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 Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:45 pm
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TotalDarkness13 HouseMDFan25 TotalDarkness13 HouseMDFan25 TotalDarkness13 HouseMDFan25 I'm having trouble writting mine too...I have 2 pages wrote and I am stuck gonk
Then once you get the major things written down, work on the stuff in between. That's a good idea, but I dont know any major things yet gonk I just wing it, as it comes to me... 0.o my problem is I have to base my fanfiction off of a 30 second clip gonk Well, so far, I have the setting....I made up some stuff about him being a skilled detective. (which is probably why he would eventually get involved with the Men in Black) But we just closed down shop, and now we're going out to grab a bite to eat after work. Just as friends... but him asking was alittle awkward though, lol.
I have to go, I'm going to watch Michael's Burial and it starts at 9.
Byez~
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:48 pm
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TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 My whole family's nosey. I got used to avoiding to write during the day. I'm more adapted to the night now. Hehe. Yeah, I know what you mean.
After all, it's Friday (3 day weekend! yeah!) and I usually stay up to like 2 am or close to that. Imma work really hard on my fanfic. I hope all of ours come out great.
My sis (Invisible BloodyKitty) can always read what I have done and give me her thoughts and I can do the same for hers so I hope my turns out okay. I want mine to be a chapter story. It only seems logical to do that.
Ohh I thought you two had some kind of relation, Because ur her first friend on her profile and yew both write in small colored fonts |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:23 pm
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HouseMDFan25 TotalDarkness13 HouseMDFan25 TotalDarkness13 HouseMDFan25 That's a good idea, but I dont know any major things yet gonk I just wing it, as it comes to me... 0.o my problem is I have to base my fanfiction off of a 30 second clip gonk Well, so far, I have the setting....I made up some stuff about him being a skilled detective. (which is probably why he would eventually get involved with the Men in Black) But we just closed down shop, and now we're going out to grab a bite to eat after work. Just as friends... but him asking was alittle awkward though, lol.
I have to go, I'm going to watch Michael's Burial and it starts at 9.
Byez~kk cya
I love your siggy. Michael's all dark and sexy. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:24 pm
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Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 My whole family's nosey. I got used to avoiding to write during the day. I'm more adapted to the night now. Hehe. Yeah, I know what you mean.
After all, it's Friday (3 day weekend! yeah!) and I usually stay up to like 2 am or close to that. Imma work really hard on my fanfic. I hope all of ours come out great.
My sis (Invisible BloodyKitty) can always read what I have done and give me her thoughts and I can do the same for hers so I hope my turns out okay. I want mine to be a chapter story. It only seems logical to do that. Ohh I thought you two had some kind of relation, Because ur her first friend on her profile and yew both write in small colored fonts |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:08 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:35 pm
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TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 I'll probably start writing in my fic tonight....or I could be so distracted while watching the special on Michael's burial I may have to start tomorrow.
After all, it's Friday (3 day weekend! yeah!) and I usually stay up to like 2 am or close to that. Imma work really hard on my fanfic. I hope all of ours come out great.
My sis (Invisible BloodyKitty) can always read what I have done and give me her thoughts and I can do the same for hers so I hope my turns out okay. I want mine to be a chapter story. It only seems logical to do that. Ohh I thought you two had some kind of relation, Because ur her first friend on her profile and yew both write in small colored fonts
Thats awesome, I wish I had a twin.
You could use that in your fanfic if you wanted to..Like you both wanted Michael but he thought that you both were 1 person lol, Idk. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:47 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:48 pm
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Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 Cra_zeey854 TotalDarkness13 I'll probably start writing in my fic tonight....or I could be so distracted while watching the special on Michael's burial I may have to start tomorrow.
After all, it's Friday (3 day weekend! yeah!) and I usually stay up to like 2 am or close to that. Imma work really hard on my fanfic. I hope all of ours come out great.
My sis (Invisible BloodyKitty) can always read what I have done and give me her thoughts and I can do the same for hers so I hope my turns out okay. I want mine to be a chapter story. It only seems logical to do that. Ohh I thought you two had some kind of relation, Because ur her first friend on her profile and yew both write in small colored fonts Thats awesome, I wish I had a twin. You could use that in your fanfic if you wanted to..Like you both wanted Michael but he thought that you both were 1 person lol, Idk. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:30 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:40 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:44 pm
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Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 I am still on my writers block gonk Me too.. I just started practicing my drawing.
what are you drawing? |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:44 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:49 pm
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ChunChe I've got the beginning down! Mike (as I refer to him in the story; the edgier nickname goes better with his character's personality) ultimately gets rejected by the girl he chases after and decides to call it a night. Naturally, he dances his way down the street. Once he's in front of his apartment building, he continues dancing and then catches my (character's) eye. They have a brief conversation and he finds himself somewhat intrigued by her, thus leavng room for more to happen the next day. I know where I want the story to end up (a "morning after" kind of thing wink ), but getting there is a bit challenging. I don't want things to move too fast, but I don't want to drag out every minute detail. I'm also having a dilemma choosing Mike's occupation; it's a tie between restaurant worker and mechanic. I'm edging towards restaurant worker; it would be fun to include a scene where they cook together, which could lead to something more. Could you offer any insight??
Sounds good so far.
but just because he is a mechanic, doesnt mean he can't cook.
It would be cool if you could do both. smile
I would drag it out some by talking alittle more, then dating (carnival, restraunt,fourth of july fireworks etc). Then get around to the cooking scene smile
but that is my oppinion. smile |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:55 pm
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HouseMDFan25 ChunChe I've got the beginning down! Mike (as I refer to him in the story; the edgier nickname goes better with his character's personality) ultimately gets rejected by the girl he chases after and decides to call it a night. Naturally, he dances his way down the street. Once he's in front of his apartment building, he continues dancing and then catches my (character's) eye. They have a brief conversation and he finds himself somewhat intrigued by her, thus leavng room for more to happen the next day. I know where I want the story to end up (a "morning after" kind of thing wink ), but getting there is a bit challenging. I don't want things to move too fast, but I don't want to drag out every minute detail. I'm also having a dilemma choosing Mike's occupation; it's a tie between restaurant worker and mechanic. I'm edging towards restaurant worker; it would be fun to include a scene where they cook together, which could lead to something more. Could you offer any insight?? Sounds good so far. but just because he is a mechanic, doesnt mean he can't cook. It would be cool if you could do both. smile I would drag it out some by talking alittle more, then dating (carnival, restraunt,fourth of july fireworks etc). Then get around to the cooking scene smile but that is my oppinion. smile
...Oh, how true! Yeah, I'll make my character the cooking "expert" and have her challenge him.
A date @ a carnival seems fun and it totally fits with the real Michael Jackson considering that he loved carnivals-and, he did have one as a backyard.
Thanks for the idea! |
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