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 Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:51 pm
I just buy anything that looks good to me out of the RIG's.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:54 pm
WylrPnufh Lady Psycho Sexy J of The Wind Lady Psycho Sexy The Rawk Hawk Lady Psycho Sexy  Dammit, everything of mine has fallen. Guess I'm bailing on this hoard. ******** you, Gaia. stressed
 Everything? Yeah, I've lost over 2.5 million thanks to rereleases. Sigh. 
D: So sorry, lovely... Maybe itll get better? Eh, you win some, you lose some. Provided Hash is good at this RIG, I'll make some of it up, I hope. sad
Hash has ridiculously good luck with the RIGs. I lose an EI every time one comes out. Get him to play them for you. XD
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:05 pm
Heh. I don't have ANY luck with them, so I don't buy them anymore.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:08 pm
I never played them in the beginning, because I heard horror stories about people losing all their money. D:
But it turned out allright last RIG.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:18 pm
Lady Psycho Sexy I never played them in the beginning, because I heard horror stories about people losing all their money. D:
But it turned out allright last RIG.
Good for you! The best item I got from it was, if I remember well, was a 20k item. T-T
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:26 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:26 pm
The Rawk Hawk Lady Psycho Sexy I never played them in the beginning, because I heard horror stories about people losing all their money. D:
But it turned out allright last RIG.
Good for you! The best item I got from it was, if I remember well, was a 20k item. T-T We got a 2.5m item. surprised Just gotta keep trying.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:34 pm
Nope, I don't want to lose all my Gold.
I stopped trying/believing in the RIGs; I only buy the items coming from them.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:35 pm
PROOFREAD POWER!
Quote: "Now, Maxwell," his father had brought him down for a talk one day, and sat him upon his knee, "When you grow older, you'll need to find a young lady to be your queen." Max was at the age where girls were icky and had cooties, so he screwed up his face and cried out "Eww!" With this, his father let out a hearty chuckle. "Oh Maxwell, when you grow up, you'll see women in a different light."
Every time a different character speaks, you have to begin a new paragraph.
Fifteen. xp
Quote: Maxwell walked across the courtyard in the twilight light, a single rose in his hand. Plodding through the ankle-deep layer of snow, he had built up the courage to confess his love to her. He had been planning for some time.
This is kinda repetitive. I would suggest something like this.
Quote: Plodding across the snowy, twilit courtyard with a single rose in his hand, Maxwell anticipated the moment just within arm's reach - the moment he would finally confess his love.
Quote: The rose that was meant for Kathleene flew straight up in the air, then gently spun down like a delicate ballerina performing at the height of her career. She took her bow as she gracefully landed on the ground.
The conclusion kind of made me scratch my head - I think Giovanni needs a little more motive for reacting so harshly. Perhaps the Prince could hit him a few more times, get him really angry?
Otherwise, not bad at all. ^^'
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:38 pm
Lady Psycho Sexy PROOFREAD POWER!
Quote: "Now, Maxwell," his father had brought him down for a talk one day, and sat him upon his knee, "When you grow older, you'll need to find a young lady to be your queen." Max was at the age where girls were icky and had cooties, so he screwed up his face and cried out "Eww!" With this, his father let out a hearty chuckle. "Oh Maxwell, when you grow up, you'll see women in a different light."
Every time a different character speaks, you have to begin a new paragraph.
Fifteen. xp
Quote: Maxwell walked across the courtyard in the twilight light, a single rose in his hand. Plodding through the ankle-deep layer of snow, he had built up the courage to confess his love to her. He had been planning for some time.
This is kinda repetitive. I would suggest something like this.
Quote: Plodding across the snowy, twilit courtyard with a single rose in his hand, Maxwell anticipated the moment just within arm's reach - the moment he would finally confess his love.
Quote: The rose that was meant for Kathleene flew straight up in the air, then gently spun down like a delicate ballerina performing at the height of her career. She took her bow as she gracefully landed on the ground.
The conclusion kind of made me scratch my head - I think Giovanni needs a little more motive for reacting so harshly. Perhaps the Prince could hit him a few more times, get him really angry?
Otherwise, not bad at all. ^^'
I agree. +1
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:01 pm
Does anyone know how many chapters are on this snow apple thing?
I'm on chapter 4.
The story seems to be going well.
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If there are only five levels, like every other RIG, then i think I want to forefit, now.
Lest I lose a chance at a good item....
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:05 pm
Feliz Navidad! mrgreen
@Wylr: I would hold off on trying the next level up on it till you know for sure.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:18 pm
Everyone's getting into the Christmas spirit with their avis, nyu~
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:22 pm
Caramel Kisses Everyone's getting into the Christmas spirit with their avis, nyu~ How would you like to spread the holiday cheer by scrubbing my back? wink xd
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:25 pm
Caramel Kisses Everyone's getting into the Christmas spirit with their avis, nyu~ this is my favorite seasonal avi. I have had it since these items first came out 3nodding
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