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 Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:42 pm
its grace SMILE thanks :D
i knew there was a reason for PMing you xD
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 6:45 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:10 pm
fading_clover //
White/Gold -- In my opinion, it looks a little…messy~
The part that bothers me is the feather-like thing on the head. I don’t know why you have it there, it just looks strange and like her hair is sticking up. You don’t need it on the head because her hair is white, and that pretty much takes care of the white up there. I would really get rid of it!
I would also say you don’t need the swirls in the background. I mean, they can stay, but they aren’t necessary.
Other than those little things, the white and gold is pretty evenly distributed…although it looks just a tad heavy around the middle. But that’s no big deal~
Overall, 3.6/10
Red/White/Brown -- My first thought is that it’s a little cluttered…if I were to at one point draw the avatar, I would probably take things off because it's hard to understand. Having said that, although a little cluttered, it still looks pretty good. The notes(?) from her head look strange so I think you could do without. The white on her head is a little strong, but I don’t think it would be easy to cover up so I don’t know what to suggest. It's just the hair~
Her mid-area is too cluttered, again. I would also suggest some more red on the avatar. It’s not powerful enough to stand out as much as the brown and white does.
As for the black, either get rid of the butterfly near her foot or add more to the whole avatar. The small amount on her head really doesn’t stick out much, so it’s not necessary to have the butterfly. I would say don't worry about black. If you still want black, though, I would go for demonic anklets instead.
Overall, 4.2/10
White/Purple -- So…instead of just white and purple, the avatar is kind of mixed in with a light shade of blue because of how the white clothes shade. Well, that’s fine and all for the most part, but the head is just white, so it looks off compared to everything else. Again, the avatar looks a little cluttered…and I would say it’s because of the unicorn behind her, but that’s just me. I suppose it adds to the avatar to accentuate the colors, but it’s just not my cup of tea.
Maybe I could suggest Girl’s Punk Streak Purple hair to even out the purple and white up top? Other than that, I would say it’s alright.
Overall, 2.7/10
Current Dream Avatar – So I see teal, blue, and white.. I also see two different colors of teal; the one for the skirt and head, and then for the eyes and other accessories. For the majority, it works well. But, I think there is too much on her head. Now, the blue, unfortunately, don’t go as well. The corset and leggings under the white pants do not match. One is darker. The arms match more than the corset does, so try to match them all or use more of the dark blue.
Next, the white still feels a little overpowering due to her hair up top. Also, the boots are way bright compared to everything else. I’m not sure what exactly to suggest in this case…but I will say to just even the colors out a bit more. Maybe take something off her head, there’s way too much there.
Overall, 3.2/10
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Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:46 am
ehh gimme a rate on current avvie.
hmm i guess you could say it is some sort of succubus(definitely spelt that wrong whee ).
colours used teal & angelic blue
shades used black, white and grey
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Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:42 pm
Dream Ava: 
i just thought the twilight skin and the regular skin together would match the "heavenly awesome"(: Rate Please?
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Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:46 am
aughhh
i tried to make it better D:
was it better the way it was or is it better now?
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:08 pm
Time for another rate?
Also, any suggestions for gold/yellow items for the torso area?
I can't think of anything besides the tattoos, and they don't look too well
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:21 pm
I'll get to everyone...hopefully tomorrow~
Sorry for the wait!
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 7:50 pm
its grace SMILE aughhh
i tried to make it better D:
was it better the way it was or is it better now?
Sorry, not really sure what else to say~
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:01 pm
pxxn // Sorry for the late reply pxxn~ I’m pretty sure your avatar has changed since you posted so I’m just going to go and rate your current avatar, if that’s ok.
I have to say it’s a bit much…too much BAM and glitter. But it’s hot!
;D That’s undeniable. The parrot doesn’t go though.
It also has quite a bit too much black on the bottom. Although there is gold and the wings, it’s still a bit too much. Your avatar’s hair also doesn’t quite go. It doesn’t match the other colors, although it’s still a good color.
Overall, 5/10
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:02 pm
fading_clover // Well…I’m not much for the single-color things personally, cause I just feel it’s too boring to impress. I dunno, I don’t really get it. It’s way too much of just they color that I’m distracted, and I think you should a** something else…like another color.
Overall, 0/10
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:03 pm
Magadei // Hey Magadei~
So, to start, consider changing the hair to an actually bright gold/yellow hair color, cause it’s off with the current color. It’s doesn’t match the rest of the gold around the avatar so it looks a little strange, although it could be worse lol.
You did do a good job at evening out the black and gold, though, so yay! The scythe, though, it’s working for me. It just doesn’t look right, although I guess the silver/white matches the dashes on the feet. But still~ I would suggest that rather than having the scythe to even out those colors, but something white on the head with the black and gold. I think that would work out better than the scythe.
Overall, 3/10
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:36 pm
ok so yea i changed it xDD
but any opinion on my NEW avi? :D
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 10:11 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:58 pm
its grace SMILE // Alright, let me see. My first comment would be lose the ice whip. Although a classic item that I haven’t seen in a while, the blue just doesn’t seem to work for me. You don’t have any light blue on the avatar other than the tip of the whip so yeah~ I would have worked it the whip was all the same color blue. ;D
And now, seeing as I am near her feet already, I’ll bring the leg warmers to your attention. They don’t match anything either…there is no color to even it out, cause the hair isn’t doing the trick. If only they had grey leg warmers~
Moving up only a little more, I think you should replace the red & white striped stocking with just plain white ones and then get rid of the leg warmers…maybe find some blue shoes? I think this will clear everything up and the red class socks will stick out more and even the red out to the bottom. (I hope n.n;; )
Now for the mid section. I think there’s way too much doing on with her bottom. I don’t really think the swim trucks are all that necessary…and they kind of make your avatar look fat. No offence. Other than that, the middle area looks fine to me.
Moving up around her shoulders. A bit too much blue if you ask me. Unfortunately, if you get rid of the scarf, you don’t have enough blue on her head. Perhaps you could find an item to fix that? I just think the scarf is too much. The pin is a nice touch though. Also, on her head, I think the Grizzly Hoodie bear thing isn’t necessary. There’s too much black there. Either keep the halo, or the hoodie accessorie. Same goes for the Coco and the Guitar. One or the other, or maybe replace them both with Demonbow accessory of wings? Not quite sure how that would look right now though so it’s up to you~
I do wish I could see more gold on her head…cause I think it’s covered up with the grizzly hoodie so…again, I would just lose it.
I do like the eyes though, very nice use of item!!
Overall, 4.3/10
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