Letter from the Molested Heart

[Tak-Jak]

Okays.
Two 'k's for me and one for thy new comer.

 

[KirbyVictorious]

Sounds good!

Besides, the real way to spell it anyway is ta-kun.

But takkun looks cooler. ^^  

[Tak-Jak]

And we always go for the cool factor.
cool

 

[KirbyVictorious]

Because we BREATHE cool. dramallama  

[Tak-Jak]

We are the very essence of cool.
burning_eyes

 

[KirbyVictorious]

Let no man stand in our way, or we'll taser them!

wink  

[Tak-Jak]

Then kick them in the side once they fall and laugh maniacally
pirate

 

[KirbyVictorious]

Nyeeee 4laugh  

[Voxxx]

xp If I wasn't laughing from scrolling down the page, this would be a very solemn praise-comment, but I am, so all I can manage is a chuckle, and a
*puts on serious face*

OHMYSWEETSWEDISHFISH. 3nodding

No, really. I loved it. Beautiful.  

[Xahmen]

Good job.
I've read it already but...  

[Tak-Jak]

Voxx...

Swedish Fish Rock!
Thanks Zahmen..
I think.

 

[Kurai_kotori]

Im not so sure about tazering people and kicking them in the side but sadism aside, i thought it was a very beautifully morbid peice of work. The actions seemed well inspired by obsession and deep feelings of passion. I think i sat there for about ten more minutes re-reading it. It is beautiful. My favorite line has to be "your body is incense of the darkest kind." If you wanted to, you could take this so much deeper. Even something as simple as changing some of the words, maybe give it that more sudo sophisticated feel, but i loved it.



sorry if it was a jumble. Excellent work! biggrin  

[NovaKing]

Kurai_kotori

Im not so sure about tazering people and kicking them in the side but sadism aside, i thought it was a very beautifully morbid peice of work. The actions seemed well inspired by obsession and deep feelings of passion. I think i sat there for about ten more minutes re-reading it. It is beautiful. My favorite line has to be "your body is incense of the darkest kind." If you wanted to, you could take this so much deeper. Even something as simple as changing some of the words, maybe give it that more sudo sophisticated feel, but i loved it.



sorry if it was a jumble. Excellent work! biggrin

???? Im sorry but what exactly are you reffering to as a "jumble"? oh, and i dont think ive ever seen you around here. Are you new? or have you just been idle like so many others here?  

[Tak-Jak]

Thanks so much Kurai_kotori. I shall look into improving this piece.
Though I am glad you enjoyed it as is.

And King.
He has been here.
Popping up every so often.
Just like you.

 

[NovaKing]

Tak-Jak

Thanks so much Kurai_kotori. I shall look into improving this piece.
Though I am glad you enjoyed it as is.

And King.
He has been here.
Popping up every so often.
Just like you.

ahh my mistake ^_^ sorry kurai