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 Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:05 pm
Dr_jelly // Well I have to start by saying it’s a very interesting avatar…but there are some things that bother me about it.
First of all, the Carol of Ol’ Nick garland is too much gold, unless you add more gold to even it out. I see the small bits and pieces of gold…but it just isn’t enough. Maybe just get rid of the garland and replace it with a smaller gold item? I think that would work out the best.
Now, I see a little bit of turquoise peeking out from behind the garland, but it isn’t enough. You need more turquoise around the neck and shoulders to even out the other items. I think getting rid of the garland would solve the problem…but I really don’t know what items you have underneath so yeah…this is just a hunch.
The white it evened out pretty well, but the black is heavy on her head and not enough everywhere else…so I think changing the hair to something different would solve that problem. Something less…poofy, maybe?
Your red looks pretty good though, so yeah. Just those small things that make a difference.
Overall, 3.7/10
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:32 pm
VampireWolfcub Dr_jelly // Well I have to start by saying it’s a very interesting avatar…but there are some things that bother me about it.
First of all, the Carol of Ol’ Nick garland is too much gold, unless you add more gold to even it out. I see the small bits and pieces of gold…but it just isn’t enough. Maybe just get rid of the garland and replace it with a smaller gold item? I think that would work out the best.
Now, I see a little bit of turquoise peeking out from behind the garland, but it isn’t enough. You need more turquoise around the neck and shoulders to even out the other items. I think getting rid of the garland would solve the problem…but I really don’t know what items you have underneath so yeah…this is just a hunch.
The white it evened out pretty well, but the black is heavy on her head and not enough everywhere else…so I think changing the hair to something different would solve that problem. Something less…poofy, maybe?
Your red looks pretty good though, so yeah. Just those small things that make a difference.
Overall, 3.7/10 I changed some things since then; & I just now changed my hair with the hope that it would lighten up the black on top (as in, not heavy... not not dark ^^; ). Do you have any suggestion on chest teal items? I'm just using that amigos collar/bowtie. :/ If I remember correctly, you don't do back-to-back rates, right? COuld you just say better or worse? ;D
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:45 pm
Well...I can't really even see the amigos collar/bowtie thing cause of the Carol of Ol Ebenezer thing...so it really doesn't matter.
I would suggest changing whatever you have up top with the Matcha Tea Time Waitress Dress or the Sea green butterfly Terrycloth tube-top. And just make sure to add red and black somewhere too.
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 11:12 am
VampireWolfcub its grace SMILE // Alright, let me see. My first comment would be lose the ice whip. Although a classic item that I haven’t seen in a while, the blue just doesn’t seem to work for me. You don’t have any light blue on the avatar other than the tip of the whip so yeah~ I would have worked it the whip was all the same color blue. ;D
And now, seeing as I am near her feet already, I’ll bring the leg warmers to your attention. They don’t match anything either…there is no color to even it out, cause the hair isn’t doing the trick. If only they had grey leg warmers~
Moving up only a little more, I think you should replace the red & white striped stocking with just plain white ones and then get rid of the leg warmers…maybe find some blue shoes? I think this will clear everything up and the red class socks will stick out more and even the red out to the bottom. (I hope n.n;; )
Now for the mid section. I think there’s way too much doing on with her bottom. I don’t really think the swim trucks are all that necessary…and they kind of make your avatar look fat. No offence. Other than that, the middle area looks fine to me.
Moving up around her shoulders. A bit too much blue if you ask me. Unfortunately, if you get rid of the scarf, you don’t have enough blue on her head. Perhaps you could find an item to fix that? I just think the scarf is too much. The pin is a nice touch though. Also, on her head, I think the Grizzly Hoodie bear thing isn’t necessary. There’s too much black there. Either keep the halo, or the hoodie accessorie. Same goes for the Coco and the Guitar. One or the other, or maybe replace them both with Demonbow accessory of wings? Not quite sure how that would look right now though so it’s up to you~
I do wish I could see more gold on her head…cause I think it’s covered up with the grizzly hoodie so…again, I would just lose it.
I do like the eyes though, very nice use of item!!
Overall, 4.3/10
okk so i made a tektek before i splurged and spent all my gold to get new stuff
which is better the tektek or my current avi? D:
i think the current is better but.. i dont know .____.
[[ the red socks dont show; but im going to be using the same socks as my avi the tektek thing just doesnt show it ]]
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 3:38 pm
--->InuYasha Imp X3<--- Do you mind rating mii avi? :33
~Hinata-chan
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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:30 pm
OKK so like only if you dont mind
and i cant stress that enough
can you rate my new dream too? D:
but if you're only in the mood to do one
which i COMPLETELY understand
then can you rate this one? C:
i know theres to much going on on the head but i dont know what to do D:
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 9:59 am
Would you mind rating my Avitar?
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:51 pm
So sorry everyone!
I've been forgetting to check in here and now am like whoa!
xD
So I'll get to everyone, I promise!
Just real quick...
its grace SMILE // For your post before last, I like your current more than the tektek.
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:04 pm
HinataFav // Well, first off, the colors are bothering me. I don’t know if this is what you were going for, but the amount of black and white it nowhere near evenly spread out over the avatar. Too much white up top, too much black down below. You also have random colors added in, like pink, gold, red, and different shades of grey.
I can’t really give you suggestions other than re-think everything and try a different look.
Overall, 0/10
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:13 pm
its grace SMILE // I don't mind luv, no problem at all.
Anyway, it's a decently cute avatar and you are heading in the right direction, but I took the liberty of going in and changing that tektek up and comming up with a few changes you could make to pull everything together.
Now, I have Gold Hoop Earings on it but they don't show up, although they should be allowed to layer under the headphones.
Yes, the price is higher than before and I'm sorry about that, but I think it looks better this way. I got rid of the one gold wing cause that just looked silly. If you have one, you need something to even it out on the other side!
I also didn't like the eyes, so I changed those. Any red eyes will do, I think, but I found those and thought they looked too cute to pass up.
The white was hard to even out by her legs, but the leggings you had on her were just too much. Maybe just white socks?
But yeah, I hope that helped.
Overall, 3.2/10 for the dream avatar.
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:17 pm
Karas91 // I’m going to be blunt with you and say that you should just scrap your current avatar and figure out something completely different. It’s a collaboration of items that should not be put together like that. You need to think of what colors go together and how they fit on your avatar so they don’t look like a bad sorceress gone wrong.
Overall, 0/10
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:07 pm
okk
so i know its all like
cluttered and stuff
and i was editing off of yours C:
is it better?
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Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:52 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:04 pm
Could I maybe have a rate?
I'm kind of really satisfied with this avatar.
And we can't have that. ;}
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:23 pm
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