Konoha's Public Park

[Detachi]

Detachi did as Byakuga had instructed,Using some chakra,"Goukakyuu No Jutsu!" He tried to breathe fire, but all he did was burp  

[teddy_byakuga]

"woooh dude what did you eat" does it focues his chakra into his chest and then does the hand signs and lets the chakra go to his mouth and says "Goukakyuu No Jutsu " and a fire ball come out  

[Detachi]

"Oh", says detachi, He focuses his chakra and forms the handsign, "Goukakyuu No Jutsu!" a puff of smoke comes out of his mouth instead of fire though...

But he tried again," Goukakyuu No Jutsu!" He almost got it but, he only managed an even bigger cloud of smoke,"I guess im getting close."  

[teddy_byakuga]

"good job" "we are gettin strong"  

[Detachi]

"Goukakyuu No Jutsu!" He tries yet again, A small bit of fire, the size of the first smoke cloud comes out. "Almost..."  

[teddy_byakuga]

"dang almost there and maybe when we finish we can battle"  

[Detachi]

"He focuses his chakra, again, forms the hand sign and fire and smoke appear but not enough..."i'll try one more time!"  

[teddy_byakuga]

"one more and make sure you get it .. it is pretty hard to master it"  

[Detachi]

Forms the handsign,"Goukakyuu No Jutsu!" and fails "darn!"
He thought about giving up but something inside him wouldn't let him,

Detachi thinks about the hard time it was to become genin and the encouraged him to try again, He forms the handsign using his last bit of chakra and shouts "Goukakyuu No Jutsu!!!", As he says this, Huge balls of fire the size of basketballs go flying every where!!!"Watch out byakuga!" he shouts as a fire ball goes flying towards him...  

[teddy_byakuga]

ducks and covers "dang you got it but almost kill me"  

[Detachi]

"Sorry!" Detachi runs up to him."Are you okay?"  

[teddy_byakuga]

"yea"catching his breatj  

[Detachi]

((gotta go put that jutsu on my list i'll be back))  

[Detachi]

"Hey byakuga, you want to stay at my place i've got a few extra rooms."
Detachi sits down on a log.  

[teddy_byakuga]

"sure" is still laying