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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2014 9:43 pm
Name of weapon: Sanga
Your Rank:chunin
Who owns the weapon: Ozzy Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: This blade was specially made for His family and has been a hand me down through the generations
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Blade is 5 feet long but Flames can reach 10 feet when flame is dispersed
Weakness: If hit by water loses its properties for 5 post
Description: This blade is able to harness the fire. As the blade is unsheathed a flame surrounds the blade, the flame can be shot out from the blade in a small fireball the size of a basket ball or fire slices that travel 10 feet before extinguishing. The flame is strong enough to cause 3rd degree burns if hit by the blade 2nd degree burns if only hit by the fire The hilt of this blade is made to interlock with Kazejin to make a a joint double bladed rod
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Name of weapon: Kazejin
Your Rank: Chunin
Who owns the weapon: Ozzy Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: This blade was made for his family and passed down to his brother who died in a ninja raid. Since then He has used the sword
Users Class: ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Blade is 5 feet long but Wind can reach 10 feet when flame is dispersed
Weakness: If the blade is hit by any sort of lighting all its properties are stopped for 5 post
Description: This blade is able to harness the fire. As the blade is unsheathed a White wind surrounds the blade. The wind can be shot out from the blade in a small wind ball the size of a basket ball or fire slices that travel 10 feet before extinguishing. The wind is strong enough to blow thrown weapons and cause small cuts if hit by the wind or extremely deep gash if his with the blade The hilt of this blade is made to interlock with Sanga to make a a joint double bladed rod
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Name of weapon:Sanjin
Your Rank: chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Ozzy uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: This is the combo of Sanga and Kazijin when put together by the hilt
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: The weapon is two swords so 10 feet the element can now reach 20 feet
Weakness: Blade can only be in use for 5 post before separating and needs a cool down of 3 post if hit by taijutsu it can unhinge the hilts
Description: By combing both swords both element meld together able to use fire and wind combos. If hit by the wind fire combo it cause second degree burns and small gashes if hit by the blade limbs can be easily removed. ((pretty much the effect of both weapons just elevated slightly))
Rp Sample:
 
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2014 9:12 am
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Name of weapon: Varantic
Your Rank: Genin
Who owns the weapon: Kit Joukai Heyaza
Where it was found/Who made it: A custom made weapon by a smith in the cloud village. MAde exactly to Kit's specifications.
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: 30 feet, 5 inches
Weakness: Once the weapon is seen it is very easy to predict what it is going to do and how to handle the attacks. Can only cary a maximum amount of 20 arows/bolts at all times. (picking up the ones tht missed is a viable option but typically bought from the maket place or a weapon shop.
Description:
A gauntlet covering half of Kit's forearm. It's two halves are tied together and knotted on with string. On the top half of the gauntlet is a colapable crossbow capable of firing three arrow/bolt per post. And on the under half it has a hidden blade (assasins creed) used for up close and personal suprise attack. The blade is exactly 8 inches long. Once the weapon is seen and its functions discovered even a genin with some fighting experience should be able to differ one attack from another and be wary of getting to close while the hidden blade is out.

Rp Sample:

Alright, we are going to begin with the ten rules.
I didn't see a color in your post and the description is less than the ten sentence minimum.
Moving onward, for a projectile based weapon such as the crossbow you are going to have to remove that three shots a post ability. Best I can grant is a shot and a reload in the same post.
As for the assassin blade I go back to the ten rules, specifically the one regarding originality. On that note, the assassin blade is denied.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2014 9:45 am
riotb0y
Name of weapon: Sanga
Your Rank:chunin
Who owns the weapon: Ozzy Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: This blade was specially made for His family and has been a hand me down through the generations
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Blade is 5 feet long but Flames can reach 10 feet when flame is dispersed
Weakness: If hit by water loses its properties for 5 post
Description: This blade is able to harness the fire. As the blade is unsheathed a flame surrounds the blade, the flame can be shot out from the blade in a small fireball the size of a basket ball or fire slices that travel 10 feet before extinguishing. The flame is strong enough to cause 3rd degree burns if hit by the blade 2nd degree burns if only hit by the fire The hilt of this blade is made to interlock with Kazejin to make a a joint double bladed rod
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Name of weapon: Kazejin
Your Rank: Chunin
Who owns the weapon: Ozzy Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: This blade was made for his family and passed down to his brother who died in a ninja raid. Since then He has used the sword
Users Class: ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Blade is 5 feet long but Wind can reach 10 feet when flame is dispersed
Weakness: If the blade is hit by any sort of lighting all its properties are stopped for 5 post
Description: This blade is able to harness the fire. As the blade is unsheathed a White wind surrounds the blade. The wind can be shot out from the blade in a small wind ball the size of a basket ball or fire slices that travel 10 feet before extinguishing. The wind is strong enough to blow thrown weapons and cause small cuts if hit by the wind or extremely deep gash if his with the blade The hilt of this blade is made to interlock with Sanga to make a a joint double bladed rod
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Name of weapon:Sanjin
Your Rank: chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Ozzy uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: This is the combo of Sanga and Kazijin when put together by the hilt
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: The weapon is two swords so 10 feet the element can now reach 20 feet
Weakness: Blade can only be in use for 5 post before separating and needs a cool down of 3 post if hit by taijutsu it can unhinge the hilts
Description: By combing both swords both element meld together able to use fire and wind combos. If hit by the wind fire combo it cause second degree burns and small gashes if hit by the blade limbs can be easily removed. ((pretty much the effect of both weapons just elevated slightly))
Rp Sample:

I'm going to start by pointing out the rules on the first page.
I need to see a color somewhere in your application.
Your descriptions for each weapon needs to be at least ten sentences long.
A chakra cost is necessary for maintaining the flame length on Sanga(Minimum of five per post.) Same goes for the projectiles, such as the fireball. (Addittional minimum of five.).
Kazejin's description needs revision as it mentions fire numerous times, which is confusing as I was under the impression that it was a wind blade. Past that, it too needs costs for maintaining a wind blade and creating projectiles as you described. Be sure to include these in your descriptions.
Sanjin is providing a bit of difficulty for me to judge in the way you have described it. I require a roleplaying sample describing the combination being created and utilized.
-Secondly: The cost for using Sanjin will be the combination of Sanga and Kazejin's costs . This needs to be listed in the description as well.  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2014 2:17 pm
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Name of weapon: Hoshi Saber
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kinkaru Senju
Where it was found/Who made it: Kinkaru made to extend his abilities with water
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Between 1 to 6ft
Weakness: the acidic liquid can be evaporated and null by B-rank or above fire techniques. Of course being water, lightning can travel across it.
Description: The handle like a handle is for a katana is just a handle by itself, the rest has no physical shape without water. The handle can shape water into multiple types of weapons, like a large mallet, a sword, or even a staff. with a body of water the cost of chakra per post is 15. not on a body of water it's 30. The water when when used with the weapon has an acidic property that will eat away at flesh and bone, also blades but slower. Blades can be made thin or thick.
Rp Sample:
Kinkaru Sat meditating above the water. Moments later, the sound of kunai and shuriken flying through the air came. in a moments notice, Kinkaru stepped up from his position grabbed the handle from his belt and forming a blade with water he knocked the ones on the path to him away. A moment later a shinobi from another village was upon him. He blocked the attacks with the other mans blade and swiftly moved to the left, holding his handle accordingly it went to full length and he slashed the shinobi's head clean off. Upon further look, the mans neck and blade were being eaten away by acid, the blade nearly a third of the way gone in the middle. His neck had only just started, but the acid clearly ate flesh a little faster. The mans body slowly sunk to the bottom of the pond as Kinkaru walked away.





Weapon needs a unique name.
The description is a little unclear. The handle remains a handle, but water forms the shape correct? Also, does this acid effect eat through anything else?


yup, i edited in this quote

Alright, a few more adjustments and you should be set.
The change of dimensions must be regulated. As it already costs chakra to maintain the weapon I am stating an additional five for every transition.
Second, the material eating property of the blade would require a triple in the chakra cost, (meaning 15 per post, thirty six if away from water) for it to balance out with the acidic property.
Third, I need to see an RP sample to see how you intend on using the blade.


can I negotiate for thirty if it costs an extra 5 for any changes after activating?  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2014 5:38 pm
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Name of weapon: Hoshi Saber
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kinkaru Senju
Where it was found/Who made it: Kinkaru made to extend his abilities with water
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Between 1 to 6ft
Weakness: the acidic liquid can be evaporated and null by B-rank or above fire techniques. Of course being water, lightning can travel across it.
Description: The handle like a handle is for a katana is just a handle by itself, the rest has no physical shape without water. The handle can shape water into multiple types of weapons, like a large mallet, a sword, or even a staff. with a body of water the cost of chakra per post is 15. not on a body of water it's 30. The water when when used with the weapon has an acidic property that will eat away at flesh and bone, also blades but slower. Blades can be made thin or thick.
Rp Sample:
Kinkaru Sat meditating above the water. Moments later, the sound of kunai and shuriken flying through the air came. in a moments notice, Kinkaru stepped up from his position grabbed the handle from his belt and forming a blade with water he knocked the ones on the path to him away. A moment later a shinobi from another village was upon him. He blocked the attacks with the other mans blade and swiftly moved to the left, holding his handle accordingly it went to full length and he slashed the shinobi's head clean off. Upon further look, the mans neck and blade were being eaten away by acid, the blade nearly a third of the way gone in the middle. His neck had only just started, but the acid clearly ate flesh a little faster. The mans body slowly sunk to the bottom of the pond as Kinkaru walked away.





Weapon needs a unique name.
The description is a little unclear. The handle remains a handle, but water forms the shape correct? Also, does this acid effect eat through anything else?


yup, i edited in this quote

Alright, a few more adjustments and you should be set.
The change of dimensions must be regulated. As it already costs chakra to maintain the weapon I am stating an additional five for every transition.
Second, the material eating property of the blade would require a triple in the chakra cost, (meaning 15 per post, thirty six if away from water) for it to balance out with the acidic property.
Third, I need to see an RP sample to see how you intend on using the blade.


can I negotiate for thirty if it costs an extra 5 for any changes after activating?


Thirty chakra points per post sounds reasonable. The five point per change is also acceptable.
Lastly, based on your RP sample I am going to deny the flesh eating aspect of the sword. While it does require a hit to be made, the acid in and of itself performs an auto hit as it can go through flesh and bone.
With that being said five chakra points when near water and twelve when away are reasonable costs for maintaining the blade.
Once your revisions are finished be sure to post the application once more without the quotes.  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 3:50 am
Name of weapon: Hoshi Saber
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kinkaru Senju
Where it was found/Who made it: Kinkaru was born with a piece of it, and it was crafted into a weapon.
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Between 1 to 6ft
Weakness: Of course being water, lightning can travel across it.
Description: The handle like a handle is for a katana is just a handle by itself, the rest has no physical shape without water. The handle can shape water into multiple types of weapons, like a large mallet, a sword, or even a staff. with a body of water the cost of chakra per post is 5. not on a body of water it's 12. Blades can be made thin or thick, as with other constructs. The handle itself is a while handle the size of a normal katana handle, as well as the shape. It normally stays inside Kinkaru's body as he is a hoshigaki and this weapon is part of him so to speak.
Rp Sample:
Kinkaru Sat meditating above the water. Moments later, the sound of kunai and shuriken flying through the air came. in a moments notice, Kinkaru stepped up from his position grabbed the handle from his belt and forming a blade with water he knocked the ones on the path to him away. A moment later a shinobi from another village was upon him. He blocked the attacks with the other mans blade and swiftly moved to the left, holding his handle accordingly it went to full length and he slashed the shinobi's head clean off. Upon further look, the mans neck and blade were being eaten away by acid, the blade nearly a third of the way gone in the middle. His neck had only just started, but the acid clearly ate flesh a little faster. The mans body slowly sunk to the bottom of the pond as Kinkaru walked away.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:07 pm
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Name of weapon: Hoshi Saber
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kinkaru Senju
Where it was found/Who made it: Kinkaru made to extend his abilities with water
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Between 1 to 6ft
Weakness: the acidic liquid can be evaporated and null by B-rank or above fire techniques. Of course being water, lightning can travel across it.
Description: The handle like a handle is for a katana is just a handle by itself, the rest has no physical shape without water. The handle can shape water into multiple types of weapons, like a large mallet, a sword, or even a staff. with a body of water the cost of chakra per post is 5. not on a body of water it's 12. Blades can be made thin or thick.
Rp Sample:
Kinkaru Sat meditating above the water. Moments later, the sound of kunai and shuriken flying through the air came. in a moments notice, Kinkaru stepped up from his position grabbed the handle from his belt and forming a blade with water he knocked the ones on the path to him away. A moment later a shinobi from another village was upon him. He blocked the attacks with the other mans blade and swiftly moved to the left, holding his handle accordingly it went to full length and he slashed the shinobi's head clean off. Upon further look, the mans neck and blade were being eaten away by acid, the blade nearly a third of the way gone in the middle. His neck had only just started, but the acid clearly ate flesh a little faster. The mans body slowly sunk to the bottom of the pond as Kinkaru walked away.

Almost finished!
Get that acidic out of the weaknesses section. The blade is not acidic.
Make sure to have at least ten sentences in your description.
Annnd don't forget to post a color in the app somewhere. Like so. purple  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 3:39 pm
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Name of weapon: Hoshi Saber
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kinkaru Senju
Where it was found/Who made it: Kinkaru made to extend his abilities with water
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Between 1 to 6ft
Weakness: the acidic liquid can be evaporated and null by B-rank or above fire techniques. Of course being water, lightning can travel across it.
Description: The handle like a handle is for a katana is just a handle by itself, the rest has no physical shape without water. The handle can shape water into multiple types of weapons, like a large mallet, a sword, or even a staff. with a body of water the cost of chakra per post is 5. not on a body of water it's 12. Blades can be made thin or thick.
Rp Sample:
Kinkaru Sat meditating above the water. Moments later, the sound of kunai and shuriken flying through the air came. in a moments notice, Kinkaru stepped up from his position grabbed the handle from his belt and forming a blade with water he knocked the ones on the path to him away. A moment later a shinobi from another village was upon him. He blocked the attacks with the other mans blade and swiftly moved to the left, holding his handle accordingly it went to full length and he slashed the shinobi's head clean off. Upon further look, the mans neck and blade were being eaten away by acid, the blade nearly a third of the way gone in the middle. His neck had only just started, but the acid clearly ate flesh a little faster. The mans body slowly sunk to the bottom of the pond as Kinkaru walked away.

Almost finished!
Get that acidic out of the weaknesses section. The blade is not acidic.
Make sure to have at least ten sentences in your description.
Annnd don't forget to post a color in the app somewhere. Like so. purple

ok i edited the information  

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 6:46 pm
]Name of weapon" Spite
Your Rank: Jounin
Who owns the weapon: Armand Tikoshi
Where it was found/Who made it: Armand had it commissioned.
Users Class: Weapons Class
The Range of the weapon: 2 Feet in length
Weakness: Poor stabbing weapon, construction makes it a prime conductor for Raiton attacks against user, saps chakra at high rates
Description: Forged with advanced techniques, Spite takes the form of a a flanged mace with a chakra-conductive weave of metal in its outer layer. For being of a thin and fairly small construction, the inner layers of the weapon are very dense. In tandem with an amount of chakra charged through the weave in the outer layer, Spite becomes a weapon made to crush through weaponry and go on to strike the enemy opponent.

With chuunin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons that are made of metals weaker than steel.

With jounin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons whose constructions are equivalent to hardened steel or less.


Rp Sample:


Colors and stuff  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 9:42 pm
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]Name of weapon" Spite
Your Rank: Jounin
Who owns the weapon: Armand Tikoshi
Where it was found/Who made it: Armand had it commissioned.
Users Class: Weapons Class
The Range of the weapon: 2 Feet in length
Weakness: Poor stabbing weapon, construction makes it a prime conductor for Raiton attacks against user, saps chakra at high rates
Description: Forged with advanced techniques, Spite takes the form of a a flanged mace with a chakra-conductive weave of metal in its outer layer. For being of a thin and fairly small construction, the inner layers of the weapon are very dense. In tandem with an amount of chakra charged through the weave in the outer layer, Spite becomes a weapon made to crush through weaponry and go on to strike the enemy opponent.

With chuunin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons that are made of metals weaker than steel.

With jounin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons whose constructions are equivalent to hardened steel or less.


Rp Sample:


Colors and stuff

Description is too short. Five more sentences at the least.
Each strike with the mace will have to cost the appropriate amount of chakra, not just those that land.(Must be noted in the description.)
However that cost is extra steep so I am going to knock down the cost on both instances. So Genin level cost for breaking steel and Chuunin for hardened steel.
If you do not have any questions, make these corrections and repost your edited application.  

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 11:59 pm
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Name of weapon: Hysteria
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kleine Heiland
Where it was found/Who made it: It is Kleine's shark sword, from being a Hoshigaki Clan member. He made it himself, initially being developed inside of his own mouth.
Users Class: Weapon Specialist
The Range of the weapon: 4 feet
Weakness: If it is separated from Kleine for longer than 5 posts, he will grow weakened. If longer than 10 posts, he will die. However it can be submerged into and pulled from his flesh at will, without harming him whatsoever.
Description: Hysteria is a powerful blade. Like all Hoshigaki weapons, it is extremely durable, almost impossible to destroy. It feels extremely jagged and is therefore incredibly painful, as being sliced by it is a feeling similar to having your flesh ripped into by a shark's jaw. It has no special properties but one: within five hundred feet of it, Kleine's techniques can ignore any water that HE HIMSELF created and pass through as if it were air. This makes him extremely efficient in underwater battles.

Other than that, it's simply a very sturdy and strong blade that can quite easily rend flesh and bone.

Note: If the blade is destroyed it does not count as being separated, as Kleine can simply re-make it inside of his body. It must be taken away from him forcefully in order to be considered separated. It has a mind of its own so it will try furiously to return to its master. It cannot be forcefully pulled via magnetism or something of the sort; not even Kaguya can manipulate it, despite being bone. It is difficult to take away, the only real method being by disarming Kleine or simply taking it via brute strength.
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 8:46 am
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]Name of weapon" Spite
Your Rank: Jounin
Who owns the weapon: Armand Tikoshi
Where it was found/Who made it: Armand had it commissioned.
Users Class: Weapons Class
The Range of the weapon: 2 Feet in length
Weakness: Poor stabbing weapon, construction makes it a prime conductor for Raiton attacks against user, saps chakra at high rates
Description: Forged with advanced techniques, Spite takes the form of a a flanged mace with a chakra-conductive weave of metal in its outer layer. For being of a thin and fairly small construction, the inner layers of the weapon are very dense. In tandem with an amount of chakra charged through the weave in the outer layer, Spite becomes a weapon made to crush through weaponry and go on to strike the enemy opponent.

With chuunin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons that are made of metals weaker than steel.

With jounin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons whose constructions are equivalent to hardened steel or less.


Rp Sample:


Colors and stuff

Description is too short. Five more sentences at the least.
Each strike with the mace will have to cost the appropriate amount of chakra, not just those that land.(Must be noted in the description.)
However that cost is extra steep so I am going to knock down the cost on both instances. So Genin level cost for breaking steel and Chuunin for hardened steel.
If you do not have any questions, make these corrections and repost your edited application.









]Name of weapon" Spite
Your Rank: Jounin
Who owns the weapon: Armand Tikoshi
Where it was found/Who made it: Armand had it commissioned.
Users Class: Weapons Class
The Range of the weapon: 2 Feet in length
Weakness: Poor stabbing weapon, construction makes it a prime conductor for Raiton attacks against user, saps chakra at high rates
Description: As Armand noticed his possible struggles against other skilled weapons users, he decided he needed a tool to take their assets away from them. The mace was commissioned by one of Armand's invested shinobi R&D corporations (that as of now, has no knowledge of his own doing in them). Forged with advanced techniques, Spite takes the form of a a flanged mace with a chakra-conductive weave of metal in its outer layer. For being of a thin and fairly small construction, the inner layers of the weapon are very dense. In tandem with an amount of chakra charged through the weave in the outer layer, Spite becomes a weapon made to crush through weaponry and go on to strike the enemy opponent. While traditional maces are heavy and cumbersome, Spite's usage of different material layers makes it as easy to swing as a slightly heavier shortsword.

With genin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons that are made of metals weaker than steel.

With chuunin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons whose constructions are equivalent to hardened steel or less.

This happens per strike on the choice of the user, regardless if that strike lands or not. Without being charged with chakra, Spite becomes just a regular, albeit lighter, mace.


Rp Sample:


Colors and stuff  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 8:51 am
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Name of weapon: Hysteria
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kleine Heiland
Where it was found/Who made it: It is Kleine's shark sword, from being a Hoshigaki Clan member. He made it himself, initially being developed inside of his own mouth.
Users Class: Weapon Specialist
The Range of the weapon: 4 feet
Weakness: If it is separated from Kleine for longer than 5 posts, he will grow weakened. If longer than 10 posts, he will die. However it can be submerged into and pulled from his flesh at will, without harming him whatsoever.
Description: Hysteria is a powerful blade. Like all Hoshigaki weapons, it is extremely durable, almost impossible to destroy. It feels extremely jagged and is therefore incredibly painful, as being sliced by it is a feeling similar to having your flesh ripped into by a shark's jaw. It has no special properties but one: within five hundred feet of it, Kleine's techniques can ignore any water that HE HIMSELF created and pass through as if it were air. This makes him extremely efficient in underwater battles.

Other than that, it's simply a very sturdy and strong blade that can quite easily rend flesh and bone.

Note: If the blade is destroyed it does not count as being separated, as Kleine can simply re-make it inside of his body. It must be taken away from him forcefully in order to be considered separated. It has a mind of its own so it will try furiously to return to its master. It cannot be forcefully pulled via magnetism or something of the sort; not even Kaguya can manipulate it, despite being bone. It is difficult to take away, the only real method being by disarming Kleine or simply taking it via brute strength.


Dis ere blade is passed.

Wouldn't make sense for a kaguya to manipulate bones other than their own and bone isn't magnetic to begin with lol. Unless another has a problem, it shall be approved.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 9:10 am
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]Name of weapon" Spite
Your Rank: Jounin
Who owns the weapon: Armand Tikoshi
Where it was found/Who made it: Armand had it commissioned.
Users Class: Weapons Class
The Range of the weapon: 2 Feet in length
Weakness: Poor stabbing weapon, construction makes it a prime conductor for Raiton attacks against user, saps chakra at high rates
Description: Forged with advanced techniques, Spite takes the form of a a flanged mace with a chakra-conductive weave of metal in its outer layer. For being of a thin and fairly small construction, the inner layers of the weapon are very dense. In tandem with an amount of chakra charged through the weave in the outer layer, Spite becomes a weapon made to crush through weaponry and go on to strike the enemy opponent.

With chuunin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons that are made of metals weaker than steel.

With jounin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons whose constructions are equivalent to hardened steel or less.


Rp Sample:


Colors and stuff

Description is too short. Five more sentences at the least.
Each strike with the mace will have to cost the appropriate amount of chakra, not just those that land.(Must be noted in the description.)
However that cost is extra steep so I am going to knock down the cost on both instances. So Genin level cost for breaking steel and Chuunin for hardened steel.
If you do not have any questions, make these corrections and repost your edited application.









]Name of weapon" Spite
Your Rank: Jounin
Who owns the weapon: Armand Tikoshi
Where it was found/Who made it: Armand had it commissioned.
Users Class: Weapons Class
The Range of the weapon: 2 Feet in length
Weakness: Poor stabbing weapon, construction makes it a prime conductor for Raiton attacks against user, saps chakra at high rates
Description: As Armand noticed his possible struggles against other skilled weapons users, he decided he needed a tool to take their assets away from them. The mace was commissioned by one of Armand's invested shinobi R&D corporations (that as of now, has no knowledge of his own doing in them). Forged with advanced techniques, Spite takes the form of a a flanged mace with a chakra-conductive weave of metal in its outer layer. For being of a thin and fairly small construction, the inner layers of the weapon are very dense. In tandem with an amount of chakra charged through the weave in the outer layer, Spite becomes a weapon made to crush through weaponry and go on to strike the enemy opponent. While traditional maces are heavy and cumbersome, Spite's usage of different material layers makes it as easy to swing as a slightly heavier shortsword.

With genin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons that are made of metals weaker than steel.

With chuunin-level chakra, the mace is able to break weapons whose constructions are equivalent to hardened steel or less.

This happens per strike on the choice of the user, regardless if that strike lands or not. Without being charged with chakra, Spite becomes just a regular, albeit lighter, mace.


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 2:19 pm
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Name of weapon: Hoshi Saber
Your Rank: Chuunin
Who owns the weapon: Kinkaru Senju
Where it was found/Who made it: Kinkaru was born with a piece of it, and it was crafted into a weapon.
Users Class: Ninjutsu
The Range of the weapon: Between 1 to 6ft
Weakness: Of course being water, lightning can travel across it.
Description: The handle like a handle is for a katana is just a handle by itself, the rest has no physical shape without water. The handle can shape water into multiple types of weapons, like a large mallet, a sword, or even a staff. with a body of water the cost of chakra per post is 5. not on a body of water it's 12. Blades can be made thin or thick, as with other constructs. The handle itself is a while handle the size of a normal katana handle, as well as the shape. It normally stays inside Kinkaru's body as he is a hoshigaki and this weapon is part of him so to speak.
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Kinkaru Sat meditating above the water. Moments later, the sound of kunai and shuriken flying through the air came. in a moments notice, Kinkaru stepped up from his position grabbed the handle from his belt and forming a blade with water he knocked the ones on the path to him away. A moment later a shinobi from another village was upon him. He blocked the attacks with the other mans blade and swiftly moved to the left, holding his handle accordingly it went to full length and he slashed the shinobi's head clean off. Upon further look, the mans neck and blade were being eaten away by acid, the blade nearly a third of the way gone in the middle. His neck had only just started, but the acid clearly ate flesh a little faster. The mans body slowly sunk to the bottom of the pond as Kinkaru walked away.
 
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