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 Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 6:32 pm
@LKH: Thanks! The layering doesn't work, but it's really pretty, and gives me lots of ideas on how to make it work. >w< And your rate:
O 2/5
F 3/5
B 5/5
S 4/5
OL 7.5/10
--R: 21.5/30
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Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 7:21 pm
Thanks Jelly.  I'm glad you like the Tektek.
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Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 10:54 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 7:06 pm
May I have another #4 rate, and could you tell me what else I can do to my Avi to make it better?
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:48 pm
Sure thing:
O 2.5/5
F 4/5
B 5/5
S 5/5
OL 8/10
--R: 24.5/30
The red of the bow and the red on the chest don't match the other reds. The knees look somewhat barren; maybe a black sock could help there. Other than that, the style is consistent, and the balance well-thought out. The only reason for the low originality rating is the color them, which is extremely common--but you managed to pull it off without looking like a n00b, so I gave you half credit... you successfully resisted the temptation to turn your avatar into a demon, which proves impossible to some people. xD
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 1:23 pm
Thankies Jelly...May I have another #4? -I <3 your rate's-
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 6:40 pm
You're Welcome! >w<
Okay:
O 5/5
F 4/5
B 4/5
S 4/5
OL 8.5/10
--R: 25.5/30
I like this avatar a lot better: it has a more unique color-scheme. I commend the seemingly perfect balance of the red, black, and gold in this outfit. However, I believe there are a few things that need adjusting. First of all, and most noticeably, the petals are lavender-white, so it doesn't match the rest of the whites ("gray-whites"). Second, also on the color white, the shoes provide a chunk of white, contrasting to the white hemming of the jacket and the overall detailed torso. The effect draws eyes to the feet, then to the detailed body, but it leaves the head lacking something (especially if you take away the petals and the blue-white on the head. I suggest finding a hair pin of some sort (drop dead bone one?) to replace the white on the head. The blues and teals, on the other hand, are just scrunched in the center. I recommend a teal or blue hat (that regalia circlet might work, and it would replace the crown...). As for the feet area, the only way that might work that I can think of at the moment would be to find teal/blue socks and use the red leggings. Still, that might only yield a lack of red by the feet.
I've ranted long enough, I know you'll find a way to "Make It Work." ;D
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 12:17 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 12:39 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 1:04 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:47 pm
You're right, it does need a better hat... I thik I'll go look for one. Thank you!
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:29 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:37 pm
I'm wearing an edited version of your tektek!
Thanks again for it! >w<
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:55 pm
You might want to take the wings off.
I liked it. . .
Don't know if you will.
Oh and could you please tektek me??
]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=13839451
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:40 pm
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