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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:43 am
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Fenrir finally reached his final training scrolls. He wanted to learn them the most, so he saved them for last within the privacy of his home. It had taken him a long time but he had finally found scrolls containing the final dances of the Kaguya Clan. No longer would he have to wait to figure out the dances himself. He doubted his long forgotten memory had anymore clan techniques to reveal to him anyways. Moving on Fenrir read the scroll...

Dance of the Pines:
This is the third of the five dances that the Kaguya Clan utilizes. The user brings forth bones all from within their body and shoot them outwards in attempt to impale a running target. The user can also attack using these bones by spinning around, and can utilize them to halt the use of taijutsu from an opponent.

[1/7] Fenrir concentrated on his body and tried to make all of the bones in his body force themselves out. The task proved harder than it seemed, and Fenrir wasn't able to get them all right away.

[2/7] On the next attempt Fenrir was able to successfully shoot out all of the bones in his body. It was like he'd become a human pinecone.

[3/7] He soon found trying to attack was a different task. Fenrir practiced the most obvious and most lethal offensive capability the dance offered, spinning at incredibly fast speeds to turn his body into a whirling storm of death. The first try ended with Fenrir becoming extremely dizzy.

[4/7] Fenrir tried the steps again and made four complete rotations before having to stop and throw-up. Still not the impressive dance the Kaguya Clan was famous for.

[5/7] Fenrir practiced again and was able to make 7 rotations before getting too dizzy. He tried to clear his mind while he spun, thinking of the Hyuuga style as he made fast rotations. It still wasn't perfect yet though, by any means.

[6/7] The next attempt was a success and Fenrir easily rotated several times and even aim the slicing bones on his body in order to control where the spikes would hit the enemy's body.

[7/7] Fenrir practiced the ability to use his body spikes as weapons by making his body shoot out the spikes faster and use the energy of his body to capitalize on fierce combos. When it was done Fenrir had gained a new dance to add to his arsenal of clan techniques.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:34 am
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Fenrir was anxious to learn the next dance and so quickly read through the scroll...
Dance of the Steel Wire Flower:
This is the fourth of the five dances that the Kaguya Clan utilizes. The user brings out sword that is made out from their spinal collumn. The spinal column sword then stretches outwards and wraps around an opponent. Impaling them with its sharp spikes.

[1/7] Fenrir started learning the dance by concentrating on the formation of a greater spinal cord whip. He easily made one with several sharp spikes shooting out of it.

[2/7] Fenrir then practiced the jutsu steps of using the whip better in combat. He was soon able to use the whip much faster and with fewer movements as a solid sword.

[3/7] Now that the simpler parts of the dance were out of the way Fenrir concentrated on the main focus of the dance, ensnaring the opponent. It was obvious that speed and accuracy of latching on with the whip sword was the main focus. Fenrir took the time to practice switching the weapon from a sword to whip and then in reverse for split-second changes in combat style.

[4/7] After that was completed Fenrir concentrated on latching onto objects. This was the difficult part. Simply battering an object using the range of the whip was easy, but using it to wrap around and hold an object was another story. He failed to wrap the whip around a nearby tree.

[5/7] After some practice Fenrir was able to easily ensnare any stationary object within the whips physical range. He then worked on capturing moving targets, picking rabbits around the forest as targets. The rabbits were both extremely quick and a small target, so Fenrir figured that once he could capture one of them he could easily capture any normal shinobi, no matter what their rank. He failed the first time.

[6/7] He failed then next time as well. Fenrir focused on the basic steps of the dance and found that he was growing closer and closer to ensnaring the rabbits.

[7/7] The next attempt succeeded. Fenrir lashed out his whip at incredible speed, ensnared the rabbit in mid-stride, and then brought its impaled corpse back to Fenrir. He grinned as he walked back to the temple buildings. He'd won himself a trophy of his accomplishment.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 2:48 am
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Fenrir moves onto the next set of taijutsu based techniques before trying out the last dance of the Kaguya Clan. Somehow he figured he would need the energy it would provide him.

Initial Gate (Genin minimum)
Effect: 1/8 Speed and Taijutsu increase.
Description: Releases the brains limit on body muscles to achieve extra strength but does damage to tissue fibers.

[1/3] Fenrir concentrated on the first gate within his body and concentrated the chakra flow on it in an attempt to push it open. It didn't work the first time.

[2/3] Likewise the chakra wasn't enough the second time either. Fenrir pushed a shot of chakra into the gate in a large wave.

[3/3] The method worked! Fenrir was instantly able to feel his power dramitically increase as his body pushed itself past its normal limits to provide Fenrir with enhanced power!

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 2:58 am
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Fenrir moved onto the next gate scroll, which read...

Heal Gate (Chuunin minimum)
Effect: 1/8 Speed, Taijutsu, and Strength
Description: Releases the brains limit on body stamina thus a tired person will seem like he was miraculously starting off again.

[1/5] Fenrir started learning this jutsu by first opening the first gate. After that he tried sending his chakra further through the second gate in his body. It didn't work.

[2/5] He tried again, this time sending his chakra out in a strong stream of energy to burst the gate open. It didn't work.

[3/5] His next attempt worked. Fenrir successfully opened the second gate and was surprised at how instantly relieved and how renewed his energy was. Though he knew his real body was in more physical stress now than ever, without actually feeling it Fenrir felt so much power that he didn't pay it any attention.

[4/5] Fenrir learned to control his newfound power. After all, he couldn't use something he couldn't control, and since this was only the second gate if he couldn't control it then the other gates would be meaningless to him.

[5/5] With his next try Fenrir combined the activation energy he gained from opening the gates and easily controlled it so that his body wouldn't completely break apart from using it. A success, in Fenrir's book.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 3:44 am
Fenrir momentarily stopped his training for a lunch break with Tsuna. While eating Fenrir suddenly remembered Tera and made a wind clone to go back to the village and keep an eye on Tera as well as check out any new students in the academy. One of them would eventually be Fenrir's student after all.  
PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:52 am
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Fenrir moves on to train for opening the next gate after his break.

Life Gate (Chuunin minimum)
Effect: 1/6 Speed, Taijutsu, and Strength
Description: Located near the throat on the spinal cord. Releases the limit of electrical functions on the nervous system, thus transmitting more information at a higher rate and sends signals to the cells to produce more stamina at a faster rate.

[1/5] Fenrir sent his energy and opened the first gate, building power in his chakra to be able to open the other gates. The stream had to be perfect otherwise it wouldn't have enough power to get through the third gate.

[2/5] Next he sent his energy through the second gate, building power with the stream so that the third gate would be easier to unlock.

[3/5] Fenrir tried to open the third gate but his chakra flow had lost its momentum in the second gate. He would need to synchronize his chakra better if he planned to unleash the power of the third gate.

[4/5] Fenrir tried again by forcing his power through the first two gates. He held his hands in an X shape in front of his face and he found that it made the chakra flow through the gates much more effective. Now he tried once again to open the third gate.

[5/5] It was a success. The third gate was easily forced open and Fenrir felt the even greater amount of power flow through his system.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:44 pm
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Fenrir was about to take a break before pushing his body any farther but then all of the information his clone had gathered in the village came flooding back into him. He was running out of time. Fenrir hastily moved onto the next scroll.

Pain Gate (Chuunin minimum)
Effect: 1/5 Speed, Taijutsu, and Strength
Description: Located in between the lungs. Releases the limit of oxygen intake and thus makes circulatory systems work at a faster rate and produces more energy for the body to use. Causes the user to pass out when jutsu is released.

[1/5] Fenrir opened the first gate, keeping his energy in a constant powerful stream on the limiters so that he could force them open. He crossed his claws in an X over his face as he concentrated.

[2/5] Next he focuesed on the second gate. He quickly opened it, and the ground beneath his feet cracked from the immense chakra that was now lashing out at the environment, barely able to keep itself cooped up inside his body.

[3/5] Fenrir continued his momentum to open the third gate. It took a little effort, but he was able to make it work. He now pushed himself harder to open the fourth gate.

[4/5] The fourth gate was much harder to open. Fenrir pumped the chakra he'd unleashed from the other gates into it but it was still trying to keep itself closed. Fenrir began to glow a dark-blue aura around his body and his skin turned hot and dark red with the effort he was putting into unlocking the fourth gate.

[5/5] The color in Fenrir's eyes left themselves and the ground beneath Fenrir cracked itself and disintegrated within the amazing power of Fenrir's aura. His hair stood straight up on end and his fangs grew increasingly sharp giving him the appearance of some kind of demon as the fourth gate was opened. Fenrir immediately released the jutsu and fainted for a moment from the cost the jutsu had taken on his body.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:29 pm
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Fenrir quickly unrolls the scroll for the next gate...

Limit Gate (Chuunin minimum)
Effect: 1/4 Speed, Taijutsu, and Strength
Description: Located in the upper abdomen area. Releases the limit on how much chakra is stored and sent to body since this is the point where chakra is stored before consumption to other body parts or jutsu.

[1/5] Fenrir concentrates on the first gate and opens it with ease. Though they brought a lot of pain to the body, Fenrir found that opening the gates themselves became much easier the more you did it.

[2/5] Next Fenrir unlocks the second gate. Veins bulge in his forehead and his muscles become extraordinarily bigger as the chakra pulses through his system.

[3/5] The opening of the third gate followed that. Fenrir's chakra now became noticeable and the ground beneath him rumbles as his chakra tears away at it, unable to stay within his body.

[4/5] Fenrir now pushed his body to its limits. He opened the fourth gate with some difficulty and the ground cracked at his feet. Fenrir hadn't moved and yet his very power was creating a crater where he stood.

[5/5] Fenrir concentrated now more than ever and finally succeeded in opening the fifth gate. His chakra churned the air around him, creating a whirling barrier of power that pushed everything around him away. Fenrir quickly released the jutsu before his body damaged itself beyond timely repair.


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 2:41 am
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Fenrir moves onto the next set of taijutsu based techniques before trying out the last dance of the Kaguya Clan. Somehow he figured he would need the energy it would provide him.

Great Gate (Chuunin minimum)
Effect: 1/3 Speed, Taijutsu, and Strength
Description: Located near the intestine area. This gate removes the limit in the intestines to consume food that gives energy to the body, with this gate released the fat tissues or other useless energy source from the body will be consumed to give even more power to the user.

[1/5] Fenrir instantly sent himself through the first and second gates. At the level of gates he was trying to open the energy he was now exerting had to be more than anything he'd ever attempted before.

[2/5] The third stage opened up almost as easily. Fenrir felt the power surging through his veins as his chakra started to blow apart the ground beneath him.

[3/5] Fenrir opened up the fourth gate next. His skin grew red and his veins pulsed through his skin as if trying to break away from the body. Fenrir continued to surge the chakra into the gate limiters so that he could continue to open up the true potential his body had to offer.

[4/5] Soon Fenrir was able to open up the fifth gate. By now his chakra was blasting apart everything around him. The birds in the sky were swept away by his very aura. Now came the final test. He'd made the progress but now the true step of finally opening the sixth gate remained.

[5/5] Fenrir pushed his chakra into the gate limiter. By now he'd become very familiar with how the process worked but it was still so exhausting once it was done. After some lasting restraint the sixth gate opened and Fenrir's power increased even more, creating a crater at his feet. He quickly switched off the jutsu and found himself extremely tired even though he never moved during his gate training.


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:44 pm
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Exhausted Fenrir makes a handsign makes an exploding wind clone. "Go tell Daisuke at the gate that I'm going to be a little late." he muttered. "Also keep an eye on Tera and the rest of the village." The clone nodded and then headed out towards the village. Meanwhile Fenrir unrolled the last of his gate scrolls. He had looked around but somehow the scroll for the eighth gate must've been misplaced. No matter though, in Fenrir's condition he doubted he could've learned the jutsu then anyways. The seventh gate scroll read...

Shock Gate (Jounin minimum)
Effect: 1/2 Speed, Taijutsu, and Strength
Special: User is incapacitated after the jutsu ends or they run out of chakra.
Description: Located near the bladder area. Removes the limit on how fast the body can move. Removing of this gate removes the limit on the cleaning system of the body. This cleans out the wastes from dead body cells to feces produced by fat/protein consumption and lets the body work in a cleaner system and seemingly produce more power and stamina.

[1/7] Fenrir unlocked the first gate. He had to be extremely careful to keep the energy in his body balanced and push it into the right gates in order. He brought his hands over his face and crossed them into an X while he continued to release the gates.

[2/7] Next Fenrir unlocks the second gate. Veins bulge in his forehead and his muscles become extraordinarily bigger as the chakra pulses through his system.

[3/7] After that Fenrir successfully opens the third gate. His chakra now became noticeable and the ground beneath him rumbles as his chakra tears away at it, unable to stay within his body.

[4/7] He opened up the fourth gate next. His skin grew red and his veins pulsed through his skin as if trying to break away from the body. Fenrir continued to surge the chakra into the gate limiters so that he could continue to open up the true potential his body had to offer.

[5/7] Follwoing that Fenrir unleashed the power of the fifth gate. By now his chakra was blasting apart everything around him. His chakra acted like a tornado around his body.

[6/7] Fenrir was getting closer to his goal. He knew his body would probably give out soon from all the damage but he had to at least try for the seventh gate. With that in mind Fenrir pushed himself and unlocked the sixth gate. His power increased even more, creating a crater at his feet.

[7/7] Finally Fenrir reached the seventh gate. He'd been building his chakra as he opened the other gates for this perfect moment. He pushed everything he had into the seventh gate and it opened. The power it unleashed was phenominal. He still hadn't moved but his chakra was tearing apart the trees and dispersing the clouds in the sky. It was as if nature itself feared the power Fenrir was pushing himself towards. He turned it off, but as he did all chakra left his system and Fenrir collapsed on the spot, blacking out.




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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 3:24 pm
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Fenrir awoke in his bed. Tsuna pressed a damp washcloth against his forehead and told him he'd passed out after unlocking the seventh gate. He laughed and pushed his body to get up. Tsuna begged him to lie back down but Fenrir told her that he still needed to finish his training before he was too late to meet up with Daisuke. Fenrir pulled out his last scroll. It was a jounin level lightning jutsu, which read...

Raiton: Raikou Kousen no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Beam Technique)
Description: This is the pinnacle of the single-target ranged lightning jutsu. The attack from Lightning Blast has been upgraded further, making it into a beam twice as wide as before, and much more damaging. Targets hit head-on with this jutsu will experience a fantastic amount of pain and be stunned after the jutsu ends. Also, nearly missing with this jutsu also has some effect. Because of the high amount of voltage, small lightning bolts can arc from the beam to someone standing within two feet of it, causing shocks a little bit more damaging than those of Lightning Bolt technique. This jutsu can be ended prematurely by the user.

[1/7] Fenrir started learning the jutsu by forming powerful forces of lightning chakra in his hands. He focused on making his lightning blast technique more powerful.

[2/7] It didn't work, which Fenrir suspected as much. Instead Fenrir took the learning process in steps. First he tried making the blast into a continuous stream of lightning.

[3/7] That didn't work the first time either. Fenrir then remembered the chain lightning jutsu and tried using his experience from that to turn the blast into a stream once more.

[4/7] It worked, and a more powerful stream of lightning replaced the blast. Next Fenrir tried making the beam wider.

[5/7] It only slightly enlarged itself, and even then it lost some of its power. A complete failure in Fenrir's book. He tried again.

[6/7] This time the beam grew wider and still retained its power. Fenrir focused harder before his body gave out on him again in order to complete the jutsu and use it to its full potential.

[7/7] Finally Fenrir created a beam twice as wide as the original. The blast destroyed a couple of trees and it had an excellent range. Fenrir took one last rest before heading back to the village.


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:37 pm
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Fenrir packed his bags and replenished his weapon supply before telling Tsuna goodbye. She hugged him from behind just as he was about to leave saying how proud she was of him. Fenrir smiled slightly, not a grin or a smirk of any kind, but a genuine smile. With that he left Tsuna and headed for the village gates.









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PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 5:30 am
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Fenrir stopped by the house and dropped off some of the scrolls. He kept a few on him though including a few low ranking genjutsu scrolls, the list of medical ninja, and one or two lightning scrolls. After that he headed out to Grass Village. He remembered Masumi, the accomplished medical ninja, who he hoped would help him with the problem he encountered at the academy.









 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:09 am
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Fenrir made it home with some relief. He didn't rest though, and after greeting Tsuna he immediately went through the engineering books he'd grabbed from Zeramaru's base. He finally found one that dealt with the creation of blades. It wasn't as specific as Fenrir's would've like but he researched what he could on creating a weapon of his own. Hours passed by, and Fenrir labored on building his creation. He formed it out of his own bones, using his highly densified teeth. They regrew the fastest, so it was convenient for him to use his fangs as the fastest source of densified bone. When he was finished, Fenrir strapped the blade on his back and familiarized himself with it out in his personal training ground. Tsuna came to check in on him and dropped a serving plate in shock at the sight of the weapon. The blade was huge. It stayed connected to Fenrir through a long chain that curled around his right arm, made from the same bone material. She asked him what it was, to which Fenrir only grinned and dropped the sword on the ground. It made a deep crater in the earth just from its weight. "Gram" he growled.



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PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:48 am
New sword in hand, Fenrir made his way back to the village.  
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