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 Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:59 pm
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HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 I am still on my writers block gonk Me too.. I just started practicing my drawing. If I could only think of a filler, before the men in black took part in his life I'd be fine. If I could get a kick start from somewhere I'd be fine. 0.o I asked my grandma, and she had no clue either gonk what are you drawing?
Maybe you could say he was like..in college or something?
And I tried drawing mai avis head lol
eyepatch made meeh mad.
I didn't even bother drawing the headphones and the cat ears.. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:59 pm
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ChunChe HouseMDFan25 ChunChe I've got the beginning down! Mike (as I refer to him in the story; the edgier nickname goes better with his character's personality) ultimately gets rejected by the girl he chases after and decides to call it a night. Naturally, he dances his way down the street. Once he's in front of his apartment building, he continues dancing and then catches my (character's) eye. They have a brief conversation and he finds himself somewhat intrigued by her, thus leavng room for more to happen the next day. I know where I want the story to end up (a "morning after" kind of thing wink ), but getting there is a bit challenging. I don't want things to move too fast, but I don't want to drag out every minute detail. I'm also having a dilemma choosing Mike's occupation; it's a tie between restaurant worker and mechanic. I'm edging towards restaurant worker; it would be fun to include a scene where they cook together, which could lead to something more. Could you offer any insight?? Sounds good so far. but just because he is a mechanic, doesnt mean he can't cook. It would be cool if you could do both. smile I would drag it out some by talking alittle more, then dating (carnival, restraunt,fourth of july fireworks etc). Then get around to the cooking scene smile but that is my oppinion. smile ...Oh, how true! Yeah, I'll make my character the cooking "expert" and have her challenge him. A date @ a carnival seems fun and it totally fits with the real Michael Jackson considering that he loved carnivals-and, he did have one as a backyard. Thanks for the idea!
You're welcome
and I like the idea of the competition, sounds fun. 3nodding |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:18 pm
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Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 I am still on my writers block gonk Me too.. I just started practicing my drawing. If I could only think of a filler, before the men in black took part in his life I'd be fine. If I could get a kick start from somewhere I'd be fine. 0.o I asked my grandma, and she had no clue either gonk what are you drawing? Maybe you could say he was like..in college or something? And I tried drawing mai avis head lol eyepatch made meeh mad. I didn't even bother drawing the headphones and the cat ears..
well all I have so far is that he is an independent detective, I'm his assistant, and we have nothing to do after work so he asked me to go eat after work as friends (it turned out to be awkward, asking) but I dont know where we should go eat, or what should happen etc, thats where I am stuck at the moment.
and Thats a good picture smile
its your avi ^^ razz
so you like drawing, anime?
I draw anime sometimes. Not alot though. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:23 pm
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HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 I am still on my writers block gonk Me too.. I just started practicing my drawing. If I could only think of a filler, before the men in black took part in his life I'd be fine. If I could get a kick start from somewhere I'd be fine. 0.o I asked my grandma, and she had no clue either gonk what are you drawing? Maybe you could say he was like..in college or something? And I tried drawing mai avis head lol eyepatch made meeh mad. I didn't even bother drawing the headphones and the cat ears.. well all I have so far is that he is an independent detective, I'm his assistant, and we have nothing to do after work so he asked me to go eat after work as friends (it turned out to be awkward, asking) but I dont know where we should go eat, or what should happen etc, thats where I am stuck at the moment. and Thats a good picture smile its your avi ^^ razz so you like drawing, anime? I draw anime sometimes. Not alot though.
Oooo uhhh you're favorite place to eat?
Doughnut shop? Lol
The pie place off of MIB 2?
Then you guys like fall in love and stuff?
And thanks (:
And I guess I do lol. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:29 pm
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Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 I am still on my writers block gonk Me too.. I just started practicing my drawing. If I could only think of a filler, before the men in black took part in his life I'd be fine. If I could get a kick start from somewhere I'd be fine. 0.o I asked my grandma, and she had no clue either gonk what are you drawing? Maybe you could say he was like..in college or something? And I tried drawing mai avis head lol eyepatch made meeh mad. I didn't even bother drawing the headphones and the cat ears.. well all I have so far is that he is an independent detective, I'm his assistant, and we have nothing to do after work so he asked me to go eat after work as friends (it turned out to be awkward, asking) but I dont know where we should go eat, or what should happen etc, thats where I am stuck at the moment. and Thats a good picture smile its your avi ^^ razz so you like drawing, anime? I draw anime sometimes. Not alot though. Oooo uhhh you're favorite place to eat? Doughnut shop? Lol The pie place off of MIB 2? Then you guys like fall in love and stuff? And thanks (: And I guess I do lol.
Where I live, the only place we have is wendy's, mcdonalds, and pizza hut....so i dont really know...I dont really like any of those places...but we need to get dinner...before desert, so we may do both...
and I was saving the fall in love part for a bit later, to make it more dramatic...because we like each other, but neither of us knows, but the readers does, I think it would be kinda funny and dramatic that way.
I was going to say you're good at it. I think your picture you drew, is cute. smile |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:43 pm
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Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 I am still on my writers block gonk Me too.. I just started practicing my drawing.
aww your siggy!
so cute >.< |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:45 pm
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HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 If I could only think of a filler, before the men in black took part in his life I'd be fine. If I could get a kick start from somewhere I'd be fine. 0.o I asked my grandma, and she had no clue either gonk what are you drawing? Maybe you could say he was like..in college or something? And I tried drawing mai avis head lol eyepatch made meeh mad. I didn't even bother drawing the headphones and the cat ears.. well all I have so far is that he is an independent detective, I'm his assistant, and we have nothing to do after work so he asked me to go eat after work as friends (it turned out to be awkward, asking) but I dont know where we should go eat, or what should happen etc, thats where I am stuck at the moment. and Thats a good picture smile its your avi ^^ razz so you like drawing, anime? I draw anime sometimes. Not alot though. Oooo uhhh you're favorite place to eat? Doughnut shop? Lol The pie place off of MIB 2? Then you guys like fall in love and stuff? And thanks (: And I guess I do lol. Where I live, the only place we have is wendy's, mcdonalds, and pizza hut....so i dont really know...I dont really like any of those places...but we need to get dinner...before desert, so we may do both... and I was saving the fall in love part for a bit later, to make it more dramatic...because we like each other, but neither of us knows, but the readers does, I think it would be kinda funny and dramatic that way. I was going to say you're good at it. I think your picture you drew, is cute. smile
Ohhh, I see..
I guess you could like make up a place and set your setting and everything.
And maybe you can add the "another girl" to the story, have him say lil funny phrases, crack some jokes?
I'm not good at writing so I don't really know what to say.
And thanks so much (:
It means a lot, coming from you, you're really good. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:51 pm
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UnKnown Bitter Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 I am still on my writers block gonk Me too.. I just started practicing my drawing. aww your siggy! so cute >.<
Yeah (:
It makes me smile <3 |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:52 pm
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Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 If I could only think of a filler, before the men in black took part in his life I'd be fine. If I could get a kick start from somewhere I'd be fine. 0.o I asked my grandma, and she had no clue either gonk what are you drawing? Maybe you could say he was like..in college or something? And I tried drawing mai avis head lol eyepatch made meeh mad. I didn't even bother drawing the headphones and the cat ears.. well all I have so far is that he is an independent detective, I'm his assistant, and we have nothing to do after work so he asked me to go eat after work as friends (it turned out to be awkward, asking) but I dont know where we should go eat, or what should happen etc, thats where I am stuck at the moment. and Thats a good picture smile its your avi ^^ razz so you like drawing, anime? I draw anime sometimes. Not alot though. Oooo uhhh you're favorite place to eat? Doughnut shop? Lol The pie place off of MIB 2? Then you guys like fall in love and stuff? And thanks (: And I guess I do lol. Where I live, the only place we have is wendy's, mcdonalds, and pizza hut....so i dont really know...I dont really like any of those places...but we need to get dinner...before desert, so we may do both... and I was saving the fall in love part for a bit later, to make it more dramatic...because we like each other, but neither of us knows, but the readers does, I think it would be kinda funny and dramatic that way. I was going to say you're good at it. I think your picture you drew, is cute. smile Ohhh, I see.. I guess you could like make up a place and set your setting and everything. And maybe you can add the "another girl" to the story, have him say lil funny phrases, crack some jokes? I'm not good at writing so I don't really know what to say. And thanks so much (: It means a lot, coming from you, you're really good.
yeah, maybe the girl likes him...and he doesn't really like her...and they go on a date or something and I get jealous...but he doesn't enjoy it because he likes someone other that her ^^ haha, nice idea.
and I will try to think of a made up place, 0.o I haven't really been to like a deli or something...so I might try to think of something like that.
you're welcome smile
redface and thank you redface You're giving me a big head :XP: lol |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:00 pm
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HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 well all I have so far is that he is an independent detective, I'm his assistant, and we have nothing to do after work so he asked me to go eat after work as friends (it turned out to be awkward, asking) but I dont know where we should go eat, or what should happen etc, thats where I am stuck at the moment. and Thats a good picture smile its your avi ^^ razz so you like drawing, anime? I draw anime sometimes. Not alot though. Oooo uhhh you're favorite place to eat? Doughnut shop? Lol The pie place off of MIB 2? Then you guys like fall in love and stuff? And thanks (: And I guess I do lol. Where I live, the only place we have is wendy's, mcdonalds, and pizza hut....so i dont really know...I dont really like any of those places...but we need to get dinner...before desert, so we may do both... and I was saving the fall in love part for a bit later, to make it more dramatic...because we like each other, but neither of us knows, but the readers does, I think it would be kinda funny and dramatic that way. I was going to say you're good at it. I think your picture you drew, is cute. smile Ohhh, I see.. I guess you could like make up a place and set your setting and everything. And maybe you can add the "another girl" to the story, have him say lil funny phrases, crack some jokes? I'm not good at writing so I don't really know what to say. And thanks so much (: It means a lot, coming from you, you're really good. yeah, maybe the girl likes him...and he doesn't really like her...and they go on a date or something and I get jealous...but he doesn't enjoy it because he likes someone other that her ^^ haha, nice idea. and I will try to think of a made up place, 0.o I haven't really been to like a deli or something...so I might try to think of something like that. you're welcome smile redface and thank you redface You're giving me a big head :XP: lol
Hope I helped (:
And you're welcome, lol big head. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:04 pm
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Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 well all I have so far is that he is an independent detective, I'm his assistant, and we have nothing to do after work so he asked me to go eat after work as friends (it turned out to be awkward, asking) but I dont know where we should go eat, or what should happen etc, thats where I am stuck at the moment. and Thats a good picture smile its your avi ^^ razz so you like drawing, anime? I draw anime sometimes. Not alot though. Oooo uhhh you're favorite place to eat? Doughnut shop? Lol The pie place off of MIB 2? Then you guys like fall in love and stuff? And thanks (: And I guess I do lol. Where I live, the only place we have is wendy's, mcdonalds, and pizza hut....so i dont really know...I dont really like any of those places...but we need to get dinner...before desert, so we may do both... and I was saving the fall in love part for a bit later, to make it more dramatic...because we like each other, but neither of us knows, but the readers does, I think it would be kinda funny and dramatic that way. I was going to say you're good at it. I think your picture you drew, is cute. smile Ohhh, I see.. I guess you could like make up a place and set your setting and everything. And maybe you can add the "another girl" to the story, have him say lil funny phrases, crack some jokes? I'm not good at writing so I don't really know what to say. And thanks so much (: It means a lot, coming from you, you're really good. yeah, maybe the girl likes him...and he doesn't really like her...and they go on a date or something and I get jealous...but he doesn't enjoy it because he likes someone other that her ^^ haha, nice idea. and I will try to think of a made up place, 0.o I haven't really been to like a deli or something...so I might try to think of something like that. you're welcome smile redface and thank you redface You're giving me a big head :XP: lol Hope I helped (: And you're welcome, lol big head.
You did smile Thank you!!! heart |
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:15 pm
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HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Cra_zeey854 HouseMDFan25 Where I live, the only place we have is wendy's, mcdonalds, and pizza hut....so i dont really know...I dont really like any of those places...but we need to get dinner...before desert, so we may do both... and I was saving the fall in love part for a bit later, to make it more dramatic...because we like each other, but neither of us knows, but the readers does, I think it would be kinda funny and dramatic that way. I was going to say you're good at it. I think your picture you drew, is cute. smile Ohhh, I see.. I guess you could like make up a place and set your setting and everything. And maybe you can add the "another girl" to the story, have him say lil funny phrases, crack some jokes? I'm not good at writing so I don't really know what to say. And thanks so much (: It means a lot, coming from you, you're really good. yeah, maybe the girl likes him...and he doesn't really like her...and they go on a date or something and I get jealous...but he doesn't enjoy it because he likes someone other that her ^^ haha, nice idea. and I will try to think of a made up place, 0.o I haven't really been to like a deli or something...so I might try to think of something like that. you're welcome smile redface and thank you redface You're giving me a big head :XP: lol Hope I helped (: And you're welcome, lol big head. You did smile Thank you!!! heart
You're wecome biggrin |
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:30 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:39 am
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