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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 2:41 pm
Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Too bad wishes never come true Wow you could get away with so many things in that magazine.. I wonder.. XD Hmm you can send stuff under a pen name. Turtle is infamous and has been submitting stuff for, I kid you not, 6 years.... high school is 4 years eek I would say we could put your stuff in my schools magazine under a pen name and I could mail you a copy...but people generally don't agree with my ideas... burning_eyes That person must have been left back couple times O.o; Thanks for the gesture but I'd prefer to put things under my own name, well I do have a pen name on DA though it is my real name just spelled differently. And anyway I doubt anyone would like it, it's easy to get about 4 people to read it at school just by watching me write it. It's not really worth wasting your time with it. Can I read something you wrote? You can PM it to me if you want. Sure, I write poems and stories -shrugs- http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/art/Michelle-and-the-Werewolf-s-Curse-Chapter-1-393346758 http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/gallery/35367047 Take your pick I read your poem Forest to City and I love the last line "It turns into a town more of those things." It's clear it's from the animals point of view and they don't know how else to describe it through their terror and disgust. I like the format of your story and I like where you're going with it. Can I make a suggestion? It's not to change the format of the story.
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 2:52 pm
Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Too bad wishes never come true Wow you could get away with so many things in that magazine.. I wonder.. XD Hmm you can send stuff under a pen name. Turtle is infamous and has been submitting stuff for, I kid you not, 6 years.... high school is 4 years eek I would say we could put your stuff in my schools magazine under a pen name and I could mail you a copy...but people generally don't agree with my ideas... burning_eyes That person must have been left back couple times O.o; Thanks for the gesture but I'd prefer to put things under my own name, well I do have a pen name on DA though it is my real name just spelled differently. And anyway I doubt anyone would like it, it's easy to get about 4 people to read it at school just by watching me write it. It's not really worth wasting your time with it. Can I read something you wrote? You can PM it to me if you want. Sure, I write poems and stories -shrugs- http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/art/Michelle-and-the-Werewolf-s-Curse-Chapter-1-393346758 http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/gallery/35367047 Take your pick I read your poem Forest to City and I love the last line "It turns into a town more of those things." It's clear it's from the animals point of view and they don't know how else to describe it through their terror and disgust. I like the format of your story and I like where you're going with it. Can I make a suggestion? It's not to change the format of the story. "Forest to city" and my other poem "Goodbye Good Times" are meant to describe how an animal sees it's home and/or family being destroyed, they refer to humans as things cause they aren't like them. Kind of how we refer to animals as "it" even when we do know the gender Not to change the format? What do you mean?
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 3:16 pm
Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf That person must have been left back couple times O.o; Thanks for the gesture but I'd prefer to put things under my own name, well I do have a pen name on DA though it is my real name just spelled differently. And anyway I doubt anyone would like it, it's easy to get about 4 people to read it at school just by watching me write it. It's not really worth wasting your time with it. Can I read something you wrote? You can PM it to me if you want. Sure, I write poems and stories -shrugs- http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/art/Michelle-and-the-Werewolf-s-Curse-Chapter-1-393346758 http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/gallery/35367047 Take your pick I read your poem Forest to City and I love the last line "It turns into a town more of those things." It's clear it's from the animals point of view and they don't know how else to describe it through their terror and disgust. I like the format of your story and I like where you're going with it. Can I make a suggestion? It's not to change the format of the story. "Forest to city" and my other poem "Goodbye Good Times" are meant to describe how an animal sees it's home and/or family being destroyed, they refer to humans as things cause they aren't like them. Kind of how we refer to animals as "it" even when we do know the gender Not to change the format? What do you mean? For writing stories, my English/creative writing teacher, who is literally my second mother, told me "when writing, describe the scene as you would to a blind person." First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 3:36 pm
Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf That person must have been left back couple times O.o; Thanks for the gesture but I'd prefer to put things under my own name, well I do have a pen name on DA though it is my real name just spelled differently. And anyway I doubt anyone would like it, it's easy to get about 4 people to read it at school just by watching me write it. It's not really worth wasting your time with it. Can I read something you wrote? You can PM it to me if you want. Sure, I write poems and stories -shrugs- http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/art/Michelle-and-the-Werewolf-s-Curse-Chapter-1-393346758 http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/gallery/35367047 Take your pick I read your poem Forest to City and I love the last line "It turns into a town more of those things." It's clear it's from the animals point of view and they don't know how else to describe it through their terror and disgust. I like the format of your story and I like where you're going with it. Can I make a suggestion? It's not to change the format of the story. "Forest to city" and my other poem "Goodbye Good Times" are meant to describe how an animal sees it's home and/or family being destroyed, they refer to humans as things cause they aren't like them. Kind of how we refer to animals as "it" even when we do know the gender Not to change the format? What do you mean? For writing stories, my English/creative writing teacher, who is literally my second mother, told me "when writing, describe the scene as you would to a blind person." First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface Describing something like that to a blind person is impossible, they're blind, they don't know what anything looks like. Lol I needed to put that in there I start to become my characters when I'm writing XD So if Michelle's depressed then I'm depressed. It's how I write and how it makes my characters more relate with other people. Michelle isn't afraid of Eddie she just wanted him to let go of her, she's witch it's normal for her to see the unnatural. Eddie isn't in pain because like Michelle's "flashback" shows that she has done the spell on him when they were kids, Eddie is use to the pain by now. Besides in my description I even put that my ability to describe things isn't the greatest. If you looked at the first chapter when I first wrote it you'd see that I have improved in some parts, there was a lot of words out of place and repeated some even missing
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 3:41 pm
Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Sure, I write poems and stories -shrugs- http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/art/Michelle-and-the-Werewolf-s-Curse-Chapter-1-393346758 http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/gallery/35367047 Take your pick I read your poem Forest to City and I love the last line "It turns into a town more of those things." It's clear it's from the animals point of view and they don't know how else to describe it through their terror and disgust. I like the format of your story and I like where you're going with it. Can I make a suggestion? It's not to change the format of the story. "Forest to city" and my other poem "Goodbye Good Times" are meant to describe how an animal sees it's home and/or family being destroyed, they refer to humans as things cause they aren't like them. Kind of how we refer to animals as "it" even when we do know the gender Not to change the format? What do you mean? For writing stories, my English/creative writing teacher, who is literally my second mother, told me "when writing, describe the scene as you would to a blind person." First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface Lol I needed to put that in there I start to become my characters when I'm writing XD So if Michelle's depressed then I'm depressed. It's how I write and how it makes my characters more relate with other people. Michelle isn't afraid of Eddie she just wanted him to let go of her, she's witch it's normal for her to see the unnatural. Eddie isn't in pain because like Michelle's "flashback" shows that she has done the spell on him when they were kids, Eddie is use to the pain by now. Besides in my description I even put that my ability to describe things isn't the greatest. If you looked at the first chapter when I first wrote it you'd see that I have improved in some parts, there was a lot of words out of place and repeated some even missing I totally understand the whole "I become my character" thing. I do it to, especially when I draw xp If you said you improved since last time and you keep writing, then, over time, you will improve even more. I will totally keep reading. Keep me in touch when new chapters come out! I'm really liking this story! emotion_kirakira Sometimes that's helped me, and something I gather you do too, is read a LOT of fantasy books. Especially writers such as James Patterson and books like the Septimus Heap series and the Grace series.
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 3:52 pm
Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Sure, I write poems and stories -shrugs- http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/art/Michelle-and-the-Werewolf-s-Curse-Chapter-1-393346758 http://midnighthuntingwolf.deviantart.com/gallery/35367047 Take your pick I read your poem Forest to City and I love the last line "It turns into a town more of those things." It's clear it's from the animals point of view and they don't know how else to describe it through their terror and disgust. I like the format of your story and I like where you're going with it. Can I make a suggestion? It's not to change the format of the story. "Forest to city" and my other poem "Goodbye Good Times" are meant to describe how an animal sees it's home and/or family being destroyed, they refer to humans as things cause they aren't like them. Kind of how we refer to animals as "it" even when we do know the gender Not to change the format? What do you mean? For writing stories, my English/creative writing teacher, who is literally my second mother, told me "when writing, describe the scene as you would to a blind person." First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface Lol I needed to put that in there I start to become my characters when I'm writing XD So if Michelle's depressed then I'm depressed. It's how I write and how it makes my characters more relate with other people. Michelle isn't afraid of Eddie she just wanted him to let go of her, she's witch it's normal for her to see the unnatural. Eddie isn't in pain because like Michelle's "flashback" shows that she has done the spell on him when they were kids, Eddie is use to the pain by now. Besides in my description I even put that my ability to describe things isn't the greatest. If you looked at the first chapter when I first wrote it you'd see that I have improved in some parts, there was a lot of words out of place and repeated some even missing I totally understand the whole "I become my character" thing. I do it to, especially when I draw xp If you said you improved since last time and you keep writing, then, over time, you will improve even more. I will totally keep reading. Keep me in touch when new chapters come out! I'm really liking this story! emotion_kirakira Sometimes that's helped me, and something I gather you do too, is read a LOT of fantasy books. Especially writers such as James Patterson and books like the Septimus Heap series and the Grace series. Lol Well I'm currently working on chapter 2 so don't worry it'll be around by next week hopefully. I hate reading though, I can't get past 10 pages without getting bored. Authors sometimes over do it with the details. That it gets to the point where I'm like just say it's an oak tree, a forest or they have long black hair and done. It's the main reason I prefer manga and comics =w=; I mean I can read an article just fine but if I see a whole book in front of me I get intimidated cause I can't picture anything they write down. It's the main reason I never did my summer reading, even when my mother forced me.
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 4:13 pm
Darkness Dragons Revenge First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface I almost forgot, if you look very closely to the human face we have little hairs. I noticed this when I was looking at my lil sis's face once. Also have you ever watch like movies of where werewolves transform? They grow hair in all the normal places we do it's just more than what humans normally have. We grow hair on our legs, arms, back, chest, stomach, "that place" and a few other places. I don't believe it should be painful for a werewolf to grow hair. You're right about the bones shifting though
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 4:29 pm
Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface I almost forgot, if you look very closely to the human face we have little hairs. I noticed this when I was looking at my lil sis's face once. Also have you ever watch like movies of where werewolves transform? They grow hair in all the normal places we do it's just more than what humans normally have. We grow hair on our legs, arms, back, chest, stomach, "that place" and a few other places. I don't believe it should be painful for a werewolf to grow hair. You're right about the bones shifting though One of my favorite book series by James Paterson: Maximum Ride is a manga. I suggest you read it. I think you will find it to your liking cat_3nodding Okay, weird question time: Have you ever pet a wolf?
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 4:53 pm
Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface I almost forgot, if you look very closely to the human face we have little hairs. I noticed this when I was looking at my lil sis's face once. Also have you ever watch like movies of where werewolves transform? They grow hair in all the normal places we do it's just more than what humans normally have. We grow hair on our legs, arms, back, chest, stomach, "that place" and a few other places. I don't believe it should be painful for a werewolf to grow hair. You're right about the bones shifting though One of my favorite book series by James Paterson: Maximum Ride is a manga. I suggest you read it. I think you will find it to your liking cat_3nodding Okay, weird question time: Have you ever pet a wolf? Okay then I'll go check it out Nope, I don't experience life remember? XP
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 4:56 pm
Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface I almost forgot, if you look very closely to the human face we have little hairs. I noticed this when I was looking at my lil sis's face once. Also have you ever watch like movies of where werewolves transform? They grow hair in all the normal places we do it's just more than what humans normally have. We grow hair on our legs, arms, back, chest, stomach, "that place" and a few other places. I don't believe it should be painful for a werewolf to grow hair. You're right about the bones shifting though One of my favorite book series by James Paterson: Maximum Ride is a manga. I suggest you read it. I think you will find it to your liking cat_3nodding Okay, weird question time: Have you ever pet a wolf? Okay then I'll go check it out Nope, I don't experience life remember? XP Awh! Well if you ever see an add for a Renaissance Fair, GO BOY GO! You wont be disappointed! 3nodding That's where I saw 3 wolves and I got to pet them! Their fur was really thick and coarse on the bigger wolf. If a person were suddenly and rapidly growing hair like that, it would at least by itchy.
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 5:01 pm
Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface I almost forgot, if you look very closely to the human face we have little hairs. I noticed this when I was looking at my lil sis's face once. Also have you ever watch like movies of where werewolves transform? They grow hair in all the normal places we do it's just more than what humans normally have. We grow hair on our legs, arms, back, chest, stomach, "that place" and a few other places. I don't believe it should be painful for a werewolf to grow hair. You're right about the bones shifting though One of my favorite book series by James Paterson: Maximum Ride is a manga. I suggest you read it. I think you will find it to your liking cat_3nodding Okay, weird question time: Have you ever pet a wolf? Okay then I'll go check it out Nope, I don't experience life remember? XP Awh! Well if you ever see an add for a Renaissance Fair, GO BOY GO! You wont be disappointed! 3nodding That's where I saw 3 wolves and I got to pet them! Their fur was really thick and coarse on the bigger wolf. If a person were suddenly and rapidly growing hair like that, it would at least by itchy. It'll have to wait until I move out of the house and have my freedom Wait did you just say boy? -snickers- XDD Yes it would be itchy, it wouldn't hurt though. But anyway like I said Eddie is use to it by now so he doesn't feel the pain. Think of it as when you exercise for the first time in years, your body aches but as you continue to do it everyday it doesn't hurt anymore.
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 5:09 pm
Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge First off, I have to say I did laugh when Eddie was in Michelle's house and she yelled "Wait...what are you doing in my house!" I noticed when, in your story Michelle and the Werewolf's Curse, when Eddie was transforming, you picked out specifics like his ears growing longer and his nose and mouth extending. A transformation like that cant be painless. His bones are shifting and thick, coarse hair is piercing his skin. Try also placing yourself in the characters shoes. Describing that pain and how Michelle would react (fear? worry?) in detail will entice a reader. Sorry if it's too much redface I almost forgot, if you look very closely to the human face we have little hairs. I noticed this when I was looking at my lil sis's face once. Also have you ever watch like movies of where werewolves transform? They grow hair in all the normal places we do it's just more than what humans normally have. We grow hair on our legs, arms, back, chest, stomach, "that place" and a few other places. I don't believe it should be painful for a werewolf to grow hair. You're right about the bones shifting though One of my favorite book series by James Paterson: Maximum Ride is a manga. I suggest you read it. I think you will find it to your liking cat_3nodding Okay, weird question time: Have you ever pet a wolf? Okay then I'll go check it out Nope, I don't experience life remember? XP Awh! Well if you ever see an add for a Renaissance Fair, GO BOY GO! You wont be disappointed! 3nodding That's where I saw 3 wolves and I got to pet them! Their fur was really thick and coarse on the bigger wolf. If a person were suddenly and rapidly growing hair like that, it would at least by itchy. It'll have to wait until I move out of the house and have my freedom Wait did you just say boy? -snickers- XDD Yes it would be itchy, it wouldn't hurt though. But anyway like I said Eddie is use to it by now so he doesn't feel the pain. Think of it as when you exercise for the first time in years, your body aches but as you continue to do it everyday it doesn't hurt anymore. Yes I called you boy! -smushes your face- And you can't leave your house? You don't do that? Ever?
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 5:16 pm
Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge One of my favorite book series by James Paterson: Maximum Ride is a manga. I suggest you read it. I think you will find it to your liking cat_3nodding Okay, weird question time: Have you ever pet a wolf? Okay then I'll go check it out Nope, I don't experience life remember? XP Awh! Well if you ever see an add for a Renaissance Fair, GO BOY GO! You wont be disappointed! 3nodding That's where I saw 3 wolves and I got to pet them! Their fur was really thick and coarse on the bigger wolf. If a person were suddenly and rapidly growing hair like that, it would at least by itchy. It'll have to wait until I move out of the house and have my freedom Wait did you just say boy? -snickers- XDD Yes it would be itchy, it wouldn't hurt though. But anyway like I said Eddie is use to it by now so he doesn't feel the pain. Think of it as when you exercise for the first time in years, your body aches but as you continue to do it everyday it doesn't hurt anymore. Yes I called you boy! -smushes your face- And you can't leave your house? You don't do that? Ever? -laughs then pinches cheek- Oh you silly I am not a guy, my avi might be but I am not haha xD Well yeah I leave the house to go to a nearby store to buy things or to walk my dog, off times to got to the art store for things. The city I live in now is ridiculously big I can't go anywhere too far without a car or bus.
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 5:21 pm
Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge Ydna Wolf Darkness Dragons Revenge One of my favorite book series by James Paterson: Maximum Ride is a manga. I suggest you read it. I think you will find it to your liking cat_3nodding Okay, weird question time: Have you ever pet a wolf? Okay then I'll go check it out Nope, I don't experience life remember? XP Awh! Well if you ever see an add for a Renaissance Fair, GO BOY GO! You wont be disappointed! 3nodding That's where I saw 3 wolves and I got to pet them! Their fur was really thick and coarse on the bigger wolf. If a person were suddenly and rapidly growing hair like that, it would at least by itchy. It'll have to wait until I move out of the house and have my freedom Wait did you just say boy? -snickers- XDD Yes it would be itchy, it wouldn't hurt though. But anyway like I said Eddie is use to it by now so he doesn't feel the pain. Think of it as when you exercise for the first time in years, your body aches but as you continue to do it everyday it doesn't hurt anymore. Yes I called you boy! -smushes your face- And you can't leave your house? You don't do that? Ever? -laughs then pinches cheek- Oh you silly I am not a guy, my avi might be but I am not haha xD Well yeah I leave the house to go to a nearby store to buy things or to walk my dog, off times to got to the art store for things. The city I live in now is ridiculously big I can't go anywhere too far without a car or bus. ...
I had a feeling after you acted weirdly to "boy" that you were a girl. -mumbles to self- deceiving aviAaaaaannyyyyy wayyyyy why not just tell your mom that you're going to the park? That's where Renn fairs usually are. Only problem is, you're gonna wanna come home with EVERYTHING! (And you will come home with stuff) And just take a bus there. Which state do you live in again?
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2013 5:23 pm
Man now I really wanna know what you look like 3nodding
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