What do people think of this quote from my story. (The one I write OUTSIDE of Gaia.) (It actually hasn't been written yet but I'm going to use it for the final battle in the sixth or seventh book. I'm on the second book) (It takes place in the far future. Atlantis, Swordsman of Hell, gets frozen and is excavated in the future. His powers are gone and have been given to someone else by accident and he fights the guy. He also pisses off the futuristic army on the way)
Quote:
Guy who has Atlantis's powers: There's an army out there, waiting for your head. Do you really think this is the part where you get to live happily ever after?
Atlantis: No... This is the part... WHERE YOU DIE!!!
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