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 Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 8:59 pm
((Okay.))
Dkiryu walked around.
"Um...where do we go now? Zero only showed me one floor and then we had to leave when he said he was tired. Thing was, he seemed more scared than tired."
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:02 pm
"I have no idea what you are talking about...?"
((i was thinking how would this thing with getting kidnapped would work with rahvine and violete ...specially rahvine since she has no other character....}}
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:10 pm
((Yea...and seing as how Rahvine doesn't hide her feelings I was going to skip Rahvine. Violete on the other hand I don't know about so it's all up to you about the kidnapping.
P.S I got a twist that's gonna make the char's heads spin.))
Dkiryu sweeped his arm around.
"The freaky house. I was only shown one floor of it till Z wanted us to bail like hay. So...I have no idea where Zero would be. I just know how to fight shadows. Well...kinda."
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:14 pm
"What makes ya think I can would know.........I am always locked in my office."
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:17 pm
Dkiryu sighed.
"Then I think we're screwed. And....sooner than we think!" He took out his two guns.
"Violete, on your six!"
Three shadows were ready to attack.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:19 pm
"But there hasnt been any harmful contact!" Violete drew her sword
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:21 pm
Dkiryu looked at her.
"Harmfull what!? The heck does that mean?"
He asked, eying some stairs to their right.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:25 pm
"DIDNT YOU SAY THAT FIGHT WAS ONLY ENGAGED WHEN THERE WAS CONTACTED AND IF I AM WRONGED WE HAVENT TOUCHED THOSE DAM FREAKS." Violete grumbled
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:30 pm
((She's getting Dkiryu mixxed up with Zero. Zero said that. Not Dkiryu.))
Dkiryu was confused.
"I never...screw it, run!"
He ran towards the stairs and ran up them as fast as he could.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:32 pm
((oh please it was more than a week ago you cant expect ke to remember.))
violete ran with no complain.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:44 pm
((Then if it wasn't enough for you to remember then I've failed as a writer...no twist no nothing. I'll just have a mamby pamby rescuse so you two can be free of me. And I'm not trying to be rude. Seriously. Actually...maybe we should just act like none of this happened. I'm not kidding. That way I can stop and you two can go on with the rebellion or the events in tokyo or that thing with your unfinished evil person that I almost screwed up or that event with Mia's mask. So, shall we?))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 9:50 pm
((dude keep it goign I just cant remeber cosidering i have so much going on.
I might be a fresh man but i am trying to make a name of myself. I am in a play i am writing a play i am going to SAT prep. And besides if you stop this now you would have wasted two weeks. Besides stay for Rahvine, she really waited patiently for you.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:04 pm
((Well...I"m thinking about quitting Gaia as a whole actually...all of my friends are gone, I'm never on the comp anymore because of obvious reasons, and everytime I try out something it ends up blowing up in my face, pissing someone off or me quiting because it was just a stupid idea in the first place. I just keep hurting myself over and over. I can't take it. Other's laugh at me because of this but I listen to my feelings. Yes I'm a guy with feelings whose not gay. Whoop dee doo. But anyways, I just don't see the point anymore. I'm not impressing anyone and I'm out of motivation. What good is a writer if no one remembers what he's written? What good is a story if no one can recall it? Twilight, War of the worlds, the Time machine, hell green eggs and ham. They were all great stories because everyone could remember them and say, "That was great because of _____" insert reason there. And Let's face it. I'll never be great like that. Even my 56+ page story I've typed for recreation is only going to get so far. Actually, chances are I'm the only one who'll remember it. Just like my short story "The One called Maruduk." Only I will remember it and a few teachers. It'll never go far. And I'm just fooling myself. Hell...why am I even telling you this? Like you care about someone who you don't physically know. Heck, I might be the only person who fools himself into caring for others that he barely knows about. Not only do I trust to much, I'm saying to much. The fact that I'm telling you this now is proof. I don't even know why I care. Any normal person whould've probably just left you two in the dark for months...but when is anyone normal. *Sigh* Nevermind. Sorry for the long post. I really am going to quit Gaia. IF you want an item of mine, let me know and I'll gift it to you. Something to show my appreciation for putting up with me.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:13 pm
((Okay man. Now you listen to me. You cant expect everyone to remember every detail. People always forget my details and i let it go. Now. YOu said we were friends. I am here and if i am not your friend rahvine is. i dont care about the long post. people remeber twilight cuse its bullsh**. I believe guys can have feelings and not be gay. We have gone through this one over something insignificant.
And if caring for people you hardly know is stupid. I have wasted my life. It makes you a good human. It makes you someone that isnt some random stupid punk who had his pants half way down his a** . I wouldnt want you or Rahvine hurt you two are the only reason i am on gaia, if thats not caring i do not know what it is.
Also as for storylines. Dont tell 'they all blow up on my face' I have kept this thing going fo a year and a half. I have had enough plots on my face or back fire or interfered. If you want a perfect storyline give it up it never happens. I should know.
NOw that i am listening. Now vent it all off. AS you say i am no one you know physically, so no matter what you tell me i can do nothing about it
And i mean it, If you are going to leave think of Rahvine. She would lose an rp character she counts on
What kind of writer leaves his character on the air? If you want to be better strive for the sky. J.k rowling started on napkins. You can out do her.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:21 pm
((But what's the point? I have no motivation. Thanks for the apreciation though. And i know about never getting a perfect storyline. I've had to modify this one about several times already, and even the Zero one about a billion. I've actually just about given up on Zero. Even as my main character, I'm about the only person who actually tries to anylize every single detail about a character and try to make up a portfolio about them. Aura for example. So far I have it that she's a were-wolf/controled transformation who's a nice person but also has her wild sides. She has multiple personalities which make up for the blanks in her personality, like murderous intent and rage. She seems like she will like a person more than love them, and looks to be a tentative person when it comes to choosing friends, albeit because of her family and their "Heritage." Not to mention Aura constantly clashes with her other self personality wise because she and he other self are exact oppisites of eachother, like I do with Zero and his many personas. But then again, that's just my understanding, which could be very wrong.))
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