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[Rocket Punches]

Rocket Punches

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Character: Hiroki Uchiha
Technique Name: Deity's Divine Deconstruction
Rank: X [ E-S+ | Keystone | Learned as B ]
Type: Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: Hiroki's keystone technique allows him to bend his opponent's chakra manifesting jutsu to his will. Using his sharingan's ability to analyze jutsu, Hiroki overpowers a structural weak point to physically alter the manifestation of techniques that are used to attack or defend against him, for the cost of that technique in chakra. This could be something as straightforward as removing the heat from a fireball, or something as abstract as fixing its position - causing it to freeze in place but not ending the jutsu. This technique cannot affect passive techniques. Similarly, it may not limit the application of more than one descriptive bonus to a technique - so no preventing a technique from receiving bonuses from both Strength and Speed, for example. This technique may not alter anything that doesn't manifest chakra, preventing it from altering Simple techniques, or Complex techniques that do not manifest chakra. Alterations made by this technique last for the post in which they are created, and must be paid for at half the cost of the original technique in order to be maintained longer.

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Rocket Punches

Rocket Punches

Should be good.

Character: Hiroki Uchiha
Technique Name: Deity's Divine Deconstruction
Rank: X [ E-S+ | Keystone | Learned as B ]
Type: Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: Hiroki's keystone technique allows him to bend his opponent's chakra manifesting jutsu to his will. Using his sharingan's ability to analyze jutsu, Hiroki overpowers a structural weak point to physically alter the manifestation of techniques that are used to attack or defend against him, for the cost of that technique in chakra. This could be something as straightforward as removing the heat from a fireball, or something as abstract as fixing its position - causing it to freeze in place but not ending the jutsu. This technique cannot affect passive techniques. Similarly, it may not limit the application of more than one descriptive bonus to a technique - so no preventing a technique from receiving bonuses from both Strength and Speed, for example. This technique may not alter anything that doesn't manifest chakra, preventing it from altering Simple techniques, or Complex techniques that do not manifest chakra. Alterations made by this technique last for the post in which they are created, and must be paid for at half the cost of the original technique in order to be maintained longer.

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Custom Techniques

Senran Kaguya
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Character: Senran Kaguya
Keystone
Technique Name: Chikara Kotoba {Words of Power} {Inherent}
Rank: {X}
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Chikara Kotoba is much less an actual technique and more so a method of applying and creating techniques. {Producing Chikara Kotoba are the same as offensive actions} Senran performs his jutsu by summoning in front of him a glowing ethereal word instead of hand signs. These words are essentially Japanese characters usually. Such as the Kanji for 'Fire' 'Water' etc. When invoked the word will glow and produce the intended jutsu. However, it can also be decided not to do so immediately. In these cases, the words remain floating in mid-air or static in the place where they were invoked. A technique of equal rank or higher than the produced Chikara Kotoba will destroy it without it releasing the Ninjutsu inside. However, this is typically hard to discern without a doujutsu or some sensory method as there is no proper way to distinguish its strength simply being a word that floats. By combining two words such as 'Fire' and 'Water' to get 'Fire Water' will Korabo the techniques contained in them. {this still requires appropriate Korabo training} Multiple words can be combined using this method assuming the Chikara Kotoba survive and is done so manually by dragging one word into another to fuse them. The words don't have to be so obscure or obvious but must stay relevant to a technique. Senran will typically produce words relevant to the technique about to be released but at times confusing. Example if he were to use 'Wind' all the time the opponent would know a wind jutsu is coming and how to counter it. So to keep an opponent guessing a word such as 'Decapitating' could be produced the intended jutsu produced is Decapitating Air Waves but an opponent would be left to wonder what type of technique the word 'Decapitating' would produce. If multiple instances of Chikara Kotoba exist they can then all be activated at once with a single hand sign making it a poor choice to simply ignore the words. Chakra used to form Chikara Kotoba cannot be replenished by Senran unless the word is gone meaning keeping a word in one place would permanently deduct that chakra from ever recovering until its gone. in a sense, Chikara Kotoba are very like fuuin.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Kuchiyose Kotoba: Kujō {Summoning Word: Yunizon}
Rank: X-S+
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Chikara Kotoba have the benefit of producing essentially a menagerie of things assuming the user has the resources to do this. Often requires two things an applicable adjective and an applicable noun. An example would be if Senran has sealed wire, he can combine the two words 'Burning' and 'Wire' to produce a burning wire that launches itself forward. However, in the event, he did not have wire sealed, this combination would not be possible. If he has the means to do something i.e if he were to have a bloodline he could provide that bloodlines properties to something produced. This criterion could be fulfilled through Koraboing with someone with a bloodline to be able to apply their bloodline to the word combinations. Additional adjectives may be added but of course, this is assuming the Chikara Kotoba survive. Senran could perform the following {One Hundred}, {Shocking}, {Kunai}. The combination possible through knowing shadow clone jutsu, having lightening element, and being is possession of a kunai. This, however, would require that the word prior wasn't destroyed.


Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Jiko-Hansha {Divining Word: Self-Reflection }
Rank: B-Null
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will immediately begin to see culminating in front of them a copy of themselves. This is their shadow, their true self. The strength of the Shadow is entirely determined by the RPC of which the shadow was made from. What it knows, what it says, what it looks like. These are all determined by the RPC. The Strength of the technique is entirely dependent on the level of the individual's insecurities, some of which even they themselves may not have even been aware of. Whether the Shadow even attacks them or not is determined by the RPC whose shadow is made. In some cases, those who have accepted themselves the shadow becomes their ally and often times will also do nothing. The Shadow can be dismissed by Senran if he sees that there's usually no dilemma with it and will praise the original for their self-acceptance.


Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Kokuhaku {Divining Word: Confession}
Rank: B
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will immediately begin confessing their innermost thoughts that they typically keep hidden in what could only be considered the equivalent of mouth diarrhea. What's exposed could be anything as simple as 'I pee the bed at night still.' 'I think my mom is hot.' to accidentally exposing military secrets or something similar. This effect is removed via Kai but it may be hard to do if one's using their hands to force their mouth shut or not dying of embarrassment.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Kokuhaku {Divining Word: Confession}
Rank: B
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will immediately begin confessing their innermost thoughts that they typically keep hidden in what could only be considered the equivalent of mouth diarrhea. What's exposed could be anything as simple as 'I pee the bed at night still.' 'I think my mom is hot.' to accidentally exposing military secrets or something similar. This effect is removed via Kai but it may be hard to do if one's using their hands to force their mouth shut or not dying of embarrassment.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Kujō {Divining Word: Grievances}
Rank: E {Use} - Null
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will immediately begin reliving every painstaking moment they believed themselves at fault. It replays their memories and regrets in their heads reminding them of their innermost grievances as the name suggest. The afflicted feels a stinging sensation and the feeling of being enveloped or smothered. The intensity of this technique is entirely decided on the RPC affected by it varying anywhere from chilly tickles at E and thinking the technique did nothing, to screaming in agony if they believe their grievances warrant that much under an assumed S+.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Ōyorokobi {Divining Word: Reverly}
Rank: E {Use} - Null
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will start to take pleasure in whatever it is they're currently experiencing. One of the most craze-inducing combinations is using {Grievances} prior to {Revelry} and depending on the person they will begin to feel as though said things are actually good and that they should relish in doing said things more or experiencing them more. I.e losing a loved one the individual suddenly believes it would be satisfying and great to lose all their loved ones. This can be Kai'd but it is up to the RPC affected by it to determine the difficulty of the Kai. Senran can dismiss it naturally.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Kaihō {Divining Word: Liberation}
Rank: B
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will start to feel as if a burden has been lifted off their shoulders. Used in conjunction often times with {Grievances} it makes those under its influence believe that they've done nothing wrong and similarly can do nothing wrong while similarly making the thoughts produced by {Grievances} feel small and negligible. This ability can be Kai'd but most typically don't desire to do so. Albeit friends tend to pick up on their sudden recklessness and behaviors.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Shinjitsu {Divining Word: Truth}
Rank: B
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will be incapable of lying. While they are not obligated to speak the silence or the use of kai to remove the ability is often a key indicator of the individual hiding something. {Confession} is often used right after if Senran is either curious or suspicious

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Bunretsu Kotoba: Yokubō {Divining Word: Desire}
Rank: E {Use} - Null
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but are designed to expose a person for who they really are. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will be overcome with a sudden need to fulfill and satisfy their immediate desires. This technique is often combined with both {Grievances} followed by {Reverly} and applying {Desire} last to produce utterly chaotic results in someone who is incredibly emotionally damaged or incredibly self-conscious. The desires in that moment say wanting to kill ones loved ones becomes an actual desire the individual wants and then typically acts upon. This can be Kai'd and it is up to the RPC under the influence to determine the level of Kai. Successfully fulfilling ones desire breaks the effects of {Desire}

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Kinshi Kotoba: Gainen {Forbidden Word: Conception}
Rank: C
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but there are a few designed with the intention to cause lasting harm but to Senran himself these techniques provide the target greater freedoms. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will essentially undergo the following with specifications in regards to a person's sex. A painful feeling occurs just above the groin as though experiencing a cramp. After the feeling goes away as quickly as it came. In women, this technique 'steals their virginity' which via a mental signal they immediately become aware of and then induces menopause. In men they become infertile. In short any and all other instances, individuals lose the ability to have children. The reasoning behind this technique is it was made so that humanity can live without 'regret' but alternatively it is to speed up mankind's slow but inevitable extinction. The effects can be reversed but convincing Senran to do so will be its own challenge. It has no effect on those who are unable to conceive or are under the age of eighteen.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Kinshi Kotoba: Airashī {Forbidden Word: Loveless}
Rank: C - Null
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but there are a few designed with the intention to cause lasting harm but to Senran himself these techniques provide the target greater freedoms. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will essentially lose their ability to become infatuated. They will lose their ability to find meaningful relationships both in the sense of friendship and romance. They are then granted the 'freedom' of being able to focus on one's self and their own desires without needless distractions to keep them from their goals. This effect may be Kai'd but only by someone other than the affected individual. It is up to that rpc what level of Kai is necessary.

Character: Senran Kaguya
Technique Name: Kinshi Kotoba: Tōnan {Forbidden Word: Theft}
Rank: C - Null
Type: Maruton
Element: N/a
Description: Senran's techniques aren't particularly strong but there are a few designed with the intention to cause lasting harm but not to Senran himself these techniques provide the target greater freedoms. By invoking this word those that look upon it when it glows and vanishes or is touched by it will essentially lose that which is considered most precious to them within the vicinity. It can also be used to discern what level of preciousness the thing in question stolen is to a person and if there are things more precious but simply not around to be stolen. It's up to the RPC under the effect of Tōnan what this is particularly. This may extend to a loved one in the vicinity dying outright, that loved one being teleported to Senran's side and proclaiming a hatred towards the person who considered their love to be the most precious thing to them. It can also be a concept or capability. Someone whose strength is most precious will find their strength leaving them {in a manner that RPC feels befitting} if their most precious thing is the memory of someone that is taken. What is most dangerous about {Theft} is it can be used again stealing the next thing down the line the person deems most precious. If the thing that the individual considers most precious is not present or there isn't a strong enough feeling the technique will often default to stealing undergarments as many carry the belief that 'hiding their shame' is the most precious, this is more than often the point when {Theft} no longer continues to be used as it usually leads to the theft of more clothing. When things such as concepts, memories, or beliefs are stolen they appear as flames with a written Kanji or character representing it. These flames varying in color which can be viewed as though they were small looking glasses if what was stolen was a memory or something similar. For physical things, they will either appear in his hands or next to him. However, he has shown a particular dislike for those whose most precious things are material. What's taken is permanent unless stolen back. Again, its up to the RPC affected by {Theft} to decide what is stolen.

 

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Character: Karuto Raiken [ Keystone ]
Technique Name: Seigi no Michi [ Art of the Zen Fist ]
Rank: S+
Type: Taijutsu- Complex
Description: Many fighters talk about moments of zen, of getting 'in the zone' for brief instants. The Seigi no Michi is a result of fully immersing oneself "in the zone" via the discovery of the true way of fighting- something only attained by a deep and thorough understanding of the deeper principles of the worlds' martial arts and the people who practice it. The Seigi no Michi is the ultimate form for a Martial Artist to aspire to, undeniably the peak of physical prowess and the true mark of mastery for those who consider themselves warriors. Due to this prestige, there is a series of strict tasks that must be completed before one can learn the Seigi no Michi:

• Must be Taijutsu Specialized
• Must have over 15 Tai Styles learned
• Must travel to every village available and learn that village's traditional Taijutsu style i.e. Konohagakure no Taijutsu for the Whirlpool Village
• Must have been taught the finer workings of Natural Chakra Note: You do not need to be a sage, just have been taught how Nature Chakra works by someone who knows
• Must have no bloodline, demon, curse mark or implants

By completing these tasks the user will be able to slip into momentary states of martial euphoria- maintaining a state of peak physical ability and perfection. Feats thought impossible will seem effortless and traditional masters of martial arts will look as if flailing children before a master of the Seigi no Michi. The following benefits will be applied to the user for a total of 10 posts:

• Extra activation that can be used exclusively for dodging
• Passive DR is increased to 18
• All techniques are treated as Spiritual in relation to clashes and damage calculations
• Able to use Seigi no Michi techniques
• Allowed to use your third activation for offensive techniques
• Able to use Body Flicker once per every other post without counting towards the Body Flicker Total

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Character: Breezy Songlin
Technique Name: Keystone: Ascendant Sage Mode: Scion of the First Sea
Rank: S
Type: Senjutsu
Element: Fire, Water, Earth
Description: All members of the Hoshigaki Clan have the potential to access Sage Mode however genetic mutations and the changes to Breezy's form have allowed her to access a stronger version of Sage Mode. She is however unable to use the basic Sage Mode but can use its techniques.

Ascendant Sage Mode as mentioned previously is a stronger form of Sage Mode. Like the Hoshgaki Clan sage mode the user is able to move freely while using it but unlike with that transformation Sage Mode is able to last much longer lasting for as long as the user can stay on the ground. Unlike other Sage Mode transformations which take natural chakra from the air Ascendant Sage Mode draws nature chakra from the planet itself in the form of geothermal currents. Heat from the planet it drawn directly to the user and then turned into chakra. However notably this is also a weakness. The transformation ends the moment the user loses the planet's heat meaning it is weak against aerial combatants though it is not completely without its means of combating them and has a number of techniques to create land on which to walk.

Upon losing Sage Mode 50% of the user's current Chakra and Stamina total is taken so the transformation incurs significant risk as leaving the ground will trigger the end of Sage Mode.

The transformation makes Breezy's hair a glowing orange that flows like molten rock and changes her eyes from the usual Hoshigaki Clan's into a deep emerald green version of those eyes. Her usual blue skin also takes on the same orange glowing tone.

Ascendant Sage Mode grants the following enhancements
Generates 50 Nature Chakra each post provided one foot is in contact with the ground.
Water Techniques become Yoton Release Techniques. All water is replaced with lava (or magma if she's fighting underground).
While active Sage Mode provides a supreme bonus to Fortitude and Reflex.
Yoton Techniques overwhelm techniques of the same rank
While this transformation is active and another is within 50ft they gain one rank of Dehydration for each full post they remain within that range. The effect doubles for each 25ft closer they move.
All bodily fluids are replaced with molten magma until the end of the transformation and the body is modified to withstand this while the transformation is active. This renders Breezy resistant to Fire and Water techniques as Fire techniques are simply not hot enough and Water largely turns to steam before it can make contact.

As a Keystone the transformation also gives access to its own special techniques some of which are available only in the transformed state and some which are merely enhanced by it.

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I really like the idea your going for here but I don't think customs is the best way to do it only because even keystones can't break the custom rules D: Soo first off no customs can give overwhelming, for this to give a double supreme boost it would have to be S+, and thirdly what do you mean exactly when you say resistant? Like those types of ninjusu just flat can't hit you?

If I might offer a suggestion, I think that you should make this an augment of basic sage mode that instead changes how you gather nature chakra. That way you can keep water yoton and your dehydration. While also mooching off of all the goodies of normal sage mode, such as the supreme to all stats.

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Character: Breezy Songlin
Technique Name: Keystone: Enhanced Sage Mode: Scion of the First Sea
Rank: S
Type: Senjutsu / Bloodline
Element: Fire, Water, Earth
Description: All members of the Hoshigaki Clan have the potential to access Sage Mode however the self-taught method which Breezy uses to gather nature chakra have vastly altered her Sage Mode Transformation making it completely unique to her.

Breezy gathers Natural Energy through geothermal heat taken from the ground as opposed to from the air or using clones (though it would be possible to collect natural energy with shadow clones). Wherever there is ground directly connected to the earth below then Breezy is able to gather natural energy to enter Sage Mode or if she's sufficiently close to the mantle of the planet. This is below sea level.

The Hoshigaki Clan Sage Mode transformation cannot be used by her but the method of gathering chakra causes drastic changes being only superficially similar in that it is a Sage Mode.

In terms of appearance it's entirely its own transformation. The transformation makes Breezy's hair a glowing orange that flows like molten rock and changes her eyes from the usual Hoshigaki Clan's into a deep emerald green version of those eyes. Her usual blue skin also takes on the same orange glowing tone with obsidian black visible veins and arteries. A current of hot air whips around her into the sky.

This method of gathering alters the transformation and enhances it in the following ways.
Generates 50 Nature Chakra each post provided one part of her body is in contact with the ground or if she is below sea level.
The transformation ends when there is no part of her attached to the ground and she is above sea level.
Water Techniques become Yoton Release Techniques. All water is replaced with lava (or magma if she's fighting underground).
While active Sage Mode provides a supreme bonus to Fortitude and Reflex instead of Strength and Speed.
Yoton instead of Water Techniques overwhelm techniques of the same rank
While this transformation is active and another is within 55ft they gain one rank of Dehydration for each post they end within that range. The effect doubles for each 25ft closer they move.
All bodily fluids are replaced with molten magma until the end of the transformation and the body is modified to withstand this while the transformation is active. This renders Breezy resistant to Fire and Water techniques meaning she will only take half the damage to stamina or chakra from these techniques or alternatively a quarter from techniques that use both elements. Fire techniques are simply not hot enough and Water largely turns to steam before it can make contact.
During this transformation Breezy can see through magma and stone as though it were completely see through.
She obtains complete immunity to naturally (non-chakra based) occurring lava and magma and can move through it like water.

As a Keystone the transformation also gives access to its own special techniques some of which are available only in the transformed state and some which are merely enhanced by it. These are detailed separately.



I believe this is what you were suggesting. The technique is no longer its own Sage Mode but instead alters the Sage Mode transformation.

I've added a few details where relevant also. For a brief overview

I changed the dehydration range to 55 metres. This is basically so you don't have to physically stand on top of her to be affected by the maximum amount of stacks. Otherwise that's rather pointless.

Changed the Nature Chakra generation ever so slightly. She can now also generate chakra based on proximity to the mantle of the planet. I didn't think it really made much sense that she would be unable to convert heat for example if she was jumping in the magma chamber of a volcano but somehow wasn't hot enough or enough thermal energy.

Clarified the point on resistance. She can still be affected by them but the damage gets reduced quite significantly.

I added some extra (largely flavour) abilities. She can now see through lava and stone so she isn't blinded by swimming through lava. She can also stand in naturally occurring lava and magma. That's mostly so she doesn't die from weird things like melting the ground beneath her and slipping in the molten mud she made.  

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Character: Shouri Uchiha
Technique Name: The Great Eye of Amaterasu's Realm
→→Rank: B-S+
→→P/S. Sense: Sight // Touch
→→Base Duration // Upkeep: 5 Posts // 30 Chakra
→→Source: Vision [ Sharingan or Uchiha fire ]
→→Description: By looking into the Uchiha clansman's eyes or into his black flames (through bloodline/genjutsu cross-class korabo) the victim perceives ebony flame spreading over the entire area from Shouri as the origin point. They can feel intense heat and see a massive plume of smoke from the fire that blackens the sky with only a giant red moon that is identical to Shouri's sharingan visible. A crimson light shines down on the target from the sharingan moon and drastically increases the heat causing the target to see and feel their skin being cooked. The eye constantly tracks the victim as they run from the encroaching black flames in the nightmarish realm.


Character: Shouri Uchiha
Technique Name: Amaterasu's Damnation
→→Rank: B-S+
→→P/S. Sense: Sight // Touch
→→Base Duration // Upkeep: 5 Posts // 30 Chakra
→→Source: Vision [ Sharingan or Uchiha fire ]
→→Description: By establishing eye contact or by viewing the black flames of the Uchiha (bloodline/genjutsu cross-class korabo) the opponent views a large black ball of fire flying toward them. Despite any attempt to evade it the fire consumes their entire body and causes agonizing pain. They view third degree burns forming over their entire body in the process.

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Character: Koutetsu Kajibamaru
Technique Name: Steam Hammer: Variation: Elastic Blow
Rank: B-S+
Type: Taijutsu-Complex
Element: Steam
Description: Koutetsu delivers three strikes in rapid succession: A Shovel hook to the ribs, an Uppercut to the jaw, and an overhand to the jaw. Each punch sends a burst of steam out in front of the blow. If Kokuou pays the cost of the technique in addition, Each Strike is considered an independent attack of 1 rank lower.



Character: Koutetsu Kajibamaru
Technique Name:Steam Hammer: Variation: Dead Blow
Rank: B-S+
Type: Taijutsu- Complex
Element: Steam
Description: Koutetsu delivers a heavy cross to the opponents sternum, backed by a burst of steam.If Kokuou pays the cost of the technique in addition, This attack does additional damage equal to its rank.

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Pad Chief

Okay so here slight problem here taking half damage from from a technique can't work because you aren't paying anything to gain this effect as sage mode has no sustained cost. or even a cost to activate. As a replacement I would reword it to say that this form has a sustained cost and anything below it's rank can't get through at all or you can freely expend chakra in order weaken a jutsu of this type when it hits you and if it's at or below the rank you cast this effect at then it's removed.

After that you still can't give overwhelming to your lava only because it still conflicts with the customs giving overwhelming rule as well as crossing into bloodknight ability from the bloodline class. (No customs can mimic the starter paths you choose).

Then thirdly do you mean that instead of sage mode giving you the supreme in Strength and Speed it gets moved to the others? Because it naturally gives you a supreme in all of them for free.

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Okay so here slight problem here taking half damage from from a technique can't work because you aren't paying anything to gain this effect as sage mode has no sustained cost. or even a cost to activate. As a replacement I would reword it to say that this form has a sustained cost and anything below it's rank can't get through at all or you can freely expend chakra in order weaken a jutsu of this type when it hits you and if it's at or below the rank you cast this effect at then it's removed.

After that you still can't give overwhelming to your lava only because it still conflicts with the customs giving overwhelming rule as well as crossing into bloodknight ability from the bloodline class. (No customs can mimic the starter paths you choose).

Then thirdly do you mean that instead of sage mode giving you the supreme in Strength and Speed it gets moved to the others? Because it naturally gives you a supreme in all of them for free.

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Ah I think I see where we might be having a misunderstanding.

It's specifically a modification to the Hoshigaki Sage Mode which does give a specific supreme boost in strength and speed.

I was under the impression the Hoshigaki Sage Mode is its own transformation with its own rules? On the other hand is it perhaps an extended Sage Mode also?

Also it says

"Water techniques and bukijutsu overwhelm same ranked techniques, following normal sage mode rules."

By making Yoton/Lava techniques overwhelming it's just switching one thing for another. In fact it's dropping the ability to overwhelm with Bukijutsu.

Is the expenditure of gained Natural Chakra an acceptable cost? I was going to suggest the form expends part of its Natural Chakra pool automatically to achieve some effect. Perhaps nullifying fire and water based attacks completely in place of the resistance?  

[RobinBankz]

Character: Niko Hatake (Still Working on New Profile) Last of my Customs
Technique Name: Re-Quip (Lightning Seal Augment)
Rank: D-B
Type: Bloodline Ninjutsu
Element: Fuinjutsu
Description: With the use of the lightning seal, the user can access one of four of their custom weapons sealed inside of the seal and immediately switch that weapon with another custom weapon they have sealed. This counts as a supplemental activation. The technique that follows can only be one rank lower than the original activation of this technique. This means if the user spends a B-rank amount of chakra to activate, the activation that follows can only be C-rank. C-rank means D-rank, and D-rank means E-rank.

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This is first custom since coming back. Unsure how it works still but help would be appreciated if there are issues biggrin

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[ZephyrsBlade]

Character: Taketori Kaguya
Technique Name: [ Dance of the Jabillo ]
Rank: C - S
Type: Kaguya Bloodline --- Bukijutsu [Complex]
Element: N/A
Description: Drawing inspiration from a certain bukijutsu style, [ Dance of the Jabillo ] launches a mass of bone blades at opponents while creating a restrictive battlefield condition with the landed weapons. Taketori gathers chakra in and fires a piece of his spine either into the air or at an opponent. The spine then becomes a mass of bone blades, starting at 150 at C-rank and increasing by 50 per additional rank, which can be launched at an opponent's general direction or rained down if it is launched directly up. [ Dance of the Jabillo ] is compatible with the blade-related bukijutsu styles Taketori knows.

Technique Name:[ Dance of the Ironwood ]
Rank: E - B
Type: Bloodline (Complex)
Element: N/A
Description: While most Kaguya clan members focus on creating weapons with their bones, Taketori has specialized in creating defensive armaments and weapons with his. For armor, Taketori can create a set of bone armor by expending an equivalent rank of resources (B-rank chakra and stamina for Heavy Armor, C-rank for Medium armor, and so on) or a mix-and-match of armor (resources used are determined by the same calculation for Stamina Pool decrease). The created bone armor, due to Taketori's mastery of Kishitou Yoroi and King of the Iron Fist as well as the fact that they are inherently a part of him rather than a foreign shell, do not decrease his speed or range of movements. Defensive armaments such as a forehead protector, a kite shield, or a tower shield consume resources based on surface area and volume. As long as Taketori is in contact with the creations of [ Dance of the Ironwood ], he is able to utilize them with bloodline techniques, something regular armor would usually not allow for. The equipment created by this technique can be instantly reclaimed into his body as one way to dismiss themselves. Aside from the material being the Shikotsumyaku of the Kaguya, the equipment created is mundane.

Technique Name: [ Hymn of the Phantom Reeds ]
Rank: B
Type: Bloodline --- Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Occasionally, Taketori's area control interferes with itself. [ Hymn of the Phantom Reeds ] is a single handsign technique that allows Taketori and his own bone creations to ignore collision with themselves. For example, if Taketori notices someone hiding behind a pillar of bone created by his Dance of the Seedling Fern, he can fire a Ten Finger Drilling Bullet at them and have the bone projectile move through the pillar as though the pillar did not exist. [ Hymn of the Phantom Reeds ] can last up to five posts; if two objects are sharing the same space when this jutsu ends, the smaller one will be forced out of the larger one without causing any damage.

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Pad Chief

Ah I think I see where we might be having a misunderstanding.

It's specifically a modification to the Hoshigaki Sage Mode which does give a specific supreme boost in strength and speed.

I was under the impression the Hoshigaki Sage Mode is its own transformation with its own rules? On the other hand is it perhaps an extended Sage Mode also?

Also it says

"Water techniques and bukijutsu overwhelm same ranked techniques, following normal sage mode rules."

By making Yoton/Lava techniques overwhelming it's just switching one thing for another. In fact it's dropping the ability to overwhelm with Bukijutsu.

Is the expenditure of gained Natural Chakra an acceptable cost? I was going to suggest the form expends part of its Natural Chakra pool automatically to achieve some effect. Perhaps nullifying fire and water based attacks completely in place of the resistance?

Sorry this took so long.

So I've brought this into deliberation with other mods and it's been decided that while your overwhelming shifting isn't without it's draw backs, we just can't have members shifting around the overwhelming tag with customs. It opens up too many slippery slopes and just seems as making class disciplines redundant.

I also understand where you were getting the stat thing now and moving them around is acceptable. As for the defense from fire and water it's really up to you how exactly you want to split the cost up. (spend full nature chakra, split half with normal chakra, or pay all normal chakra) but basically in terms of defending from jutsu I would suggest having the ability to defend from the damage of these techniques by expending chakra equal to it's power and that will cost an activation. That way you can just flat not have to worry about the half damage stuff and just get full protection.

RobinBankz

Approved

ZephyrsBlade

Approved but just so you know regardless of how many you make under our recourse collisions here all of their collective strength will be adjusted and split amongst them to only be it's cast at rank total.  

[Pad Chief]

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It's fine. We're getting there. Keystones were added quite recently so I understand I'm probably treading some new ground with a "Super Sage Mode" effectively.

So to clarify:

Added that Sage Mode is maintained in lava. I thought about it again and there's a few techniques which would remove her from the ground but still submerge her in lava. Seems kinda stupid she's too cold to use them if she's in lava.

I replaced Overwhelming Yoton with a loss of Suiton Overwhelming and the ability to enter another Sage Mode at the same time. Super Sage Mode 2 if you will.

As there's a loss of an ability I added in a new one with a cost which is a semi-passive Aqua Jet. This is mostly for aesthetics to let me know if it needs to go.

Ta



Character: Breezy Songlin
Technique Name: Keystone: Enhanced Hoshigaki Sage Mode: Scion of the First Sea
Rank: S
Type: Senjutsu / Bloodline
Element: Fire, Water, Earth
Description: All members of the Hoshigaki Clan have the potential to access Sage Mode however the self-taught method which Breezy uses to gather nature chakra have vastly altered her Sage Mode Transformation making it completely unique to her.

Breezy gathers Natural Energy through geothermal heat taken from the ground as opposed to from the air or using clones (though it would be possible to collect natural energy with shadow clones). Wherever there is ground directly connected to the earth below then Breezy is able to gather natural energy to enter Sage Mode or if she's sufficiently close to the mantle of the planet. This is below sea level or when covered in the mantle's fluids.

The Hoshigaki Clan Sage Mode transformation cannot be used by her but her method of gathering chakra causes drastic changes being only superficially similar in that it is a Sage Mode.

In terms of appearance it's entirely its own transformation. The transformation makes Breezy's hair a glowing orange that flows like molten rock and changes her eyes from the usual Hoshigaki Clan's into a deep emerald green version of those eyes. Her usual blue skin also takes on the same orange glowing tone with obsidian black visible veins and arteries. A current of hot air whips around her into the sky.

This method of gathering alters the transformation and enhances it in the following ways.

Generates 50 Nature Chakra each post provided one part of her body is in contact with the ground, if she is below sea level or if she is completely submerged in lava or magma.

The transformation ends when there is no part of her attached to the ground and she is above sea level and not submerged in molten rock.

It loses the ability to overwhelm with water techniques (largely because it cannot use them) but can be used simultaneously with another Sage Mode unlike ordinary Hoshigaki Sage Mode. It inherits all the benefits from the other Sage Mode but retains the appearance and natural energy generation of Ascended Sage Mode adding the additional Sage Mode to her own.

Water Techniques become Yoton Release Techniques. All water is replaced with lava (or magma if she's fighting underground).

While active Ascended Sage Mode provides a supreme bonus to Fortitude and Reflex instead of Strength and Speed.

While this transformation is active and another is within 55ft they gain one rank of Dehydration for each post they end within that range. The effect doubles for each 25ft closer they move.

All bodily fluids are replaced with molten magma until the end of the transformation and the body is modified to withstand this while the transformation is active. This renders Breezy resistant to Fire and Water techniques meaning that if she expends chakra, natural energy or a combination of the two equal to the technique used she can completely nullify it as long as that technique is Fire or Water based.

Finally the Aqua Jet technique becomes passively active at all times. It requires its usual cost every eight posts instead of four and can consume either chakra or natural energy to power itself. Aqua Jet takes on the expected orange hue of molten rock.

During this transformation Breezy can see through magma and stone as though it were completely see through.

She obtains complete immunity to naturally (non-chakra based) occurring lava and magma and can move through magma and lava like water.

As a Keystone the transformation also gives access to its own special techniques some of which are available only in the transformed state and some which are merely enhanced by it. These are detailed separately.