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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:27 pm
((yo have it about right. I can aalyze people in real life like that so its a skill I appreciate.
I will give you my opinion. I lost motivationed too. But being in an rp is a commiment. ASk Rahvine she will give you ideas. She gave me a few to kick start this again....also
When you take storylines from videogames or movies....it is hard to make it work. Anyway ask rahvine, she can help you more than i can.
Dont quit please. The only way you will get better is by trying and trying,and this place is about the only place i am appreciated in.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:35 pm
((Idea's are fine. I have billions of those. I just think that it's weird how the only character that's seen the most interactivity is DKiryu and I only intended him as a "Surprise" character for one storyline. I practically have to force characters to Zero. Cause if you've noticed, and you two have, I have Dkiryu hanging out with Zero all the time, because no one else does. The reason why I have Zero in a "Mask" personality is because he, like me, has no friends who interact with us. We just get used when we're needed then we're left in the dust till something else happens. The twist I was going to do was that Zero's teenage half of his shadow would reveal that he secretly wanted to be his natural born girl self and just live life normally, but because of the "Mask" that he's worn for thousands of years and because of his embarresment of what his friends will think he denies it to the utmost degree. And his kid shadow self would reveil that she'd just want friends and attention. Hence when she wanted to help Rahvine and Violete in the first encounter and when she tried to jump after them.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:37 pm
((And I don't take storylines directly from movies and video games. I take the idea's of them and mix them into my own versions to make them fit and work.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:39 pm
((i noticed the first up up to the rest. If you havent noticed Zero hs drifted away from tem giving less and less interaction and at the sae time you take Dkiryu with him.
YOu can only keep a few characters active. Thats why several of my characters remain shadowed. Which is why I pulled out Violete and Mia for a chance
as you pushed Dkiryu into Zero you pushed dkiryu away. Aura drew away from Zero becuase he was speaking less and less.))
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:41 pm
((that doesnt work either. Have tried it it fails.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:42 pm
((I made him drift because of the lack of interaction. You two...or should I say Rahvine...focused on DKiryu more so I changed tactics and so did I, but I still left Zero's door open at all times to see if anyone actually got the message. But Zero really is a lost cause isn't he?))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:44 pm
((It's worked with me only twice. Remember Radio Hack? Yes I remember Radio Hack. That was one. And the one with Duriono and the others was two.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:47 pm
((If he was a lost cause Aura would be all over him. You missed thatabout her. Everytime she sees someone who reaches the end she stand by them and tries to nourish them back. She did it with Trace,who was her first kiss, she turned him from a thief to a right man.
She does this because she feels no one did that for her. So she know that pain. If Zero reached te end sh would help him
The reason she doesnt feel to nice with him. She feels betrayed because every time he would do something to erase the trust she ha for him.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:55 pm
((Well he's sure as hell gonna be lost after this...or nevermind...I don't even know anymore. All my idea's sound like crap nowadays. I have billions of idea's but nothing to do with them but throw them away...actually I was counting on Aura being there to see Zero's fall from morality rather then Violete but there's the story mod for you. What do I do now? I have a lot of choices. I was going to have the three find Zero and the shadows, Zero would be in a chage ironically shaped like a bird cage for the ironic terminology of the caged bird that his shadows and true feeling have been locked in, the shadow spills out the truth and then Zero denies them both. Then the shadows join together to make a girl that looks like Alexis but with a mask, symbolizing the "Mask" personality Zero had, and during battle I would have an "Obvious weakness" moment when the Girl's eyes change from red to green, thus changing from teen to little girl, and she wouldn't attack because Rahvine has her stuffed "Neko-Neko." Or my other paths which would take another 10 min to explain.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 10:58 pm
((mmm hahah i didnt use Aura because I figured Violete needed some air. But once Violete piece's thng together she would smack them on Aura's face. ....Have you read a bit of Aura's story? If you are curious go to my journal -w- That sounds good to me.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 11:02 pm
((I always try to see if there's backstory. So I've read a couple of lines here and there. Not counting the char bio in BOO.
P.S that's where I got the Portfolio info from.
So, you wanna continue, because I'm staying up till very late because at 12:01 I'm 18 years of age.))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 11:08 pm
((when you are i think we were at RUUUNNN!!!))
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 11:11 pm
13 stories of stairs later...
Dkiryu was panting and fell on his stomach.
"God...that....was....exhausting..."
A blue butterfly rested on his head.
((BTW, in Persona 4 a blue butterfly is a save point. And in all games there's this philosophy. "When a save point's around, $h!t's about to go down."))
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 11:19 pm
"God...I need to train i a. So rusty...."
((Ikr! XD I save all the chances i have xD
mmm i wonder what perspective do you have of violete? =w= like portfolio.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 11:23 pm
Dkiryu didn't notice the butterfly on his head.
"Well...we're still alive. So, kudos."
((In the case of No Mo Heroes 2, S*** literaly goes down because Travis goes to the bathroom and just as he's pulling down his pants his "Blank" is covered by three streaks of toilet paper with the words, "Do you want to save?" on it. I'm not kidding. It's hillarious.))
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