Custom Jutsu Approvals

[Dexterous Prince]

Character: Belamos Karna
Technique Name: Nova Release: Divine Persona
Rank: S+ (Keystone)
Type: Bloodline
Element: Light/Scorch Release
Description: Tapping into his true power, Belamos will briefly unlock the true power passed down to him from his father, Utu: Nova Release. Belamos will briefly assume a form-fitting that of a true deity. His form will become golden, shining and shimmering in a magnificent light. This aura of light extends a few inches off his skin and is constantly fluctuating. Anyone who looks upon this form will find themselves completely blinded for two posts, and if they do so while wielding Dojutsu it will be deactivation for twice as many posts as they are blinded for with all blindness fading after the correct amount of posts. Belamos's visage will even affect the ocular prowess of things like the Rinnegan, Byakugan and even the Mongekyo Sharingan. While in this form Belamos is able to instantly teleport to any location that is not shrouded in darkness. He can do this a maximum of one time per every other post. Reflex DR for his opponents is also negated when Belamos launches a Tai/Buki attack while using his Divine Persona. This speed also grants him an extra offensive activation. While utilizing his Divine Persona Belamos can create Light Release and Katon Techniques augmented by Nova Release out of pure light or any physical light source he can see. Finally, Belamos can utilize further Nova Release techniques only while in this form. Divine Persona lasts 6 posts and cannot be used again for 12 posts after it ends.

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Kondo Kaicho

Ofuda Paper Talisman Seal: Approved.

Dexterous Prince

Nova Release: Divine Persona

Notes: Instant transportation must be within thread and does not serve to work defensively.

Reflex DR negation is fine, Extra activation is fine.

Augment to Nova Release? Assuming you have some sort of bonus and are treating it as a Kekkei Tota, You are augmenting Light Release to being a Nova release and Katon to nova release? Correct? I don't see any issue with it. They would then just be treated as Nova release. The wording just feels clunky.

A potential suggestion: "While active, Light Release and Katon Techniques may be treated as Nova Release techniques for the duration and Nova Release may be used from any visible light source."  

[Dexterous Prince]

Character: Belamos Karna
Technique Name: Nova Release: Purifying Light
Rank: C Rank
Type: Bloodline
Element: Nova
Description: At will Belamos will release a dome of light around himself that expands out equally in all directions in a radius of fifty feet. If the light passes over a person and they have at least one technique activated which has a post duration, that post duration is automatically lowered by one post. This can affect multiple techniques at a time and will even affect allies if they are inadvertently caught in the technique. Note that the dome of light has no physical property to it- i.e. feeling, weight or density.

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Self- approved UNLESS you guys take issue with the ability in which case quote me the changes c:

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Character: Ikuyo
Technique Name: [ Woodwaker's Regalia ]
Rank: S
Type: Bloodline / Senjutsu
Element: Mokuton
Description: Only usable while in sage mode, this jutsu causes the user to become overgrown with ambient vegetation. This can take the form of whatever the user wants aesthetically, moss, thin wood, mushrooms, etc. However, the purpose of this jutsu is to collect both ambient and expended nature chakra and force feed it into the users muscles increasing their speed. Any tai or buki (excluding spiritual) preformed while in this state move so fast that they ignore the opponents reflex stat. This state is capable of lasting for the length of sage mode (5 posts) and drains an S ranked amount of nature chakra per post unless ended early.
 

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As long as it can't work on state of being effects like sage mode you're good! C:  

[HeadlessKoko]

Character: Kagerou Uchiha
Technique Name: Soujuu [Manipulation]
Rank: X
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Varies
Description: This elemental ninjutsu focuses on the very fundamentals to create a flexible technique that can work for any element but at the expense of power. Using Soujuu, the user can manipulate any element they have the corresponding nature of, creating and bending it as they desire within the limitations ascribed by the natural properties of the element. Elements controlled in this way lack the focus and special properties that formal techniques can give that go above and beyond the natural. A stream of manipulated lightning will shock, but it won't give bodily control over the target. Fire can burst, but not with any amazingly shocking concussive force. Etc. Soujuu techniques are overwhelmed by techniques of the same rank and are generally smaller, too, following the cubic measurements in the table given below. If desired, though, Kagerou can increase the size of a Soujuu technique by 1 rank by decreasing its power by 1 rank.
E - 1 meter
D - 2 meters
C - 3 meters
B - 6 meters
A - 12 meters
S - 24 meters
SS - 48 meters

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HeadlessKoko

Unfortunate Non

It's going to have to be a no I'm afraid. Sadly, darling, this ability is to all-encompassing, its not that its offensively strong non its that the versatility of it is too expansive when used for say supportive purposes. i.e free form air bending to impart flight thus making Solo Flight in Fuuton inferior and moot comparably. While you do have all five elemental natures to do so 'theoretically' comparably let's say one were to take bloodlines that all typically had free form manipulation at the most currently this is either with bloodless kin or maximized implants three methods of free form manipulation. Here we have five comparably. There has been talk amongst biggy boys about considering the implementation of ninjutsu formless for one's elements as it was proposed once before but if I recall was shot down for the very same reason I'm giving here that a majority of the supplementary and support ninjutsu of elements suddenly pale in comparison when capable of accomplishing the same thing with formless but with a better cost efficiency.  

[Kondo Kaicho]

Character: Shisui Sakikibara
Technique Name: Arcane Forge
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: The user creates a string of hand seals, holding his hands out before him. Upon doing so, a large arcane circle forms under the user that spans roughly fifteen feet. The user is able to forgo the process of forging a weapon the traditional method by using this. The weapon of choice, including customs that have been approved prior to use of this technique is created before the user's extended hands by drawing the minerals deep within the earth below the circle. The Ryo required to craft the item is removed from the character's profile just as if they had created the weapon in traditional ways.

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Character: Shisui Sakikibara
Technique Name: Arcane Forge
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: The user creates a string of hand seals, holding his hands out before him. Upon doing so, a large arcane circle forms under the user that spans roughly fifteen feet. The user is able to forgo the process of forging a weapon the traditional method by using this. The weapon of choice, including customs that have been approved prior to use of this technique, is created before the user's extended hands by drawing the minerals deep within the earth below the circle. The Ryo required to craft the item is removed from the character's profile just as if they had created the weapon in traditional ways.


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This would have been denied out the gate but it requires further detail. If this technique would otherwise bypass the required titles for the corresponding job in order to create the item it's a hard no. If, however, you create the item and this technique is purely for the aesthetic of it then it's fine but if your intentions are to bypass the crafting mission posts required to create the item then this is more than a C-rank. For crafting A C-rank ability would equate to producing one advanced item. You will need to make it a variable of E-B for items going up to Special, and B-S+ for Legendary and then if you want the E-S+ it will cost you two custom points for the production of items E-S+. On top of this technique creating, items using this method would not contribute to your posts toward your titles.  

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Character: Shisui Sakikibara
Technique Name: Arcane Forge
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: The user creates a string of hand seals, holding his hands out before him. Upon doing so, a large arcane circle forms under the user that spans roughly fifteen feet. The user is able to forgo the process of forging a weapon the traditional method by using this. The weapon of choice, including customs that have been approved prior to use of this technique is created before the user's extended hands by drawing the minerals deep within the earth below the circle. The Ryo required to craft the item is removed from the character's profile just as if they had created the weapon in traditional ways.Crafting of weapons in this manner does not count towards any crafting jobs, AC gain for crafting and does not bypass custom systems in any way. Additionally, during combat only basic weapons can be made in the arcane forge in increments up to four total.

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Character: Shisui Sakikibara
Technique Name: Arcane Forge
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: The user creates a string of hand seals, holding his hands out before him. Upon doing so, a large arcane circle forms under the user that spans roughly fifteen feet. The user is able to forgo the process of forging a weapon the traditional method by using this. The weapon of choice, including customs that have been approved prior to use of this technique is created before the user's extended hands by drawing the minerals deep within the earth below the circle. The Ryo required to craft the item is removed from the character's profile just as if they had created the weapon in traditional ways.Crafting of weapons in this manner does not count towards any crafting jobs, AC gain for crafting and does not bypass custom systems in any way. Additionally, during combat, only basic weapons can be made in the arcane forge in increments up to four total.

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[duckmasta]

Previous customs:


Character: Koutetsu Kajibamaru
Technique Name: Koton: Ushirodate [Steel Release
Rank: X-rank (Learn as D-rank)
Type: Bloodline Ninjutsu
Element: Koton: Steel Release
Description: On contact: creates a thin film of Koton on target that provides a Fortitude bonus equal to rank that lasts 1 post per rank.




Character: Koutetsu Kajibamaru
Technique Name: Suiton: Koudaimori [Vast forest/Shrine grove]
Rank: C-S-rank || Augment (Kirigakure no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: An advanced form of Kirigakure no Jutsu, It deepens the mist, Making it harder to remove.The user and those who have trained Korabo bonds with the user to the Appropriate Rank, receive an active Reflex boost of Moderate (3) at C-rank, with a slight (1) increase per rank after the initial for a Supreme (6) at S. Inspired by the Fog in the Vastwood


Editing for Custom changes and to adhere to new custom Rules:


Character: Koutetsu Kajibamaru
Technique Name: Koton: Ushirodate [Steel Release
Rank: B-S+
Type: Bloodline Ninjutsu
Element: Koton: Steel Release
Description: On contact: creates a thin film of Koton on target that provides a slight Fortitude bonus per rank Beginning at Heavily (4) at B and ending at Double Supreme (12) at S+ that lasts 4 posts plus 1 post per rank after B.




Character: Koutetsu Kajibamaru
Technique Name: Suiton: Koudaimori [Vast forest/Shrine grove]
Rank: E-S+-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: An advanced form of Kirigakure no Jutsu, Koudaimore creates a deeply misted area within the thread.The user and those who have trained Korabo bonds with the user to the Appropriate Rank, do not suffer the following: Those within Koudaimori receive a Slight (1) decrease to reflex per rank after the initial for a negative Supreme (-6) at S and a negative Double Supreme (-12) at S+. Inspired by the Fog in the Vastwood

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Character: Hiroki Uchiha
Technique Name: Deity's Divine Deconstruction
Rank: X [ E-S+ | Keystone | Learned as B ]
Type: Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: Hiroki's keystone technique allows him to bend his opponent's chakra manifesting jutsu to his will. Using his sharingan's ability to analyze jutsu, Hiroki overpowers a structural weak point to physically alter the manifestation of techniques that are used to attack or defend against him, for the cost of that technique in chakra. This could be something as straightforward as removing the heat from a fireball, or something as abstract as fixing its position - causing it to freeze in place but not ending the jutsu. This technique cannot affect passive techniques. Similarly, it may not limit the application of more than one descriptive bonus to a technique - so no preventing a technique from receiving bonuses from both Strength and Speed, for example. This technique may not alter anything that doesn't manifest chakra, preventing it from altering Simple techniques, or Complex techniques that do not manifest chakra.

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[Dexterous Prince]

Character: Belamos
Technique Name: Nova Release: Unyielding Inferno
Rank: Passive
Type: Bloodline
Element: Nova
Description: Belamos has training and refined his chakra to a fine point- condensing it to such a high degree that it becomes incompatible with anyone else's chakra network. Anyone who attempt to absorb a Nova Release Technique or drain Belamos of his chakra will feel a painful sensation akin to internal burning equal to the rank absorbed

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"So long as the distortions only last in the post they're used in and a sustain is paid for sustaining said distortion at 1/2 rate. i.e Frozen fireball in place to keep it Frozen in place past the first post will require a sustain."

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Good but be aware because of the custom rules.

Passives Custom jutsu can only have passive abilities if the user has them on a triggering effect. This means that while the passive is not active it is of no cost to the user, but once it is active it takes the cost from the user in chakra and / or stamina.

This means when the chakra is drained which is the trigger its also still going to cost you an amount to inflict that pain. To make it seem more worthwhile it can made so that once a rank of your chakra is absorbed you can use any rank of up to [X]-{Amount Absorbed} to distribute the pain. Meaning a person can drain [ B ] and you can spend [ B ] amount or lower to inflict said pain. If that's too complicated the easiest solution is changing it to this. Because passives still need ranks and cost.

Character: Belamos
Technique Name: Nova Release: Unyielding Inferno
Rank: {Insert Rank Here} - Passive
Type: Bloodline
Element: Nova
Description: Description: Belamos has training and refined his chakra to a fine point- condensing it to such a high degree that it becomes incompatible with anyone else's chakra network. After activation, for the duration of the battle. Anyone who attempts to absorb a Nova Release Technique or drain Belamos of his chakra will feel a painful sensation akin to internal burning equal to the rank absorbed.

I'd place it at B-rank for an ongoing situational passive that lasts until the end of a battle.