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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:35 pm
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Krissim Klaw ((Something can be flat and be extremely popular, just look at all the one liner rps that carry on for thousands of pages (not saying this is anywhere near that simple of a level). It was flat, in my opinion, because nothing happened in that short little scene in the lab of any depth. The part just appeared rushed and illogical keeping with the more realistic setting you had previously created. I was originally drawn to the rp before that when it was just dealing with the group in the woods which seemed far more interesting. Everyone just kept pounding on the suspense and tension of everyone hiding and running from this horrible laboratory, however. Then when that finally comes to ahead, the place explodes in a couple pages. It seemed like an anti-climax to me. If you have problems with me stating my opinion on the rp then I'll just pull my character. I've never had any problems giving opinions or ideas on any other rp that I've been in, and you did in fact ask what others thought about the time change. Something that occurred only seconds after the laboratory exploded.))
((I haven't got a problem with it, really. I prefer people speaking their minds, but it's that same thing that has made it now I'm not as much in control of the thread as I used to be. there are alot more minds behind it now, and though I do try to still lord over it, I can't really bring myself to say a flat out 'no you can't do that because I say so' in a fantasy world. sweatdrop Pulling your character is completely up to you.. if you're bored with it. ))
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:45 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:51 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:18 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:32 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:39 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:46 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:53 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 10:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 10:26 pm
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She frowned at the rabbit, and opened her mouth, touching his ears was a soft 'thank you'. Oddly, it came to Sirus's ears, and obviousely was from the coyote, who was, now downing the rabbit. It only took seconds. She fallowed him off to the tree, staying behind and moveing very slowly, lingering with her stiff joints. She was growing used to the constant movement, and yet, when she was at the lab, she'd sleep at the foot of her masters bed, but now, she slept outside the cave, feeling quite disgusted.
Disgust. This feeling for furs never left her, and other then Sirus, she seemed to be nippy, even to the cubs. She tollerated Mephi, wether out of fear or for Sirus, she still tollerated him quietly, and if he ever touched her, he got nothing mroe then a glare. Sirus was more then welcome to, and anyone else would recive, at minimum a snaral. She had never been very friendly, and yet, in her stiffness, she didnt seem to be any worse, but maybe better. However, she curled up when Sirus stopped, almost evrey time.
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 3:33 am
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:44 am
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:53 am
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Suddenly it seemed he had a fanclub, and it made him laugh softly to think of it in such a way. Hello Hokucho, Shinju. How are y- He was suddenly distracted by his name being called. Crim! Heh, seems she and her brother are back. Then there was Sirus, and he showed his teeth in a cattly smile. Evening Sirus, I'm doing well, but it seems Hokucho is as stubborn as ever. Slii~ip *thud.* Mephi landed on the ground, on his toes without a lot of effort, looking to the group that had gathered around the tree. It was like a reunion. His ear twitched and flickered, swivelling a little to the different sounds, but the other remained stationary, and very intent on staying focused toward the edge of the field. Though he had smelled something unfamiliar, at this point, it wasn't posing a threat. Mephi would still keep tabs on it though, as best he could with everyone now around him..
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 6:22 am
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