical contact with an enemy shinobi the Cloud-Nin shoves Static Strings into his opponent and himself, by hotwiring the electrical impulses of the target's brain he disables the target and assumes control of the opponent's body. While in this state the shinobi can only control the target body and has little control over his own body which will remain standing in place. Major problems with this technique is that by severing the strings you break the connection between the target and the Cloud-nin, also the maximum range the controlled body can move from the original body is 50 feet, otherwise the strings will break.)
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:50 am
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((I know the effect and all, in fact he would barely have control of his body (So he would have little control to regaining balance.) It's not like he just was standing still and tried to punch[ Then what you said would happen,because he would be standing still, hitting his wrist would have no effect), he was running and while running he threw a punch at me {What I did was sorta like a parry, except he was running so it would have a stronger effect). The hit to the wrist would bring his arm over my head(which is why I duck low if that string never happened), making him have one foot on the ground and the other in the air as he fell forward due to him running and suddenly getting knocked off balance. My point is the clone didn't stop and punch, he ran and punched, so when I hit him he would lean forward quickly and thanks to me not ducking, what I posted would happen.
If it makes no since then, I'll edit. It's just that he cant just suddenly regain balance when he barely has control over his body, exspecially because he was in motion while throwing the punch.))
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:49 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:51 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:53 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:56 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 1:11 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:35 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:37 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:42 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:43 pm
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