Poetry

[Nimir-ra Khyber]

when u see this girl and she's on her knees, sayin, cryin, beggin please, you wanna help her so bad, but u dont know wut to do, and she's so sad, you wanna giver her your hand, but you pull away quick, cuz her dark sadness is making you sick

you didnt help her,and now she's gone, oh the things you coulda done, you feel so wrog.how does it feel to have her blood on your hands? you let it slip away like the sands, of time ,it wouldnt take much, to help her live, its really not that much, you would have to give.

now you on your knees, sayin, crying, begging please, they wanna help you so bad, but they dont know what to do and your so sad. they try to give you thier hand,but they pull away quick, dont you know your dark sadness, is making them sick?

now you know how she felt, and why she wanted to go, she was even more afraid, to let it show, standing away from the crowd, in her own safe world, never feeling proud, of how beautiful she really was, she thought she'd be ok, she really did, but now she's gone, forgotten forever......  

[Lost Squirrel]

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[Cataclysm_Child17]

Is it just me, or is love poetry really irritating?  

[Lost Squirrel]

Cataclysm_Child17

Is it just me, or is love poetry really irritating?

depends. If you're in love then it makes you think that you are reading beautiful poety about your loved one.
If not, it sucks and it only reminds you of your own lonelyness. rolleyes  

[anya_the_exdeman]

LordYakuza

anya_the_exdeman

I joined the army
they watched barny.
I slap the dean
with a bean
i left it because they were horny .

gonk Should I be scared because thats how I feel sweatdrop

if you want to be lol  

[fun_lover]

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[kingcorrupted]

I've cried in pain, agony, and in blame. I never cried in shame because I am not ashamed at how I live, because I live I never truly ever doubted how I live, because even masters have to learn, to live and not worry of how it will turn out.  

[Insanity_Luvs_Me]

John Obake

Insanity_Luvs_Me

John Obake

Flipping out
Losing clout
Falling down
Turned around
And lost from you
Nothing to do
But pray you return
Or my heart shall burn

what is clout and how do you less it oh one who can count to 9 on the keyboard (different thread) hehehehe

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
Skilled aren't I.......
Clout is like the amount of presence or control you have of other. losing it would mean no one listens to you anymore.

*claps for you* yes you are talented and thank you I thought you had made a mistake or something lol  

[Oborokun]

Uneasy Wavering

An uneasy wavering...
You look around.
What goes on?
Lost and alone...
You never really know...
An uneasy wavering...

An uneasy wavering...
That world shaking...
Knocking you around.
You feel abused and tossed about,
Only to look for something worse...

An uneasy wavering...
Rupturing hill all around.
Life, nothing but ups and downs...
Nowhere clear to go,
You just want someone to hold...
An uneasy wavering...

An uneasy wavering...
Your quest for peace,
You stumble in a mix...
failure and success...
One comes your way...
An uneasy wavering...

 

[Nathaniel Arkchion]

umm i dont know if u can call this poetry if u can please let me know ok ty, umm its part of the story im remaking 4 my char soddius thats my sig mrgreen

DEATH COMES AS CHAOS COMES. AND CHAOS COMES EVERDAY. SO THIS LAND TIS LAND OF CHAOS. SO DEATH IS THROUGHTOUT THE LAND . THIS IS THE CHAOS REGION AS IS DEATHS DOMAIN.
MAY DEATH BEFALL US ALL.


umm well thats it let me know what u think of it sweatdrop thanks  

[[original.ariwood]]

My Only Self
by Ari

You speak like I am nothing.
That my life is one big mess.
Am I really that weak?
Am I really that helpless?
~
Your voice is like a blade.
You push me down farther than ever.
You're so stupid.
Did you really think you'd keep me down forever?
~
I know I'm better.
I'm now the stronger fighter.
You think I'll pity you now!
My future is brighter.
~
I am the master.
I'll make you bleed until you die.
I'm not ugly, you are!
I'll never again have to cry.
~
You're not so tough.
You are where you belong,
a place filled with lonliness.
I was never wrong.
~
I did'nt need you or anyone else.
I'm not just another nobody on the shelf.
~
I will always be cheering for me.
Cheering for me, my only self.

 

[Nathaniel Arkchion]

it would b nice if u ppl would let me know what u think of my post evil  

[[original.ariwood]]

soddius

it would b nice if u ppl would let me know what u think of my post evil

I think it was very good.
Keep writing.
It be cool if you posted another poem on here.
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I'de really like to read it.
P.S. I would like to read everyones poems, if they have more.
Everyone so far has caught my attention.

 

[lee-kyra]

Mirror

On the other side lays what as past , on this side remains a shell
Staring into memory's eyes I face my old demise ,
Remembering what was seeing what is.

Looking at the little girl standing befor the shell with her bloody wrist,
Her eyes misty with anger , her cheeks stained with bitter sweet tears,
How is she now diffrent ,why as the world changed in my eyes.

That little girl who believed the worl was to good for her ,
This shell knowing the world is rotten to it deepest ,
No hopes , no expactation for this sociaty.

Those young eyes screaming for help that she never found ,
Doctors patch up her wrist but the shell keeps the scar,
Never will forget ,vengence never will be deemed

The little girl dissapears returning to a dark corner of the shell's memory
My memory , I turn to see no light , no hope and walk on
Deep into the soiled sociaty , deep into my broken life  

[John Obake]

I'd like to apoligise ot all whose poetry I haven't reviewed. Busy. Nice one Lee-Kyra.