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[XxMusic_Is_My_Life16xX]

Kurisuchin Saiyuki

Thank you for informing! Have fun  

[Poisonous Pumpkin]

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"Kurisuchin Saiyuki"

Don't worry about it  

[SoujiAtsumi]

Kurisuchin Saiyuki

It's cool, have a safe trip, I hope you have fun! =D  

[Phoenix347]

Oh a paintball event. twisted  

[Phoenix347]

Decided on makin a second character, this one oughta be fun for anyone who wants to interact with him~  

[thewomboldt]

Bored bleh bleh bleh  

[Phoenix347]

Brrrrr, not sure if I should finally submit my new character...
My biggest issue is his ability will prevent its acceptance so I'd like some feedback on him if anyone is willing;
This one's style is pretty much influenced by ancient Egypt, that's your warning XD
Edit; Scratch that, changing him up so he should be an easy acceptance. I wish I could get the ability to work, but at this point I can't see a good way to get it to do so.  

[xXDestructive_MindXx]

Phoenix347

Brrrrr, not sure if I should finally submit my new character...
My biggest issue is his ability will prevent its acceptance so I'd like some feedback on him if anyone is willing;
This one's style is pretty much influenced by ancient Egypt, that's your warning XD

If I may be so frank, his ability reminds me
of Ouma Shu from Guilty Crown. If you've
watched it, you can see Shu isn't soo op,
like how this guys ability strikes(to me).
If you could, maybe, put an extra condition
in there which prevents him from just randomly
extracting a soul from somebody.

Like, Shu can only pull out someone's void
when he looks in their eyes. This is just me
thinking, but you might need one, if you think
it'll be denied.

Once again, this is just me speculating.

 

[Phoenix347]

xXDestructive_MindXx

Phoenix347

Brrrrr, not sure if I should finally submit my new character...
My biggest issue is his ability will prevent its acceptance so I'd like some feedback on him if anyone is willing;
This one's style is pretty much influenced by ancient Egypt, that's your warning XD

If I may be so frank, his ability reminds me
of Ouma Shu from Guilty Crown. If you've
watched it, you can see Shu isn't soo op,
like how this guys ability strikes(to me).
If you could, maybe, put an extra condition
in there which prevents him from just randomly
extracting a soul from somebody.

Like, Shu can only pull out someone's void
when he looks in their eyes. This is just me
thinking, but you might need one, if you think
it'll be denied.

Once again, this is just me speculating.

Ya, the ability is inspired from GC and I tried to find a good way to prevent it and if you read it I put a restriction requiring the person's full name and being close so theoretically he couldn't do it from across the city. I even wanted to use shu as the character image, but it would be too similar to the official character so it would have been rejected like that.
See above for anyone curious.  

[WhitersNote]

yo punny nut

Was that quote unintentional? I have no idea what was going on. sweatdrop  

[Tragic lVlelody]

xXDestructive_MindXx

Sorry I haven't replied yet. I've just had a few things on my mind. I promise to reply within the next couple days though. sweatdrop