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99 Words: Schoolyard Horror

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Fuzzy Handcuffs

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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:07 am


	I've heard of stories in poetic form, but this is a truly poetic story. It wrenches the heart, but in a beautiful way. I presume you got an A? surprised

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 8:58 am


	I rather enjoyed reading that! it really shows it from the others perspective and I love the words you used. Poor kid though... poor kid...

VirginSnake

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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 3:47 pm

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 4:35 pm


	....I liked it a lot. I can't remember if I commented on it or not, so I'm just saying. it's sad, though. crying

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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:17 pm


	I can just imagine the picture to go with this, a boy on the ground, blood splattered about, with a pool of it slowly pouring from his head. It would be a filthy image, but it would be perfect for that story... That makes me want to write something less than a hundred words...

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