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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 7:51 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 7:54 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 8:58 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:38 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:47 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:50 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 1:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:01 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:04 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:29 pm
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Yeah, derivative names that I know, starting with first derivative, go in this order: velocity, acceleration, jerk, snap, crackle, pop. My math teacher was greatly amused by them, and so am I. ^^; Of course, before the first derivative is the actual function that is used for all the derivation, which is the position function. >w> [/math nerd-ness] And I feel the exact same way! I can only use one hand for certain things, and one hand for other things. People call me weird for it, but it's just my genetic disposition. xD
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:44 pm
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Queen Spazzy Yeah, derivative names that I know, starting with first derivative, go in this order: velocity, acceleration, jerk, snap, crackle, pop. My math teacher was greatly amused by them, and so am I. ^^; Of course, before the first derivative is the actual function that is used for all the derivation, which is the position function. >w> [/math nerd-ness] And I feel the exact same way! I can only use one hand for certain things, and one hand for other things. People call me weird for it, but it's just my genetic disposition. xD
You are an interesting character. Haha, character. *********
I'm in advanced topics of math. We're doing factoring. It's easy, but it's the details that can throw you off. I could be getting straight A's if I applied myself a bit more and didn't think ahead and thus make small errors. But I'm procrastinating changing my habits that would help me learn better, in general. I have an essay to do now. Expository. "Explain how disappointments can have a good side."
Lol, makes me think of an unwanted baby.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:04 pm
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I submitted it into the system. It gave me a 6/6! Yay! Which corresponds to an A by the teacher.
Holistic Score Advisory: Your essay differs from other essays written on this prompt. Your style, vocabulary, organization, or focus on the topic may not be typical of other essays written for this prompt. Please keep this advisory in mind as you look at the score below and at the other feedback on this essay. We recommend that you discuss this essay and all feedback with your teacher.
On a 6-point scale, your overall score was: 6 [error code: NORMAL-BOUNDSVIOLATION] occurred while evaluating your essay. The following reasons may contribute to this: Indicates, as in the unscoreable case, that there is something unusual about this essay. The degree to which the essay varies from the norm is sufficient to raise a BOUNDSVIOLATION flag, but not sufficient to deem it unscoreable. Analytic Feedback
EssaySmart evaluates each essay for the six traits of good writing. For each trait, one of the following skill levels is assigned to the essay: superior, proficient, weak, limited.
Grammar Usage and Mechanics Your essay shows advanced ability for this trait. For the most part, the essay: demonstrates consistent command of language conventions exhibits consistent command of spelling, punctuation, and capitalization
Content and Development Your essay shows advanced ability for this trait. For the most part, the essay: uses mostly meaningful and thoughtful ideas elaborates and supports most ideas with specific details, reasons, explanations, and/or examples
Effective Sentences Your essay shows advanced ability for this trait. For the most part, the essay: forms sentences correctly; errors in sentence formation are rare and minor demonstrates exceptional sentence quality by avoiding awkward sentences displays considerable variety in sentence types, lengths, structures, and beginnings • • • • • • • • displays considerable fluency
Focus and Organization Your essay shows advanced ability for this trait. For the most part, the essay: consistently addresses the prompt shows strong awareness of audience displays a clear plan with a logical arrangement of ideas and effective use of transitions demonstrates strong unity and completeness
Word Selection Your essay shows advanced ability for this trait. For the most part, the essay: uses words that are especially appropriate to audience and purpose uses many words that are precise and accurate; may be vivid and imaginative may use figurative language and imagery skillfully
Your prompt and the essay you submitted for scoring Expository/Informative Prompt In an essay, explain how disappointments can have a good side.
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