Yeah. Out on a limb here. Content Warning.

[CHOKETRENDKILL]

...
Damnit.
Why do I fail at writing?
[extreme envy]


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This isn't about me, good job.
^^
I'm glad I checked it out, of course, it was hours after you told me, but, hey, we all can't be perfect.
:]


Very good, I need to improve now...
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[Gambino Statue]

Rellik San

Isel

Rellik San

It was all good, until I got to the chap... then I just burst out laughing, and suddenly had a mental image of english bankers discussing this over tea whilst browsing the financial times.

But aside from that, again another great song, when are you touring?

I don't know when we're touring. We're working out a big practice date over the impending Spring Break, two weeks from now.

And hell, what's good metal without a few laughs on the side?

Thats true, get mired in seriousness and you end up like Gerard and Mikey Way... and no one wants that.

Why do you hate Gerard Way so much?

Wait, let me re-phrase that..

Why do you pick on Gerard Way so much when there are equally, and more stupid popular musicians?  

[Rellik San]

xLIZA

Rellik San

Isel

Rellik San

It was all good, until I got to the chap... then I just burst out laughing, and suddenly had a mental image of english bankers discussing this over tea whilst browsing the financial times.

But aside from that, again another great song, when are you touring?

I don't know when we're touring. We're working out a big practice date over the impending Spring Break, two weeks from now.

And hell, what's good metal without a few laughs on the side?

Thats true, get mired in seriousness and you end up like Gerard and Mikey Way... and no one wants that.

Why do you hate Gerard Way so much?

Wait, let me re-phrase that..

Why do you pick on Gerard Way so much when there are equally, and more stupid popular musicians?

Because Gerard Way is a t**t, who made me waste beer with his arrogance.  

[halfmike]

I feel dirty from reading all three songs, like i just ate some rust or something. (eww) .  

[-Isel-]

halfmike

I feel dirty from reading all three songs, like i just ate some rust or something. (eww) .

That's one of the feelings you should feel- disgust.  

[Rellik San]

Isel

halfmike

I feel dirty from reading all three songs, like i just ate some rust or something. (eww) .

That's one of the feelings you should feel- disgust.

Unless you desensatized to that type of content like me, in which case you judge subjectively and have a slight chuckle at words like 'chap'.  

[-Isel-]

Rellik San

Isel

halfmike

I feel dirty from reading all three songs, like i just ate some rust or something. (eww) .

That's one of the feelings you should feel- disgust.

Unless you desensatized to that type of content like me, in which case you judge subjectively and have a slight chuckle at words like 'chap'.

Exactly.

I'm considering entering into a Battle of the Bands contest- how does the crowd judge in those? Does stage presence count?  

[Rellik San]

Isel

Rellik San

Isel

halfmike

I feel dirty from reading all three songs, like i just ate some rust or something. (eww) .

That's one of the feelings you should feel- disgust.

Unless you desensatized to that type of content like me, in which case you judge subjectively and have a slight chuckle at words like 'chap'.

Exactly.

I'm considering entering into a Battle of the Bands contest- how does the crowd judge in those? Does stage presence count?

Yeah, I imagine it would, whats a good band with a boring front man, why do you think people only like Weezer's singles?  

[-Isel-]

Rellik San

Isel

Rellik San

Isel

halfmike

I feel dirty from reading all three songs, like i just ate some rust or something. (eww) .

That's one of the feelings you should feel- disgust.

Unless you desensatized to that type of content like me, in which case you judge subjectively and have a slight chuckle at words like 'chap'.

Exactly.

I'm considering entering into a Battle of the Bands contest- how does the crowd judge in those? Does stage presence count?

Yeah, I imagine it would, whats a good band with a boring front man, why do you think people only like Weezer's singles?

Yeah... that is true. Most of my friends prefer judging by sound only, nothing else.

Oh, and my bassist likes the lyrics to "No", but not "Violated". I forgot his opinion on "felt again", though...  

[-Isel-]

Oh. New song. Meant to be a short one.

"Allegiance"

it’s a war folks must fight
dealing with cliques in respect
to armies of the battle
an individual arises
one thing should topple the forces
reichs loyal
pledging to the channel M
one must be the stereotype
to fight another
education is the least of the problem
societal bondage is what we
submit ourselves to
just because we know we…
well
we’re safer in torture than out of it.  

[Rellik San]

Isel

Oh. New song. Meant to be a short one.

"Allegiance"

it’s a war folks must fight
dealing with cliques in respect
to armies of the battle
an individual arises
one thing should topple the forces
reichs loyal
pledging to the channel M
one must be the stereotype
to fight another
education is the least of the problem
societal bondage is what we
submit ourselves to
just because we know we…
well
we’re safer in torture than out of it.

That reminds me of another song in context, Still Spinning Shrapnel. smile Good song though nice interesting flow... though why did you mention manchesters local TV network? :S  

[-Isel-]

Rellik San

Isel

Oh. New song. Meant to be a short one.

"Allegiance"

it’s a war folks must fight
dealing with cliques in respect
to armies of the battle
an individual arises
one thing should topple the forces
reichs loyal
pledging to the channel M
one must be the stereotype
to fight another
education is the least of the problem
societal bondage is what we
submit ourselves to
just because we know we…
well
we’re safer in torture than out of it.

That reminds me of another song in context, Still Spinning Shrapnel. smile Good song though nice interesting flow... though why did you mention manchesters local TV network? :S

At the time that I wrote it, it was a poetry assignment for school- it was a dig on high school. It used to say "Channel MTV".  

[halfmike]

I like the rusy dirty ones betetr, the first two because I just like the meter more... I wish I wrote like that but I/m still in the pop punk, immature song-writing phase... stare  

[CHOKETRENDKILL]

You are still fantastic.

 

[-Isel-]

"On Ice"

Strike the face at a downcast angle
A worthless dog with a wounded ankle
Euthanasia may kill my child
The salt of tears and sweat is mild

A curse on all that’s brought a blush to my face
An angry retort when I need my space
Contact is something that always escapes me
I’d rather just love the vermin who rapes me

Well, I’ve got a ring and a cross to bear
A slightly torn shirt and a chip to wear
On a deformed shoulder
And I’m sitting on an angry chair
Thinking about why all is fair (in love and war)
When the former is colder

A burn and a lashing to save some dignity
The only property not worthy of indemnity
A red ball and strap to choke me is solid
When one’s true love stings consider it squalid

Well, I’ve got a sting and some burnt-out flair
A torn intestine and some words to spare
Off a new-born sharp tongue
And I’m sitting with a crown of thorns
Wondering which of you has horns
And I’d die to be always young

If I pass out will this go on sale?
To never ******** and to die is to fail
Now I’m the one full of s**t
I wish that you’d… take my hit.