Poetry

[lee-kyra]

sweatdrop thanks I'm in a poetic mood  

[lee-kyra]

words of ending

Roses are red I wish you dead,
Violets are blue god how I hate you,
life is what it is you live I regret


You've hurt me once to mane .
This time I won't take sorry as truth spoken of love
To late to take it all back.

You've taken to much from me ,
The last of me remains uncertain ,
But one thing is clear never shall I take you back.

Love is a word you spoke to lightly,
It dosen't mean ane thing to me ane more,
Leave and thake all the memories with you.

How deeply I wish to forget all the kisses,
So often I cryed , no more tears shall I shed on your behalf
Last words will be spoken , and no more shall you ear of me .


Good bye for ever  

[[original.ariwood]]

Be Free
by Ari

They're not going to get us.
They like to think they only believe.
Never lose hope.
We are all we need.

Are dreams cast aside,
and labeled absurd.
They don't know how to live.
We're free as a bird.

How do you prove you exist?
Maybe we don't.
Maybe it's all a dream,
a veil put over us like a coat.

I'll run forever
on this path covered in dew.
Your eyes are so endless with dreams of freedom.
How can I not be with you?

I know we'll escape and be free.
We already have don't you see.

Unlike a flower with hands guiding it where to go.
We are weeds, free to grow.

Free to dance and sing.
Free to be ourselves for all eternity.

Nice one Ari.  

[Nathaniel Arkchion]

Ariwood

soddius

it would b nice if u ppl would let me know what u think of my post evil

I think it was very good.
Keep writing.
It be cool if you posted another poem on here.
biggrin
I'de really like to read it.
P.S. I would like to read everyones poems, if they have more.
Everyone so far has caught my attention.

thanks but im not really a poetry type guy that 1 is from my story that i am writting if u want to look at it just ask because its in my juornal ok mrgreen  

[[original.ariwood]]

3nodding
Come on people.
Ya'll have more poems don't ya'.

 

[Fire 0ak]

Ariwood

3nodding
Come on people.
Ya'll have more poems don't ya'.

I can only write when I get inspired, otherwise it would be pointless yes? 3nodding  

[Fire 0ak]

Needless to say, many of us have had little inspiration lately 3nodding  

[Nathaniel Arkchion]

true very true i dont even draw anymore because of it  

[Fire 0ak]

Nothing is found in the souls of my captors,
their death so swift I cant saver.

So unreal my fantasy and terror,
the day sky night in ravenous eyes.
Giving strength to what must be finished

Brave faces turned to cold, their false guard unable.

Flashing memories of weakness complete what I am.
The armor of once was, turned to ash and replaced
withered beaten to the core.

Whats left is not worthy of the life it holds.
The only way through the burning gates created is to fade long
or fade slow. The way through is to the enemy that festers in these
thoughts or gore.

The battle of inner depths turned eternity the hope of times' collapse
shines. With a silver streak of light. With silver and red the infinate struggle shall end the only way through the insanity is found through thorns and hedge.

The last stitch agianst time recklessly found but mysterious to desperation and pain. Souls acsend in directions of confusion and hate. Peace won for set for the dust settle in our memories.
_Yaku  

[[...The Cheesums...]]

We all die.

I'm stuck in this life and nobody cares
No body is there to wipe the tears.
But if you just think about it...
We are not here.
We are just something to fear.
no reason to be scared, your still going to die.
So wipe the tears and please dont cry.
Your pain is killing me...
Why do you make me bleed?
Please don't be sad.
Because this world has gone mad.
Please don't cry.
Just take a minute, And you can fly.
Sure life is short.
But we are heare for a reason.
No matter what the leaves will fall this season.
Wipe your tears...
Please don't cry...
We all have to die.
Don't let life get you down.
Please, Please , Please don't frown.
Ignore those bumps and the crashes too.
Because some day I will die too.  

[Fire 0ak]

There is none; empty the world of mine , The world so retched filled of slime.
Will no one hear the calls of love when there are many to be shoved.
Simple kindness of the young will bring suprises to and from.

From hills and mountains they appear with no such mercy shall they rear. The clouds are calling far and wide to find our destinies deep inside. The packaging all so feirce. With great wrecklesness none can peirce. The world is torn apart .. lacking sorts of what it means. To find our lives so thick entwined is to be revealed is to see the world rewind. The mistakes we make and many more, whats to stop them keeping score. The only chance we have of keeping strong is to rely for what we long.  

[-Blind Guardian-]

Once

Once
I had a mountain of my own
With moss and walls and magic
And a mighty view
A forest of my own
Listening to me
Showing me its secret paths and trails
Green with depths and sleeping sunrises
Thorns that never cut
My feet and face
A pine of my own
Offering a seat in the sunset
Painting windy pictures
Arabesques
Of fortune and forever
Too large to fit
Even in a child's pocket
Now
Arabesques of forgetfulness
Are left to burn holes
In my white tapestry and tangible wallpaper
Once
I had a world of my own
It is still there
Only
I am gone  

[Hermit of the Hills]

Nice poetry, -Blind Guardian-. It's got great imagery, and on the whole I love it. My main complaint would be your use of the word 'tangible' - it really gets to me. It seems so clinical. It just doesn't fit with the rest of the poem.

(Anyway, don't take my criticism too seriously. I only write any poetry of substance when it's required. The majority of my poetic work comprises of insulting limericks I wrote to my friend during History last year.)  

[-Blind Guardian-]

I like compliments. =D And don't worry, when it comes to poetry and literature, I take criticism very well.  

[Kuro_Kitsune_Bard]

Nice poetry everyone, i am a bit of a poet myself, but neither professional nor extraordinary. Well here are is one, and the second i was going to post im still revising so nyah. blaugh

Euphoria

Euphoria
A peace of mind, a state of nirvana,
The complete existence is you.
You feel and breathe euphoria,
into me.
A great complication,
a tangled web,
a breath of fresh air.
Your face is the sun, moon and stars.
night and day you shine brightly.
Your smile pulls me,
Into your vortex of love.
You are my euphoria.