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Skaeryll

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:47 pm


TtheHero
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Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.

It's has been. there is no - in it.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:51 pm


Almighty.

Anyway, gallery, now. My face and chest literally hurt from laughing at this guy.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:52 pm


Regulust
TtheHero
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Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.

It's has been. there is no - in it.


Say what now?
PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:55 pm


Awesome Tree
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.
Thanks.
All mighty or All-mighty? This story's almost doneeeee~

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:55 pm


TtheHero
Regulust
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.

It's has been. there is no - in it.


Say what now?

It works either way, really.

Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU
PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:57 pm


Awesome Tree
Awesome Tree
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.
Thanks.
All mighty or All-mighty? This story's almost doneeeee~


Almighty.

...Just to be on the safe side, let's see the sentence so we can discern the context.

TtheHero

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:59 pm


Shane-Cheshner
TtheHero
Regulust
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.

It's has been. there is no - in it.


Say what now?

It works either way, really.

Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU
SORRY D:

T:“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago. Why would I want to return to some has-been like you?”
PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:00 pm


Awesome Tree
Shane-Cheshner
TtheHero
Regulust
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.

It's has been. there is no - in it.


Say what now?

It works either way, really.

Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU
SORRY D:

T:“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago. Why would I want to return to some has-been like you?”

It's a'ight.

And yes, the hyphen works best in this case.

l-Kriel-l


Skaeryll

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:00 pm


Remove the goddamn hyphen.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:01 pm


Awesome Tree
Shane-Cheshner
TtheHero
Regulust
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Guys, has-been, hasbeen or has been?


Has-been.

It's has been. there is no - in it.


Say what now?

It works either way, really.

Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU
SORRY D:

T:“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago. Why would I want to return to some has-been like you?”


Hm... sounds good, sounds good. For more flow, try replacing the period with a semicolon.

Now how about the sentence where almighty is to be used?

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:02 pm


Regulust
Remove the goddamn hyphen.

Depends on the context, Reg. If you're calling someone a has-been, then the hyphen is necessary.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:04 pm


TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Shane-Cheshner
TtheHero
Regulust

It's has been. there is no - in it.


Say what now?

It works either way, really.

Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU
SORRY D:

T:“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago. Why would I want to return to some has-been like you?”


Hm... sounds good, sounds good. For more flow, try replacing the period with a semicolon.

Now how about the sentence where almighty is to be used?

“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago; why would I want to return to some has-been like yo-” I interrupt her, but not with words. Because this was the first time she came close enough, I wrapped my legs around her, bringing her head down to the floor with an almighty crack.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:04 pm


Wantcookie
Regulust
Remove the goddamn hyphen.

Depends on the context, Reg. If you're calling someone a has-been, then the hyphen is necessary.

Yeah. In this case it's a noun.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:08 pm


Awesome Tree
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Shane-Cheshner
TtheHero
Regulust

It's has been. there is no - in it.


Say what now?

It works either way, really.

Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU
SORRY D:

T:“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago. Why would I want to return to some has-been like you?”


Hm... sounds good, sounds good. For more flow, try replacing the period with a semicolon.

Now how about the sentence where almighty is to be used?

“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago; why would I want to return to some has-been like yo-” I interrupted her, but not with words. Because this was the first time she came close enough, I wrapped my legs around her, bringing her head down to the floor with an almighty crack.


Added an -ed to the end of interrupt. After her dialogue there is cut off so, start the narration on a new line, and it looks good!

TtheHero

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:08 pm


TtheHero
Awesome Tree
TtheHero
Awesome Tree
Shane-Cheshner

It works either way, really.

Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU
SORRY D:

T:“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago. Why would I want to return to some has-been like you?”


Hm... sounds good, sounds good. For more flow, try replacing the period with a semicolon.

Now how about the sentence where almighty is to be used?

“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago; why would I want to return to some has-been like yo-” I interrupted her, but not with words. Because this was the first time she came close enough, I wrapped my legs around her, bringing her head down to the floor with an almighty crack.


Added an -ed to the end of interrupt. After her dialogue there is cut off so, start the narration on a new line, and it looks good!
The story's in the present tense though. Would it still be -ed?
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