I wrote this! tell me what you think!

[XgreenXamberX]

its very good =) well done  

[Plebian]

Its good, but is it a poem because if it is, then some lines have too many sillables. Try to use the same amount on each line so that its got more of a rythim.

((sp?))  

[Gambino Statue]

On first reading I though 'Cliche emo much?'
But on review it is actually quite a good poem.