Like I said I would, I have come back to comment on your piece.
Because I am ADD, you have to catch me fast.
And with the opening being poetry,
and having it flow so easily,
Its almost I could hear the bard telling his tale
frail hands upon a knolled staff.
Then telling the tale in a perspective that was easy to follow,
and just chilling, like a real ghost tale.
But the ending..
You took me to the other side of the mirror with that one.
Totally unexpected, and again the flow of the poem
was perfect and flowed as smooth ink.
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