cutting poem

[A Kiss Goodbye]

This isn't even a poem. This is a choppy narrative of something thta happened in a span of five minutes one day.  

[A Kiss Goodbye]

EmoDork93

I don't really CARE if it's not a poem.
I did everything I wrote in there.
And Your wrong.
LOTS of people in write poety.
They just dont want to show.
Oh..one question.
WHY do you think it's not poetry?

This is a poetry and art forum, you're supposed to post poetry and art.

Also, it doesn't matter whether or not you did everything in there. That doesn't make the poem any better.

Also, arm warmers make me sad.