Custom Jutsu Application

[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

XX_Clous_XX

Your Rank: Jonin
Ninja Class: Samurai
Name of Jutsu: Hostility Detection
Rank of Jutsu: S-Rank
Jutsu's Element: Universal
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? no
Description: With the lose of vision the user can compensate through the enhancement of their other 4 senses as well as increase mental capabilities. The technique itself allows the user to amplify their remaining four sense at will. They are able to detect danger from great lengths and sense incoming hostility.

Hearing: Can hear the slightest noises from great lengths away~ Like seeing with sound.
Smell: Can distinguish odors which are unfamiliar from those they know~
Touch: Temperature variation, pressure changes, and false sensations are more acute~
Taste: The user is able to distinguish unique flavors effectively~
Minds Eye: The user can essentially release chakra from their body creating an area in which they can visualize someone or something.

This is s-ranked because the jutsu can sense even the slightest sounds and such, which would mean assassins would have a hard time sneaking. The other benefits of the jutsu would be the fact that visual genjutsu would obviously not work on someone blind, but the other sense are also more immunized against weaker genjutsu due to their enhancement.

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It's gonna have to have a 1 post cooldown. Although it is pretty cool for a blind character I'm not gonna be able to let you spam it at will. I will let you get away with it being A ranked though. Being blind your other senses would be naturally enhanced so boosting them further wouldn't be far of a jump for you. Bad news though, is the better your senses are, the more susceptible you are to the respective triggers. Good hearing means it's easier to catch you in sound genjutsu and etc. The immunized part will have to go.  

[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

DevsangelKitsumi777

Your Rank: Genin

Ninja Class: Taijutsu

Name of Jutsu: Roxanne’s Leitmotif: Drama Queen by Sahar (Tambourine only of course)

Rank of Jutsu: Each member of The Idols is required to have a leitmotif. This song changes as the user changes. Thus, it is possible that as the user’s rank increases, the effects of this jutsu also increase or grow stronger.*

Jutsu's Element:Sound

Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu/Genjutsu?

Do you want your Jutsu added to the Guild List? No, since the effects of each leitmotif are unique to each user.

Description: Over a series of four posts, Roxanne performs her leitmotif. During this time, she dances and twirls to the rhythm she creates with her tambourine. Each jingle and beat she creates resonates with the target’s nervous system. Depending on the situation, Roxanne’s performance is seen as nothing but an intriguing or annoying act at first. However, over time, her target becomes more and more aware of the pulsating sounds emitting from his or her own body. By the fourth and final post, the sound of the target’s heartbeat becomes amplified to the point where it becomes a rather worrisome distraction. The almost sudden awareness of and shock at these sounds places stress on the target, which only causes their heart to beat faster. By the end of the fourth post, Roxanne ceases, the song ends, and the sound of the target's heartbeat returns to normal. However, this could be rather shocking, perhaps leaving the target with the impression that their heart has suddenly stopped.

Of course, this jutsu does have its weaknesses. One, Roxanne cannot stop dancing and playing her instrument, or she will have to restart. Thus, her opponent can simply attack her and disrupt the justsu. Furthermore, while Roxanne can dodge as she dances, she must be completely focused on playing her song, rendering her unable to attack without cancelling the jutsu. In order for the jutsu to have a higher probability of succeeding, it is best executed within a group or more peaceful environment.**

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*I’m actually uncertain about this as each member of The Idols is required to have a leitmotif. I hope it makes sense.
**I had a hard time coming up with the effects for her leitmotif. I’m not sure if this is particularly “epic” or feasible, but help and advice would be very much appreciated!

I praise you and your grammar. You make this bearable. Firstly I have to say that I'm unsure as to if the tambourine is triggering an illusion, or if this is ACTUALLY happening to them. The difference determines whether it sounds more like Genjustu than Ninjutsu so you can start by specifying that. Second point would be that the rank and thereby cost of it is unspecified. Other than that i think this tech is pretty clever I think. the split between Gen and Nin will determine anymore advice I have for you.  

[City in Slumber]

Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Cracks
Rank of Jutsu: Jonin
Jutsu's Element: It's a Genjutsu n00b
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? No
Description: The users has to wound the victim for the Jutsu to take place, whether its a miniscule scratch or a burn. Anything that breaks skin. The moment this happens, the victim's skin begins to rip and crack like clay, falling apart as the fractures travel up the victim's body from the start of the user's post to the end of the victim's next post. Then, on the user's second post, the cracks reach the head. The moment it starts to crack the head, the user loses touch with reality. They can feel their mentality cracking. Nothing will make sense anymore, and they will be left with the raw instinct to climb out of the Genjutsu, away from the insanity, and that driving force will be the only thing that could possibly save them from the madness. After this breach of the headspace, two posts are spent in this insanity before the patch is healed up and they touch the ground again.

When they are enveloped in madness, besides nonsensically trying to get out of the Genjutsu, they're essentially a useless vegetable for the next three of the victim's posts. On their fourth post, the jutsu wears off.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Houdini
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Jutsu's Element: We've been over this
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nope
Description: To activate the Genjutsu, the user snaps their fingers. If the victim hears and sees it, they will watch as the user disappears, and the horizon begins to collapse and fade. The sky will disintegrate as well as the ground, and the destructive void of what used to be the world will rush towards them, and then everything is gone and they are falling, falling into this white nothingness that surrounds them. While they fall, they are able to smell and hear perfectly, and they will be able to move to an extent, but they won't be able to walk or feel anything besides pain or pleasure. If the victim can't pull themselves out of the Genjutsu, they are released on their third post following the user's activation.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Breathe
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Jutsu's Element:Do I need to draw a picture for you
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nah.
Description: Breathe is a little more simple than something like Cracks or Houdini. After the user activates Breathe, the victim will suddenly find themselves incapable of doing so. They just can't get their brain to make their lungs work. They know how they're supposed to inhale, but they just can't bring themselves to do it. This jutsu does not wear off, although it's fairly easy to pull oneself out of. However... if someone doesn't as they very well might not if its used by a Genjutsu Specialist and they have particularly low chakra control, then they will pass out from breath loss. After passing out, the jutsu wears off... but then the victim is vulnerable. The brilliant part of this Genjutsu is that the victim might not know whether or not what they're experiencing is Genjutsu, and they just have a couple precious moments of oxygen to figure it out.

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[xxMomongaxx]

Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: The Real Bypass
Rank of Jutsu: A
Jutsu's Element: Medical
Jutsu Type: Medical
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Hex No
Description: This medical jutsu has the user to pay the required amount of chakra. This chakra paid will allow the user to use medical jutsu without any hand signs being required for the entire fight. This only works with medical jutsu and no other type of jutsu.
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[Solarius flare]

Your Rank:
Ninja CLASS: Sealing Master
Name of Jutsu: An Order from Above
Rank of Jutsu: S

Jutsu Type:Sealing
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List?No
Description:
This seal is meant to command one person to complete one activity of the user's choice. By writing an order on a paper seal and placing it on the base of a person's neck, it sends impulses along the spinal cord to the brain using chakra. This leaves the user to manipulate the person to whatever is said on the paper. However, there are many weaknesses. First, the seal only lasts for a week IRL after that it must be renewed. Second, the seal can only be placed when the other person is either asleep, unconscious, or revived. This stimulation makes it extremely hard to place, but can be easily achieved if the target is under a genjutsu or under another seal. There are also stipulations to what the target can and cannot do. He may not commit suicide under any circumstances, no walking off cliffs, etc. . He may die, but you can not make him purposefully kill himself, so go ahead make him stand there and kill him but if you placed this jutsu he could already be dead. That is the only major stipulation. He may wreck havoc in a village, deliver a message, guard you, and you can even have sex, if you are a girl and want his child...although that is kinda creepy.
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Your Rank:
Ninja CLASS: Sealing Jutsu
Name of Jutsu: Sweet Dreams
Rank of Jutsu: A

Jutsu Type:Sealing
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? No
Description:
While it seems like a genjusu at first, it actually uses sealing techniques. The technique basically slows brain activity and makes the target tired before falling into a light sleep. I stress light because you can't use this then attempt to carry them across country or do anything super loud. In addition, pain will also wake them up. It could be used as a medic to quiet a panicking target but you could not use it as anesthesia. In addition, pain will also wake them up. Overall, this is not really a combat technique but more of a support type. To use the jutsu, the seal may be placed anywhere on the body and requires two (2) posts to activate.
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[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

Holy Rinaku

Your Rank: Genin currently
Ninja Class:Assassin
Name of Jutsu: Assassin's playground: Dance of the petrified forest
Rank of Jutsu: A rank
Jutsu's Element:None
Jutsu Type:Bloodline ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List?no
Description: After a very quick set of seals the ground rumbles and shakes briefly. Thick stalks of bone roughly 10 foot in diameter sprout from the ground encrusted with a light redish hue suggesting blood. These are all IDENTICAL and are impossible to tell apart from tree to tree. They are equally spaced exactly 10 feet from each other in all directions for as far as the eye can see and each and every piece is exactly the same inside this "forest". They hold no lethal capacity in itself on creation but have the same properties as the users bone. The is similar to a jutsu already in the bloodline but is meant for confusion and entrapment. All senses are disoriented and it is nearly impossible to figure out ones direction without skills in navigation.
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There is no rightful cause for disorientation or confusion. All that happened was bones sprouting. Secondly, it's just Bracken Dance with an extra unwarranted effect.  

[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

jedimastersonic

Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Sage
Name of Jutsu: Conducting Mist
Rank of Jutsu: A
Jutsu's Element: Raiton
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? No
Description: Sin Uchiha created this jutsu after living many years in the mist and used his understanding of the mist and Raiton to create it. He expels a mist or fog created by small particles in the misty substance that are conductible upon the spark of lightning chakra that Sin may make at any moment. Unlike other substances, this cannot be started by fire. When the spark happens, the mist will ignite causing a voltage of lightning to surge through the mist, and anyone caught in the explosion will be fried. If a person manages to barely get away they will be paralyzed and burned by the small amount that did touch them. (paralyzing lasts 2 posts)
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Firstly, how long does it take for the mist to spread? Secondly the paralysis can only last for 1 post. Soz.  

[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

Jai12321

Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Assassin
Name of Jutsu: Seal of Hearth
Rank of Jutsu: D-S
Jutsu's Element: None
Jutsu Type: Sealing
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? No
Description: It's a simple sealing processes where you seal a certain amount of chakra in a scroll, to regenerate later on the battle field or when needed. You have to premake the scrolls, and spend the amount of posts on channeling chakra into them according to how much chakra you want later. [Meaning the amount of chakra you put in, you get back later.]
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This is an Uzumaki Clan technique and the original tech has an exponentially higher post limit to even make the seal for a detrimentally lower gain.  

[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

ChaosDuo

Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class:Puppeteer
Name of Jutsu: Hibernation Seal
Rank of Jutsu: B rank to make the seal
Jutsu's Element:None
Jutsu Type:Fuuin
Do you want your Jutsu added to the Guild List?Sure
Description: The user must place the seal in an enclosed space in which they can lay down. Think cat scan or cacoon for a visual. The seal will pulse the user with chakra causing them to gain 20 chakra per post. Has a three post max and can only be used once a week IRL.
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Gonna say this now. Any chakra regenerating techs will be denied. Actually I'm gonna add it to the rules.  

[jedimastersonic]

SuperKawaiiOrpheus

jedimastersonic

Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Sage
Name of Jutsu: Conducting Mist
Rank of Jutsu: A
Jutsu's Element: Raiton
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? No
Description: Sin Uchiha created this jutsu after living many years in the mist and used his understanding of the mist and Raiton to create it. He expels a mist or fog created by small particles in the misty substance that are conductible upon the spark of lightning chakra that Sin may make at any moment. Unlike other substances, this cannot be started by fire. When the spark happens, the mist will ignite causing a voltage of lightning to surge through the mist, and anyone caught in the explosion will be fried. If a person manages to barely get away they will be paralyzed and burned by the small amount that did touch them. (paralyzing lasts 2 posts)
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Firstly, how long does it take for the mist to spread? Secondly the paralysis can only last for 1 post. Soz.

i forgot that part, it should start in one post be spread a small amount(say 7 feet and be spread out further in the second, 1 post paralysis works for me  

[Pandora Green]

SuperKawaiiOrpheus

Holy Rinaku

Your Rank: Genin currently
Ninja Class:Assassin
Name of Jutsu: Assassin's playground: Dance of the petrified forest
Rank of Jutsu: A rank
Jutsu's Element:None
Jutsu Type:Bloodline ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List?no
Description: After a very quick set of seals the ground rumbles and shakes briefly. Thick stalks of bone roughly 10 foot in diameter sprout from the ground encrusted with a light redish hue suggesting blood. These are all IDENTICAL and are impossible to tell apart from tree to tree. They are equally spaced exactly 10 feet from each other in all directions for as far as the eye can see and each and every piece is exactly the same inside this "forest". They hold no lethal capacity in itself on creation but have the same properties as the users bone. The is similar to a jutsu already in the bloodline but is meant for confusion and entrapment. All senses are disoriented and it is nearly impossible to figure out ones direction without skills in navigation.
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There is no rightful cause for disorientation or confusion. All that happened was bones sprouting. Secondly, it's just Bracken Dance with an extra unwarranted effect.

There is a reason for disorientation and confusion actually. With all scenary looking the exact same it is very difficult to pick out a dirrection that you know where anything is without aide of surrounding objects. Its the same thing in a cornfield or a forest of cement pillars. But I will accept it being denied and just do this with the jutsu already provided, thank you.In the spoiler is an image from an old mortal kombat movie. In the scene johny cage is fighting scorpion in a forest constructed in the same manner but not to the same specifications. He was shown as disoriented as he looked around and everything looked the exact same and in fact was having issues tracking scorpian for a few moments due to this. Image as follows.

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[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

iAm Techno-san

Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Cracks
Rank of Jutsu: Jonin
Jutsu's Element: It's a Genjutsu n00b
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The users has to wound the victim for the Jutsu to take place, whether its a miniscule scratch or a burn. Anything that breaks skin. The moment this happens, the victim's skin begins to rip and crack like clay, falling apart as the fractures travel up the victim's body from the start of the user's post to the end of the victim's next post. Then, on the user's second post, the cracks reach the head. The moment it starts to crack the head, the user loses touch with reality. They can feel their mentality cracking. Nothing will make sense anymore, and they will be left with the raw instinct to climb out of the Genjutsu, away from the insanity, and that driving force will be the only thing that could possibly save them from the madness. After this breach of the headspace, two posts are spent in this insanity before the patch is healed up and they touch the ground again.

When they are enveloped in madness, besides nonsensically trying to get out of the Genjutsu, they're essentially a useless vegetable for the next three of the victim's posts. On their fourth post, the jutsu wears off.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Houdini
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Jutsu's Element: We've been over this
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nope
Description: To activate the Genjutsu, the user snaps their fingers. If the victim hears and sees it, they will watch as the user disappears, and the horizon begins to collapse and fade. The sky will disintegrate as well as the ground, and the destructive void of what used to be the world will rush towards them, and then everything is gone and they are falling, falling into this white nothingness that surrounds them. While they fall, they are able to smell and hear perfectly, and they will be able to move to an extent, but they won't be able to walk or feel anything besides pain or pleasure. If the victim can't pull themselves out of the Genjutsu, they are released on their third post following the user's activation.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Breathe
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Jutsu's Element:Do I need to draw a picture for you
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nah.
Description: Breathe is a little more simple than something like Cracks or Houdini. After the user activates Breathe, the victim will suddenly find themselves incapable of doing so. They just can't get their brain to make their lungs work. They know how they're supposed to inhale, but they just can't bring themselves to do it. This jutsu does not wear off, although it's fairly easy to pull oneself out of. However... if someone doesn't as they very well might not if its used by a Genjutsu Specialist and they have particularly low chakra control, then they will pass out from breath loss. After passing out, the jutsu wears off... but then the victim is vulnerable. The brilliant part of this Genjutsu is that the victim might not know whether or not what they're experiencing is Genjutsu, and they just have a couple precious moments of oxygen to figure it out.

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Cracks: The effects can last 2 posts and they'll be released upon the 3rd post.

The other 2 are fine as is. Edit Cracks and you're good to go.  

[City in Slumber]

SuperKawaiiOrpheus

iAm Techno-san

Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Cracks
Rank of Jutsu: Jonin
Jutsu's Element: It's a Genjutsu n00b
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The users has to wound the victim for the Jutsu to take place, whether its a miniscule scratch or a burn. Anything that breaks skin. The moment this happens, the victim's skin begins to rip and crack like clay, falling apart as the fractures travel up the victim's body from the start of the user's post to the end of the victim's next post. Then, on the user's second post, the cracks reach the head. The moment it starts to crack the head, the user loses touch with reality. They can feel their mentality cracking. Nothing will make sense anymore, and they will be left with the raw instinct to climb out of the Genjutsu, away from the insanity, and that driving force will be the only thing that could possibly save them from the madness. After this breach of the headspace, two posts are spent in this insanity before the patch is healed up and they touch the ground again.

When they are enveloped in madness, besides nonsensically trying to get out of the Genjutsu, they're essentially a useless vegetable for the next three of the victim's posts. On their fourth post, the jutsu wears off.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Houdini
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Jutsu's Element: We've been over this
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nope
Description: To activate the Genjutsu, the user snaps their fingers. If the victim hears and sees it, they will watch as the user disappears, and the horizon begins to collapse and fade. The sky will disintegrate as well as the ground, and the destructive void of what used to be the world will rush towards them, and then everything is gone and they are falling, falling into this white nothingness that surrounds them. While they fall, they are able to smell and hear perfectly, and they will be able to move to an extent, but they won't be able to walk or feel anything besides pain or pleasure. If the victim can't pull themselves out of the Genjutsu, they are released on their third post following the user's activation.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Breathe
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Jutsu's Element:Do I need to draw a picture for you
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nah.
Description: Breathe is a little more simple than something like Cracks or Houdini. After the user activates Breathe, the victim will suddenly find themselves incapable of doing so. They just can't get their brain to make their lungs work. They know how they're supposed to inhale, but they just can't bring themselves to do it. This jutsu does not wear off, although it's fairly easy to pull oneself out of. However... if someone doesn't as they very well might not if its used by a Genjutsu Specialist and they have particularly low chakra control, then they will pass out from breath loss. After passing out, the jutsu wears off... but then the victim is vulnerable. The brilliant part of this Genjutsu is that the victim might not know whether or not what they're experiencing is Genjutsu, and they just have a couple precious moments of oxygen to figure it out.

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Cracks: The effects can last 2 posts and they'll be released upon the 3rd post.

The other 2 are fine as is. Edit Cracks and you're good to go.

As in, the effects last one of the user's post and one of the victim's, or two of the victim's posts? Just making sure I edit it right.  

[SuperKawaiiOrpheus]

iAm Techno-san

SuperKawaiiOrpheus

iAm Techno-san

Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Cracks
Rank of Jutsu: Jonin
Jutsu's Element: It's a Genjutsu n00b
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The users has to wound the victim for the Jutsu to take place, whether its a miniscule scratch or a burn. Anything that breaks skin. The moment this happens, the victim's skin begins to rip and crack like clay, falling apart as the fractures travel up the victim's body from the start of the user's post to the end of the victim's next post. Then, on the user's second post, the cracks reach the head. The moment it starts to crack the head, the user loses touch with reality. They can feel their mentality cracking. Nothing will make sense anymore, and they will be left with the raw instinct to climb out of the Genjutsu, away from the insanity, and that driving force will be the only thing that could possibly save them from the madness. After this breach of the headspace, two posts are spent in this insanity before the patch is healed up and they touch the ground again.

When they are enveloped in madness, besides nonsensically trying to get out of the Genjutsu, they're essentially a useless vegetable for the next three of the victim's posts. On their fourth post, the jutsu wears off.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Houdini
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Jutsu's Element: We've been over this
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nope
Description: To activate the Genjutsu, the user snaps their fingers. If the victim hears and sees it, they will watch as the user disappears, and the horizon begins to collapse and fade. The sky will disintegrate as well as the ground, and the destructive void of what used to be the world will rush towards them, and then everything is gone and they are falling, falling into this white nothingness that surrounds them. While they fall, they are able to smell and hear perfectly, and they will be able to move to an extent, but they won't be able to walk or feel anything besides pain or pleasure. If the victim can't pull themselves out of the Genjutsu, they are released on their third post following the user's activation.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Breathe
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Jutsu's Element:Do I need to draw a picture for you
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nah.
Description: Breathe is a little more simple than something like Cracks or Houdini. After the user activates Breathe, the victim will suddenly find themselves incapable of doing so. They just can't get their brain to make their lungs work. They know how they're supposed to inhale, but they just can't bring themselves to do it. This jutsu does not wear off, although it's fairly easy to pull oneself out of. However... if someone doesn't as they very well might not if its used by a Genjutsu Specialist and they have particularly low chakra control, then they will pass out from breath loss. After passing out, the jutsu wears off... but then the victim is vulnerable. The brilliant part of this Genjutsu is that the victim might not know whether or not what they're experiencing is Genjutsu, and they just have a couple precious moments of oxygen to figure it out.

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Cracks: The effects can last 2 posts and they'll be released upon the 3rd post.

The other 2 are fine as is. Edit Cracks and you're good to go.

As in, the effects last one of the user's post and one of the victim's, or two of the victim's posts? Just making sure I edit it right.

2 of the victims.  

[City in Slumber]

SuperKawaiiOrpheus

iAm Techno-san

SuperKawaiiOrpheus

iAm Techno-san

Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Cracks
Rank of Jutsu: Jonin
Jutsu's Element: It's a Genjutsu n00b
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The users has to wound the victim for the Jutsu to take place, whether its a miniscule scratch or a burn. Anything that breaks skin. The moment this happens, the victim's skin begins to rip and crack like clay, falling apart as the fractures travel up the victim's body from the start of the user's post to the end of the victim's next post. Then, on the user's second post, the cracks reach the head. The moment it starts to crack the head, the user loses touch with reality. They can feel their mentality cracking. Nothing will make sense anymore, and they will be left with the raw instinct to climb out of the Genjutsu, away from the insanity, and that driving force will be the only thing that could possibly save them from the madness. After this breach of the headspace, two posts are spent in this insanity before the patch is healed up and they touch the ground again.

When they are enveloped in madness, besides nonsensically trying to get out of the Genjutsu, they're essentially a useless vegetable for the next three of the victim's posts. On their fourth post, the jutsu wears off.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Houdini
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Jutsu's Element: We've been over this
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nope
Description: To activate the Genjutsu, the user snaps their fingers. If the victim hears and sees it, they will watch as the user disappears, and the horizon begins to collapse and fade. The sky will disintegrate as well as the ground, and the destructive void of what used to be the world will rush towards them, and then everything is gone and they are falling, falling into this white nothingness that surrounds them. While they fall, they are able to smell and hear perfectly, and they will be able to move to an extent, but they won't be able to walk or feel anything besides pain or pleasure. If the victim can't pull themselves out of the Genjutsu, they are released on their third post following the user's activation.
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Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Breathe
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Jutsu's Element:Do I need to draw a picture for you
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Nah.
Description: Breathe is a little more simple than something like Cracks or Houdini. After the user activates Breathe, the victim will suddenly find themselves incapable of doing so. They just can't get their brain to make their lungs work. They know how they're supposed to inhale, but they just can't bring themselves to do it. This jutsu does not wear off, although it's fairly easy to pull oneself out of. However... if someone doesn't as they very well might not if its used by a Genjutsu Specialist and they have particularly low chakra control, then they will pass out from breath loss. After passing out, the jutsu wears off... but then the victim is vulnerable. The brilliant part of this Genjutsu is that the victim might not know whether or not what they're experiencing is Genjutsu, and they just have a couple precious moments of oxygen to figure it out.

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Cracks: The effects can last 2 posts and they'll be released upon the 3rd post.

The other 2 are fine as is. Edit Cracks and you're good to go.

As in, the effects last one of the user's post and one of the victim's, or two of the victim's posts? Just making sure I edit it right.

2 of the victims.

Mkay, thank you~