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 Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:16 pm
(( stare using " " is correct f-ing grammar.))
June got to her feet, watching everyone with no clue as to how she could get rid of the shield
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:16 pm
((Sorry I'm a grammar freak.))
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:16 pm
The shadow demon-Zero ((Fires at the small puny soldiers? Seriously? Plus no " " marks. I'm getting confused here...)) ((im kinda to roleplaynig =p so yea.......))"GEAR MODE!"she,yelled with a might.with the jet transforming into a robot with a beam gun ,and rail gun in both hands.she shoots her missiles at the solders.
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:18 pm
((Um...missles could potentaly kill everyone...))
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:20 pm
((and there aren't enough soldiers to be worth a damn missile- THIS ISN'T THE TRANSFORMER'S MOVIE, DAMNIT! x_x ))
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:24 pm
Duriono notices the new help and instantly turns into commander "New girl! Provide air support! Your getting in the way down here!" Duriono shouted, "Zero! Take your scythe and attack the shadows! Keep them down!" He created a stone wall and shattered June's barrier "Strap the broadsword to your back and climb on my back, ok?"
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:24 pm
((You know June we share a common dislike of this. And I'm gonna end here because this is confusing me to crap. No offence to Neko but I'm hurting my head. Night.))
Alice knocked out and Alex, because he was connected to her, KO'ed with her.
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:25 pm
((the missiles only track targets selected by the pilot=P))blue,contraling missiles toward the solders.
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:27 pm
(( stressed and explosions.are.never.that.small.to.hit.only.one.human. *glare*))
June nodded quickly and Took the broadsword and strapped it around her. Placing her hands on Duri's shoulder to warn him, she hopped on, screaming a little as a bullet hit her in the side. Barbarus continued sending shadows after them
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:29 pm
"OK,WITH PLEASURE"she aimed the rail gun toward the solders and shadows,with great force."ILL TELL U WHY,I CALL MYSELF LUNNERGUNNERBLUE"
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:34 pm
((I'm clearly more tolerant of newbies.... =.= Anyway, lemme give you some tips
1. Grammar gets you everywhere
2. Read every post twice,
3.no short versions of words
4. Giant robots are for Giant enemies.
5. Give your character a long background story
6. Stay in your own territory, and think if your character's the right one for the job
7. I apologise for the other's behavior DX))
Duriono pulled out his guns and turned to Barbarus, "You liar.. she's not dead: and now your punishment... Is death!"
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:41 pm
"oh, my....but I was telling the truth."
Barbarus smiled
"In any case, congratulations for finding her, and I must be on my way." He tapped the ground twice and fell through a shadow. The soldiers screamed as they disintegrated. June shut her eyes
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:43 pm
((ok,im srry!XP THXS FOR THE TIPS!!ill rework my profie in a little bit))She notice that she was more was shooting wildedly then truthfully.she said ",dang it, im not doing it right ."she commanded the fire wind to protect those down under."FIREWIND PROTECT!those who are down there!"YES MAM"the computer said.as she jump out of the cockpit,with her colt.45s and 50.cal rifie in front of them.
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:45 pm
Duri yawned and took June off his back, "I'm such a great knight!" He grinned hugging her tightly, "Now C'mon, lets head back!" He set June down in the passenger seat and took the wheel, and drove off.
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:46 pm
June turned away, covering her face
"Still my knight?"
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