Gabriel Clockwork
Narcissistic Nihilist
Gabriel Clockwork
Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Aburame Medical Assistance
Rank of Jutsu: E-B
Jutsu's Element: Healing
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Aburame Medics Only
Description: The Aburame are known for their knowledge of poisons, medicines and various other arts of healing. With chakra of the host coursing through these insects, the host can transmit their chakra and use the bugs as a catalyst to using medical jutsu up to B Rank by adding 5 extra Chakra in order to do so. This allows the Aburame to heal their allies with their own bugs while they are free to move themselves. Up to three patients can be treated at once without sacrificing the use of bugs to protect one's self yet a fourth can be added to eliminate the use of bug jutsu altogether and heal the extra paitient. Offensive medical jutsu can also be used with this on a foe.
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Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Bugs Fly, You can too
Rank of Jutsu: D
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Aburame
Description: A simple jutsu that involves the use of manipulating the bugs in a tight bundle or nimbus of sorts. Much like the sand jutsu equilvilant of this jutsu, the user can step on this nimbus of the bugs and be able to float, fly and hover around as a means of transportation. This can also be used as a makeshift gurney for patients, they can move around a target and lift it/him/her, and a few other practical implications can be used with this jutsu. Lasts 4 posts before the cost is repaid once more.
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Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Hive Mind
Rank of Jutsu: E
Jutsu Type: ---
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Aburame *I think the Aburame could use this Passive, they are a lil' weak as it is in this Guild*
Description: The bugs controlled by the Aburame have always had a sort of symbiotic relationship with the host, the bugs provide their power and the host provides them the chakra to survive. When the Aburame is using their bugs and manipulating them to work with and attack, there is a mental connection that is constantly going on and whatever the bugs are feeling, doing and thinking, the host would know this as well and it becomes part of the reason on how the clansmen are exceptional trackers as well. However the bugs thoughts are primitive and would not act well as spies, barely intelligible information is usually given but the host would know the gist of such things from the creepy symbiotic contact with their insects. This jutsu is a passive for any and all Aburame.
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Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Aburame Medical Assistance
Rank of Jutsu: E-B
Jutsu's Element: Healing
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Aburame Medics Only
Description: The Aburame are known for their knowledge of poisons, medicines and various other arts of healing. With chakra of the host coursing through these insects, the host can transmit their chakra and use the bugs as a catalyst to using medical jutsu up to B Rank by adding 5 extra Chakra in order to do so. This allows the Aburame to heal their allies with their own bugs while they are free to move themselves. Up to three patients can be treated at once without sacrificing the use of bugs to protect one's self yet a fourth can be added to eliminate the use of bug jutsu altogether and heal the extra paitient. Offensive medical jutsu can also be used with this on a foe.
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Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Bugs Fly, You can too
Rank of Jutsu: D
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Aburame
Description: A simple jutsu that involves the use of manipulating the bugs in a tight bundle or nimbus of sorts. Much like the sand jutsu equilvilant of this jutsu, the user can step on this nimbus of the bugs and be able to float, fly and hover around as a means of transportation. This can also be used as a makeshift gurney for patients, they can move around a target and lift it/him/her, and a few other practical implications can be used with this jutsu. Lasts 4 posts before the cost is repaid once more.
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Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Hive Mind
Rank of Jutsu: E
Jutsu Type: ---
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Aburame *I think the Aburame could use this Passive, they are a lil' weak as it is in this Guild*
Description: The bugs controlled by the Aburame have always had a sort of symbiotic relationship with the host, the bugs provide their power and the host provides them the chakra to survive. When the Aburame is using their bugs and manipulating them to work with and attack, there is a mental connection that is constantly going on and whatever the bugs are feeling, doing and thinking, the host would know this as well and it becomes part of the reason on how the clansmen are exceptional trackers as well. However the bugs thoughts are primitive and would not act well as spies, barely intelligible information is usually given but the host would know the gist of such things from the creepy symbiotic contact with their insects. This jutsu is a passive for any and all Aburame.
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Aburame Medical Assistance:
Offensive capabilities need to be removed. This specific jutsu is for healing purposes.
The levels of healing need to be labeled along with their associated costs and effectiveness. (For example; D rank would only be useful for minor injuries such as scrapes and cuts.)
Finally, while the limit for healing is three additional people it should be noted that the cost is multiplied by the amount of people being treated.
Bugs Fly, You can Too:
Bump that up to a Chuunin level cost and the rest is fine.
Hive Mind:
You should propose this to the vice captain as this is more of a passive ability for a clan rather than a jutsu. As a jutsu, this is denied.
1.) For one, increasing the healing of multiple people would make this costs way too much for what it is worth. In a sense it is already making me add a cost per medical jutsu I use with this. The bugs are symbiotic with an Aburame and they share the same chakra, in logic the healing would be done by the same jutsu but that would be applied to each person being healed. This is a Bug jutsu and it is using Bugs to apply a cost to people when in actuality the mass of these bugs are one single entity working the chakra from the Aburame. I already have to use separate medical jutsu on the people in addition of using this jutsu. I am not adding a cost for every other person treated as this would be an astronomical increase in cost. Say I use healing hands on two people with conjuration of this jutsu. The cost would be this --> C Rank Assistance as a base cost to move the bugs. C Rank 2x with the Two people being healed. Its already pretty costly and it reduces how many bugs I can use in battle already. Further increasing this is not worth it and I refuse to change as such.
Also the jutsu does not heal people on its own, it is sort of a passive/active jutsu to use medical jutsu through the bugs as a medium, as the bugs of an aburame are an extension of the shinobi himself. Sooo... Why would I need to label healing when that is already done by the medical jutsu I have.
Third, are you the one making my jutsu or are you the approving it and looking it over? This is used for using medical jutsu through the bugs. Who's to say Kagerou can't figure a way to use offensive medical on his opponents with this? He can already use beneficial jutsu with it, the limitation makes no sense at all.
2. ) I'll boost it to a Genin Rank, that's C in this guild. Chuunin is B Rank... and this isn't doing anything but transportation. Fire can blow up a house at B Rank. Sorry, but thats a bit too high for my tastes for a simple ninjutsu.
3.) I was told a VC had already approved it while the VC who had informed me of this had also approved it. I made it so it could be added to the list of Aburame to make them no suck as bad. Not as a jutsu. Sorry if I had not clarified this but this has the approval, ask around.
4.) It is pretty much self explanatory. But I'll add that bit in anyways.
1)The cost may remain the same, however the level of detail you provided in defending the jutsu needs to be mirrored in the description. As it was, I was given the impression that you could triplicate your healing ability with nothing more than a 10 CP cost. As that is not the case, I have no further issue on that matter.
As for the matter of the labeling of healing, this was under the pretense that the jutsu was the medium of healing rather than the bugs. As this is not the case, that is null and void and no changes need to be made. Approved.
2) Ran this through with some of the other crew and they agree so this may remain a C-rank jutsu. Approved.
3) If the VC's approved then I approve.