hanakaizoku
kaze ichiru
um...i really like the second picture. I don't see anything wrong with it.
first pic: ... I don't think the body is in the right position. sorry...i didn't ask for permission before i edited it... but i don't think that i can explain... here... i hope it helped
first pic: ... I don't think the body is in the right position. sorry...i didn't ask for permission before i edited it... but i don't think that i can explain... here... i hope it helped
The thing is, I'm going for a sort of pose thing like he's leaning on his arm and his shoulder is close to or touching his ear. Like if he were bending down and cocking his head a bit. o_o; Don't know if that makes sense. So I was trying for something a bit different than the drawover, but I guess it's not obvious, which means something's wrong still. D:
so... are you trying to make him lean on his shoulder, hand, or elbow? while standing? or crouching over?^^