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xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:45 am
Reiko Zena

Username:xxx_mist_of_shadows_xxx
RPC:Alexandra James
Rank:genin

Puppet Name:Sail
Puppet Rank:C
Description:
The puppet Sail is made of finally sanded logs and branches, the body is constructed of logs and branches that connect each thing to another. The puppet has a heart shape carved into the log chest and stands 4'5 and weighs 60 pounds.
-The waist down of the puppet is fairly regular
-the finger webbing on both hands can reveal blades, each finger webbing of the puppet has 2 blades.
-finger can open up and release flames, the fingers are hollow for the flames to be shot out.
-both elbows can fold back to reveal swords.
-The mouth of the puppet can open to shoot needles.

The puppet other then that is fairly simple and meant to be for a genin.
Weak Joint:shoulders, if the arms are detatched the puppet has no more weapons to use.
Picture (not mandatory):

Description above ^



Is that better?  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:47 am
ChaosDuo
Username: chaosduo
RPC:Masutā papetton
Rank:genin
Puppet Name:Rantō kuma
Puppet Rank:B
Description:The bear itself has actually been crafted out of senju mokutin making it a bit more durable than your standard wood puppet. It stands about six and a half feet when on its hind legs. The paws of the bear are made of titanium alloy and the front paws have one small hollowed out hole in the center of each of them. When activated the holes themselves will secrete acid which is usually used to corrode blades and other weapons if they can be caught within the bears paws. Users would have to be in the same speed bracket as the puppeteer.This acid can only be used three times before the canisters need to be refilled . The containers would have to be taken out of the bears paw to be refilled.

The arms are hydraulically charged and upon activation they can deliver punches in rapid succession four in about the span of two seconds. Can only use the hydraulics once every three posts or they will burn themselves out. The arms also dawn titanium bracers which run down the forearms to the elbow of Rantō kuma.

The claws on the front paws can each extend up to five feet . They are sharpened razors which can tear into the opponents skin. The claws themselves have a small hole on the tip of each claw which secrete a small amount of poison. Once secreted the poison will only remain on the claws for three posts before evaporating. (Poison cartridges must be replaced after three uses.) The spools will have to be taken out and the cable will have to be rethreaded on the poison cartridges.

Post # 1: The infected will feel as though all is normal.
Post #2: They will begin to feel sick to their stomach.
Post# 3-5: The toxins will make their stomach feel like it is beginning to be squeezed in a knot. The pain will slowely get worse over the next 2 posts.The body will feel as though it has been caught on fire.
Post #6:The pain on the body will become excruciating making the opponents eyes began to blur and making it hard for them to concentrate .
Post #7: The opponents vision will become blurred and the body will become sluggish making movement difficult and the opponents breathing will begin to slow.
Post #8: The opponent will pass out from the pain and fatigue which the poison has placed upon the body.

The poison itself is not deadly but will require a shinobi to visit a hospital or find a medical nin to draw the poison out of the body.

Rantō kuma also dawns a titanium alloy helmet which covers his face and back of his neck. As well as a chest plate which opens into a compartment in which the user can climb into.Believing an animal should appear in their natural state Masutā is well known for taking an animal hide and placing it around his creation leaving openings for their weapons. Therefore Rantō looks exactly like a black bear. Some people say it is a sadistic side of Masutā but he believes it is paying homage to the animal itself. He has even put a recording the bears growl in its mouth.

Weak Joint:The elbows. Lightning will virtually take this puppet out as it has a lot of moving components.
Picture (not mandatory):


The components

The claws are separately run to a mechanical pulley system. The cables each approximately an inch thick are run along the bears leg and up each of its sides to their own personal gear box near its hind legs. When the bear stands the cords will tense like a slingshot as they are wound upon their own spools. The mechanism which is near the claws themselves is actually nothing more than a pin attached to a spring. The will cause the pin to eject as the claws are shot out approximately five feet for each claw. Reaching their full extension the gear box will reel the claws back in and the will spring back shut locking them in place. The wires themselves are bore out in the center to allow for a pressurized poison to be released. The spool in which the wire is attached is a small cylindrical contain which is specially coated to hold the poison.

The opening of the paw when the bear is erect have a tiny metal lip which barely sticks out from the paw itself. This is attached to the special plastic container which houses the hydrofluoric acid. The housing of the container which is about the size of a mason jar is pressured by a special lid which is a few inches below the paws surface. When the paws touch a surface lip will compress causing the containers lid to open releasing the acid and creating a suction between the bears paw and whatever object it may be holding. When released the lid will shut and the acid will refrain from being released.

The arms are each controlled by two pistons attached to a shaft which runs the length of the shoulder blades and down to the elbows in a upside down v shape. In the middle of the shaft is an electric motor which can be switched on from the bears back itself. The motor will cause the pistons to fire rapidly in a short burst causing the arms to have a substantial amount of speed and force.

I think I fixed everything and I had planned on being part of the senju and having the ability to make my puppets out of mokutin.

Reiko Zena


Alrighty, just add it in, and it will be approved --> Please make sure to have Mokuton before this is created.  


-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire



-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:48 am
xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx
Reiko Zena

Username:xxx_mist_of_shadows_xxx
RPC:Alexandra James
Rank:genin

Puppet Name:Sail
Puppet Rank:C
Description:
The puppet Sail is made of finally sanded logs and branches, the body is constructed of logs and branches that connect each thing to another. The puppet has a heart shape carved into the log chest and stands 4'5 and weighs 60 pounds.
-The waist down of the puppet is fairly regular
-the finger webbing on both hands can reveal blades, each finger webbing of the puppet has 2 blades.
-finger can open up and release flames, the fingers are hollow for the flames to be shot out.
-both elbows can fold back to reveal swords.
-The mouth of the puppet can open to shoot needles.

The puppet other then that is fairly simple and meant to be for a genin.
Weak Joint:shoulders, if the arms are detatched the puppet has no more weapons to use.
Picture (not mandatory):

Description above ^



Is that better?


Alright, I think its safe to approve this.  
PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 4:25 pm
McGrunny Grand Emperor


Edited  

Panthers7


IrIshInjun95

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2014 2:11 am
Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Ani
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is in the shape of a little boy roughly 8 years old. The only difference between the two is this puppet is covered in many poison traps such as a poison tipped sword, poison mistball launcher, and an electrical generator to make his sword electrified, for two posts, before a recharge is needed for 5 posts. There is also a chakra shield in the left arm of the puppet.

Weak Joint: Neck Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Shimai
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is almost exactly like Ani except with it being a six year old girl design. The weapons in this puppet are a flamethrower in her left hand, a poison senbon launcher in her mouth, and a water launcher in her right hand. Used together with Ani they can shock the enemy with electrified water.

Weak Joint: Neck
Picture (not mandatory):
 
PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 9:34 am
Panthers7
McGrunny Grand Emperor


Edited


The edits are a green light. Go kill s**t.  


-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire



-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 9:35 am
IrIshInjun95
Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Ani
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is in the shape of a little boy roughly 8 years old. The only difference between the two is this puppet is covered in many poison traps such as a poison tipped sword, poison mistball launcher, and an electrical generator to make his sword electrified, for two posts, before a recharge is needed for 5 posts. There is also a chakra shield in the left arm of the puppet.

Weak Joint: Neck Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Shimai
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is almost exactly like Ani except with it being a six year old girl design. The weapons in this puppet are a flamethrower in her left hand, a poison senbon launcher in her mouth, and a water launcher in her right hand. Used together with Ani they can shock the enemy with electrified water.

Weak Joint: Neck
Picture (not mandatory):


You are going to need a bit more description on the puppets and the inner works of their mechanics and an actual weakness that relates to the puppet and why it is a weakness.  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 9:52 am
Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Ani
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is in the shape of a little boy roughly 8 years old, with short black hair. The only difference between the two is this puppet is covered in many poison traps such as a poison tipped sword which is sheathed on it's back, poison mistball launcher stored in it's mouth, and an electrical generator to make his sword electrified, for two posts, before a recharge is needed for 5 posts, placed inside the body, in the neck. There is also a chakra shield in the left arm of the puppet. The neck is it's weak joint due to the fact that the generator is there, one single stab there and the puppet will blow. The poison he uses is a paralyzing poison. Completely non-lethal but very effective. The poison takes 2 posts to work its way into the system, and begins paralyzing the legs first, two more posts and half the body is paralyzed, and three more posts and the whole body is paralyzed except for the vital organs. The poison only lats for two more posts after that, before in reverse order it wears off, except it takes only one post to wear off each section.

Weak Joint: Neck Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Shimai
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is almost exactly like Ani except with it being a six year old girl design with long black hair. The weapons in this puppet are a flamethrower in her left hand,and a water launcher in her right hand. Used together with Ani they can shock the enemy with electrified water. The elbows are this puppets weak joint due to the fact the fuel lines for this puppet flow through there. If the left elbow is hit the puppet will catch fire and be unusable, if the right arm is punctured water would flood the body and make puppet again unusable.

Weak Joint: right elbow left elbow
Picture (not mandatory):
 

IrIshInjun95

Ice-Cold Sage

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-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2014 7:55 pm
IrIshInjun95
Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Ani
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is in the shape of a little boy roughly 8 years old, with short black hair. The only difference between the two is this puppet is covered in many poison traps such as a poison tipped sword which is sheathed on it's back, poison mistball launcher stored in it's mouth, and an electrical generator to make his sword electrified, for two posts, before a recharge is needed for 5 posts, placed inside the body, in the neck. There is also a chakra shield in the left arm of the puppet. The neck is it's weak joint due to the fact that the generator is there, one single stab there and the puppet will blow. The poison he uses is a paralyzing poison. Completely non-lethal but very effective. The poison takes 2 posts to work its way into the system, and begins paralyzing the legs first, two more posts and half the body is paralyzed, and three more posts and the whole body is paralyzed except for the vital organs. The poison only lats for two more posts after that, before in reverse order it wears off, except it takes only one post to wear off each section.

Weak Joint: Neck Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: irishinjun95
RPC: Zeus Sarutobi
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Shimai
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is almost exactly like Ani except with it being a six year old girl design with long black hair. The weapons in this puppet are a flamethrower in her left hand,and a water launcher in her right hand. Used together with Ani they can shock the enemy with electrified water. The elbows are this puppets weak joint due to the fact the fuel lines for this puppet flow through there. If the left elbow is hit the puppet will catch fire and be unusable, if the right arm is punctured water would flood the body and make puppet again unusable.

Weak Joint: right elbow left elbow
Picture (not mandatory):


1-> The poison is a bit overpowered for the rank of the puppet, this would need to be nerfed greatly. In fact complete paralysis is not allowed. Dull it down a bit. Electric generator... You better have Raiton.

2-> Approved.  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2014 11:58 am
Username:Chaosduo
RPC: Masutā papetton
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name:Moko and Synu
Puppet Rank: D
Description: The birds themselves are actual simple designs. Each of them is a foot long and contain a senbon launcher in their mouths. The launcher is spring loaded and when the mouth opens will cause the senbon to shoot from the mouths. The cartridge will be ejected every time the senbon are used and will load a new cartridge to replace the old one. Each of the bird contains three metal box shaped cartridges which each ten senbon. The wings work on hinges which allow the wings to flap 180 degrees up and down allowing them to turn rather quickly when one or the other is lowered or raised. Each wing contains a kunai which sticks out a quarter inch over the wing itself which will cause the birds to cut a shinobi if they fly by close enough. Or they can be shot out of the wings but the force is only enough to barely penetrate a shinobi's skin. Also on the bottom is a little hatch which allows the bird to drop clay bombs when the latch is opened. The back of the bird under the tail is an opening which contains a smoke bomb. When activated the smoke will trail from the back of the bird which they can use to create diversion. The is not harmful but can make it difficult for a shinobi to see exactly what is going on. The birds themselves are made out of mahogany and in true Masutā fashion are covered with a blue jays hide to cover up their appearance.

Weak Joint:The wings as if they are destroyed the bird can no longer fly and be maneuvered.
Picture (not mandatory):


Reiko The Fire Dragon
 

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 2:48 pm
ChaosDuo
Username:Chaosduo
RPC: Masutā papetton
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name:Moko and Synu
Puppet Rank: D
Description: The birds themselves are actual simple designs. Each of them is a foot long and contain a senbon launcher in their mouths. The launcher is spring loaded and when the mouth opens will cause the senbon to shoot from the mouths. The cartridge will be ejected every time the senbon are used and will load a new cartridge to replace the old one. Each of the bird contains three metal box shaped cartridges which each ten senbon. The wings work on hinges which allow the wings to flap 180 degrees up and down allowing them to turn rather quickly when one or the other is lowered or raised. Each wing contains a kunai which sticks out a quarter inch over the wing itself which will cause the birds to cut a shinobi if they fly by close enough. Or they can be shot out of the wings but the force is only enough to barely penetrate a shinobi's skin. Also on the bottom is a little hatch which allows the bird to drop clay bombs when the latch is opened. The back of the bird under the tail is an opening which contains a smoke bomb. When activated the smoke will trail from the back of the bird which they can use to create diversion. The is not harmful but can make it difficult for a shinobi to see exactly what is going on. The birds themselves are made out of mahogany and in true Masutā fashion are covered with a blue jays hide to cover up their appearance.

Weak Joint:The wings as if they are destroyed the bird can no longer fly and be maneuvered.
Picture (not mandatory):


Reiko The Fire Dragon



Approved.  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 1:04 pm
iUsername:Chaosduo
RPC: Masutā papetton
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name:Rioku
Puppet Rank: C
Description: Rioku for all intensive purposes is the mother of moko and synu...Designed in much the same fashion her head is built onto a ball joint allowing her head to swivel in different directions. The bird spans about six feet in length and weighs thirty pounds. It's wind full extended also equal out to six feet allowing plenty of room for masuta to ride on it's back if he chooses to do so. Rioku's body has six holes in the top and sides which allow moko and synu to hide in as well as pop out of to create an orthodox and random fighting pattern. As well Rioku carries a cache of senbon in her mouth in the form of three cartridges each carrying 100 senbon They are laced with a numbing poison which will slowly begin to take over a shinobi's body if they are hit. First post the body part that was hit will begin to some of it's feeling. The second post the limb itself will fall numb. The numbness will impede the shinobi's movements and will last for six posts before it wears off. The stomach compartment of rioku houses bigger exploding clay bombs than those of moko and synu. Carrying three egg shaped bombs when detonated they can form a good sized crater in the ground. (Approximately a 5x5x5 foot crater.) As well the tail of the bird has a small hole which carries a barbed wire net. The net can be released by a small lever which rests just inside the hole in the tail. When a shinobi is ensnared in the net masuta can use his chakra strings to surge his own chakra through the net as the barbs cut into the shinobi's flesh. By doing so masuta will disrupt the shinobi's chakra flow for a short period (2 posts.) making them unable to cast ninjutsu. The last weapon of Rioku are the three kunai blades which are strapped into each wing and can be shot out of there holsters by the latch which is located on top of each wing. The bird is made of masuta's favorite mahogany wood and has been dressed to resemble an overly large blue jay.
Weak Joint:The wings as if they are destroyed the bird can no longer fly and be maneuvered.
Picture (not mandatory):
 

ChaosDuo

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Panthers7

PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 2:58 pm
Username: Panthers7
RPC: Rose Allamora Liang
Rank: Chuunin

Puppet Name: Soldant De l'incube ( Mist Edition Mark Ⅰ )
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Soldant De I'incube is an interesting puppet as it takes a different method to puppetry. It is known throughout the land that puppet users usually lack the physical ability to perform taijutsu at a manner that can cause any damage; specially Rose who could probably do more damage smacking a person than punching them.... after of course cursing to the pain coursing through his hand. But he realized... is not Taijutsu simply movement? Can the brain, not duplicate that movement and perform it through puppetry? Certain moves and styles like Konoha's Eight Gates could hardly be be replicated... but techniques that do not require complexity of chakra and flesh, can be replicated. For it is nothing but knowledge! This is where "Soldant De L'incube" comes from. A puppet whose sole purpose is to take Taijutsu Rose has "learned" and bring it to life through his puppet.

Abilities: The obvious one is that it is geared towards performing Taijutsu. The puppet isn't innately heavy. After all, Rose wishes to operate the puppet as powerfully as possible. The puppet is created with a fusion of many hard plastics (such as polyethylene-based materials) and metal-matrix materials. Making the puppet light, very fire resilient (Up to C-rank in resiliency before taking damage. Although continuous fire damage and still take effect), but hard enough to cause quite some damage upon contact.

Head: Within the protective shell of the head is explosive tags activated by Rose's chakra. By disconnecting the puppet or should it be destroyed, he can send the head filled with tags at his opponent and explode them with a seal. Activated with C-Rank chakra

Right Eye Socket: Like most of Rose's puppets, there is a camera to record. This eye has just that function. Zooming up to for 4x magnification, they eye records visual and stores information into a microchip. That can be plugged into a blank memory disk that can then be plugged into a computer.

Left Arm & RIght Arms: A mechanism triggers to bring out the lethality of Rose's poison. Upon the wrists, they will bend back and pull towards the forearms where a foot inch pipe with just a tiny hole at the tip will be released. It will have just a droplet of poison continuing to drip from it's holes. At the elbows, an extension from the upper arm will be made, creating a similar pipe that would drip occasionally. Both take [1] post to activate. Keeping it constantly coated in poison, specifically when the poison has the blades sheathed within a tube of it that lays within the inner forearm compartment. Complete 360 degree rotation.

The poison, while active, will last only [15] of active use. Meaning because the storage is limited to a smaller limb, it has a limit to it's quantity. Droplets of poison keep the weapon coated in the poison, but after the poison is completely gone, it will only keep the poison active for [2] more posts before drying up.

Chest Cavity: Rose has, rolled up in the chest of the puppet, twenty yards of heavy iron chain connected to a sickle. Like most of his puppets, it carries Rose's unique poison doused upon it. While the heaviness of the chain can be used to capture and the sickle to stab, slash, and mutilate. Although, it must be focused with at least one arm not in "use". For the longer the chain is in use, the more limited the attacks can get.

Arm socket and Hip Joint: Complete 360 degree rotation with springs that upon winding, can unwind back at a more significant force. Increasing the attack power of the puppet.

Feet: At the sole's of the feet, Rose modified his puppet to better manipulate his fighting style. To do this, Rose drilled holes at the bottom of his feet and make a baseball-sized radius hole. Within the shins, would be turbines that can be activated when chakra is re-directed solely to them. Air will be sucked in then compressed into this turbine then released out with tremendous force. Air can only be compressed into these shins for a limit of [1] post, before risking them overloading and exploding.

Weakness: The main weakness of the puppet is it's strength. Should the puppet spin making an attack that is ranked ( i.e perform a taijutsu technique) and an opposing attack of greater physical force is made against it, it will overload the skeleton of the puppet and break the limb.


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Username: Panthers7
RPC: Rose Allamora Liang
Rank: Chuunin

Puppet Name: Diable De l'incube ver. 2
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Diable De I'incube ver is an interesting puppet as it takes a different method to puppetry. It is known throughout the land that puppet users usually lack the physical ability to perform bukijutsu at a manner that can cause any damage; specially Rose who could probably do more damage smacking a person than punching them.... after of course cursing to the pain coursing through his hand. But he realized... is not Bukijutsu simply movement? Can the brain, not duplicate that movement and perform it through puppetry? Certain moves and styles like the Mist Sword Style could hardly be be replicated... but techniques that do not require complexity of chakra and flesh, can be replicated. For it is nothing but knowledge! This is where "Soldant De L'incube ver. 2" comes from. A puppet whose sole purpose is to take Bukijutsu Rose has "learned" and bring it to life through his puppet.

Puppet Height: 8'6
Puppet Weight: 365 lbs

Locations on the Puppet


Puppet Helmet: On the center of the helmet is a constantly spinning hypnotic eye. An eye, that if looked at, will leave the opponent to stall in their action. [ Or in other words, stop them for one post action. ] In that duration of that reduced post action, it will leave them vulnerable for a Genjutsu to be applied without finding restraint.

Puppet Head ( Left Eye & Ears ): Like most of Rose's puppets, there is a camera to record. This eye has just that function. Zooming up to for 4x magnification, they eye records visual and stores information into a microchip. That can be plugged into a blank memory disk that can then be plugged into a computer.

Left-Upper Arm: Wields a sword that is made out of copper. This copper sword acts as an offense and defense against/for Raiton attacks. Offensively, a small turbine within the arm creates bursts of electricity that would equal up to a D-rank Raiton attack. Defensively, it can have singular beamed Raiton attacks come target it. Raising it's attack up by a [.5] rank with every beam it absorbs. Admittedly, it can only absorb, only [1] beam of lightening per post.

Left-Lower Arm: This arm also wields a sword, but one that is permanently attached it's hand. Within the biceps of the arm is fuel while along the wrists is a small igniter that as the full passes through brings about vicious blue flames. These flames, exit out of the holes along the sword. Creating fire damage equal that of a C-Rank jutsu. The fuel input and the igniter, are all triggered via chakra.

Right-Upper Arm: Holds a 6" tri-point spear. This spear has nothing unique about it outside of the metal being composed of the same thing as the puppet is. Although within the spear's tubing, is Rose's poison. Poison that gets released every time the spear's points sink into a solid object. This is done by the spear's points, after stabbing into something solid, slide back and give a lethal dosage of Rose's poison. To the extent, that for every point that successfully enters into the body, can accelerate the poison's movement through the body. [ Maximum of 3x speed ]

Right Lower Arm: This is the only puppet are without a weapon. Instead, it wields a 100lb kite shield. 5 feet in width, 8 feet in height. This thick shield is made for the soul purpose of protecting and devastating opponents that are too close with a shield bash. That of which, with the puppet's strength, can cause bone fractures.


Weak Joint: In the middle back of the puppet are pistons that help operate this massive puppet. If something strong enough pierces through the back of the puppet locks or destroys the puppet's pistons, it can systematically destroy the arms or bring them to incapability.

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TheWingsOfTheGods
 
PostPosted: Mon Sep 01, 2014 2:29 pm
ChaosDuo



Here I will rule on your puppet. Sorry it has taken this long for someone to get to it.

ChaosDuo

Username:Chaosduo
RPC: Masutā papetton
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name:Rioku
Puppet Rank: C
Description:


The bird spans about six feet in length and weighs thirty pounds. It's wind full extended also equal out to six feet allowing plenty of room for masuta to ride on it's back if he chooses to do so.



Okay so the obvious problem here would be that it weighs 30 pounds spread out over a total of 12 feet yet can support a human that is probably 100+ pounds. This isn't very likely, also if it only weighed 30 pounds it could be crushed from a single punch by a ninja with maybe 3+ strength. But the biggest issue would be flight, it wouldn't be possible to carry someone.


ChaosDuo


Rioku's body has six holes in the top and sides which allow moko and synu to hide in as well as pop out of to create an orthodox and random fighting pattern. As well Rioku carries a cache of senbon in her mouth in the form of three cartridges each carrying 100 senbon They are laced with a numbing poison


Again, at 30lbs it wouldn't be able to carry or even hide any other puppets or beings unless these Moko and Synu puppets are extremely small and nearly weightless. Also the poison must be applied for as a custom item.

ChaosDuo


The stomach compartment of rioku houses bigger exploding clay bombs than those of moko and synu. Carrying three egg shaped bombs when detonated they can form a good sized crater in the ground. (Approximately a 5x5x5 foot crater.)



Keep in mind that again at 30lbs it would have to have a specific amount of clay bombs held. It would ALSO count against your chakra since you had to make the clay bombs and expend the chakra to detonate it. [assuming you have the Clay Hands or an implant of it]


ChaosDuo


As well the tail of the bird has a small hole which carries a barbed wire net. The net can be released by a small lever which rests just inside the hole in the tail. When a shinobi is ensnared in the net masuta can use his chakra strings to surge his own chakra through the net as the barbs cut into the shinobi's flesh. By doing so masuta will disrupt the shinobi's chakra flow for a short period (2 posts.) making them unable to cast ninjutsu


At C rank puppet this is denied.

ChaosDuo


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Weak Joint:The wings as if they are destroyed the bird can no longer fly and be maneuvered.


Keep in mind at 30lbs, anyone can pretty much punch it and destroy it. Just letting you know. Oh, and since it is made out of wood if Katon is used against it, it will pretty much be burned to ashes and there will be no repairing it. Also, what is the speed and strength of your puppet?  

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 16, 2014 8:29 am
Username: CPT-Fuzzle
RPC: Miku Minami
Rank: Genin

Puppet Name: Praetorian
Puppet Rank: C
Description: This puppet is made entirely from treated hardwood, making it more impervious to fire and small explosions, though enough of either will eventually destroy it. It resembles a basic human shape with two sets of arms and a three eyed skull for a head. It's primary weapons consist of;
- Hidden wrist knives.
- 2 Knives held in the primary arms.
- Kunia lauchers in all upper limbs (capacity of 3 kunia per arm)
- Senbon launcher in mouth (holds 12 senbon)
- 16 spikes across shoulders capable of firing out and attached to wire cables for retrieval.
-Any of its body parts are detachable for separate attacks.
- Large blades on the joints of his arms, legs and head.
- Capable of spitting Miku's explosive clay or shooting blobs of it from its hands.


The chest also contains a storage allowing Miku to place her exploding clay inside. If it is C2 clay, the moving variety, then it can exit the puppet through the mouth or hands. The downside of this puppet is the internal components, with all the joints and limbs hardened and reinforced to protect it from fire and Miku's explosives the internal parts are quite vunerable to most forms of attack such as sand, ice, water, etc. If one of her explosives was to go off inside the puppet the entire thing would be destroyed. It is also a high attack variety puppet meaning that its purpose is to go straight at the target, it therefore lacks any weapons on its back.

Weak Joint: Internal mechanisms.
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