Blueberry's Artwork♂[Redoing]

[Leocara]

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

iGrad

Mk this one is a bit big but yea I think this is one of my best pieces of work yet. I would like some of your opinions.
=3

Now, I'm gonna be harsh, because I believe to learn you ened to be criticized. Right hands fingers = WAY to small and pointy, we don't have knives for hands yah know. If hes holding some giant futuristic gun.. isent his wrist gonna give a little? how the hell is he holding it in said position? The tail in relation to the pack thing, no, the pack should be UNDER, or it looks like its floating. head looks like its sided to the characters left (towards the viewer) not sure if you wanted that. On the other hand, the proportions are awesome, and i generally like everything else. This is one of your best works in this thread, I would say. Also, I particularly how the fur line aint to clean or to scruffy, and the spine-line is AWESOME.

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.  

[Fury of Chaos]

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

iGrad

Mk this one is a bit big but yea I think this is one of my best pieces of work yet. I would like some of your opinions.
=3

Now, I'm gonna be harsh, because I believe to learn you ened to be criticized. Right hands fingers = WAY to small and pointy, we don't have knives for hands yah know. If hes holding some giant futuristic gun.. isent his wrist gonna give a little? how the hell is he holding it in said position? The tail in relation to the pack thing, no, the pack should be UNDER, or it looks like its floating. head looks like its sided to the characters left (towards the viewer) not sure if you wanted that. On the other hand, the proportions are awesome, and i generally like everything else. This is one of your best works in this thread, I would say. Also, I particularly how the fur line aint to clean or to scruffy, and the spine-line is AWESOME.

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.

I think your critisism helped me a bit. I did another picture last night and this is it.

I tried adding a bit of suroundings this time like in my dragon picture in the Random art section.  

[Leocara]

iGrad

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

iGrad

Mk this one is a bit big but yea I think this is one of my best pieces of work yet. I would like some of your opinions.
=3

Now, I'm gonna be harsh, because I believe to learn you ened to be criticized. Right hands fingers = WAY to small and pointy, we don't have knives for hands yah know. If hes holding some giant futuristic gun.. isent his wrist gonna give a little? how the hell is he holding it in said position? The tail in relation to the pack thing, no, the pack should be UNDER, or it looks like its floating. head looks like its sided to the characters left (towards the viewer) not sure if you wanted that. On the other hand, the proportions are awesome, and i generally like everything else. This is one of your best works in this thread, I would say. Also, I particularly how the fur line aint to clean or to scruffy, and the spine-line is AWESOME.

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.

I think your critisism helped me a bit. I did another picture last night and this is it.

I tried adding a bit of suroundings this time like in my dragon picture in the Random art section.

Everything great accept the angle of his a** to the chair / bench, it needs to be more level with it, as the first thing I noticed was his floaty-ness.  

[Nurren Pamuk]

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

iGrad

Mk this one is a bit big but yea I think this is one of my best pieces of work yet. I would like some of your opinions.
=3

Now, I'm gonna be harsh, because I believe to learn you ened to be criticized. Right hands fingers = WAY to small and pointy, we don't have knives for hands yah know. If hes holding some giant futuristic gun.. isent his wrist gonna give a little? how the hell is he holding it in said position? The tail in relation to the pack thing, no, the pack should be UNDER, or it looks like its floating. head looks like its sided to the characters left (towards the viewer) not sure if you wanted that. On the other hand, the proportions are awesome, and i generally like everything else. This is one of your best works in this thread, I would say. Also, I particularly how the fur line aint to clean or to scruffy, and the spine-line is AWESOME.

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.

You rest with a penor up ur a** :/... Simon Cal is a p***s, and he has made nice judgments to people too.  

[Leocara]

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

iGrad

Mk this one is a bit big but yea I think this is one of my best pieces of work yet. I would like some of your opinions.
=3

Now, I'm gonna be harsh, because I believe to learn you ened to be criticized. Right hands fingers = WAY to small and pointy, we don't have knives for hands yah know. If hes holding some giant futuristic gun.. isent his wrist gonna give a little? how the hell is he holding it in said position? The tail in relation to the pack thing, no, the pack should be UNDER, or it looks like its floating. head looks like its sided to the characters left (towards the viewer) not sure if you wanted that. On the other hand, the proportions are awesome, and i generally like everything else. This is one of your best works in this thread, I would say. Also, I particularly how the fur line aint to clean or to scruffy, and the spine-line is AWESOME.

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.

You rest with a penor up ur a** :/... Simon Cal is a p***s, and he has made nice judgments to people too.

And you biasing all my judgements in the whole of my life to that one? Oh, how smart. I know what will happen eventually, furry drama, you cry, run away, try to get some idiot like 2 on your side, he doesn't even read your email, you cry more, and write about it in your live journal, but, now it wont happen because you know, you will now A: storm out in a sulk B: claim your smarter than that and come out with something completely unrelated or, C: be a sore loser and try to hack my my server. Been there, done that, now move along.  

[Fury of Chaos]

Come on now, no fighting in here.
D=  

[Nurren Pamuk]

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

iGrad

Mk this one is a bit big but yea I think this is one of my best pieces of work yet. I would like some of your opinions.
=3

Now, I'm gonna be harsh, because I believe to learn you ened to be criticized. Right hands fingers = WAY to small and pointy, we don't have knives for hands yah know. If hes holding some giant futuristic gun.. isent his wrist gonna give a little? how the hell is he holding it in said position? The tail in relation to the pack thing, no, the pack should be UNDER, or it looks like its floating. head looks like its sided to the characters left (towards the viewer) not sure if you wanted that. On the other hand, the proportions are awesome, and i generally like everything else. This is one of your best works in this thread, I would say. Also, I particularly how the fur line aint to clean or to scruffy, and the spine-line is AWESOME.

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.

You rest with a penor up ur a** :/... Simon Cal is a p***s, and he has made nice judgments to people too.

And you biasing all my judgements in the whole of my life to that one? Oh, how smart. I know what will happen eventually, furry drama, you cry, run away, try to get some idiot like 2 on your side, he doesn't even read your email, you cry more, and write about it in your live journal, but, now it wont happen because you know, you will now A: storm out in a sulk B: claim your smarter than that and come out with something completely unrelated or, C: be a sore loser and try to hack my my server. Been there, done that, now move along.

Ok, now you're just starting bullshit. A fight started over Simon Cowel and I'm getting preached at and having my mind read? Please gtfo Leo. If you have to start this s**t, then just please. gtfo. I'm tired of having to look at your bullshit.  

[Leocara]

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.

You rest with a penor up ur a** :/... Simon Cal is a p***s, and he has made nice judgments to people too.

And you biasing all my judgements in the whole of my life to that one? Oh, how smart. I know what will happen eventually, furry drama, you cry, run away, try to get some idiot like 2 on your side, he doesn't even read your email, you cry more, and write about it in your live journal, but, now it wont happen because you know, you will now A: storm out in a sulk B: claim your smarter than that and come out with something completely unrelated or, C: be a sore loser and try to hack my my server. Been there, done that, now move along.

Ok, now you're just starting bullshit. A fight started over Simon Cowel and I'm getting preached at and having my mind read? Please gtfo Leo. If you have to start this s**t, then just please. gtfo. I'm tired of having to look at your bullshit.

never fails.  

[Nurren Pamuk]

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

Leocara

Gegiretsu-

You can post your points aggressively without posting scornful things like, "How the hell?" and others thing. You made this post contradictory to criticism... You just made an a** of yourself.

And Simon Cal doesn't? I rest my case.

You rest with a penor up ur a** :/... Simon Cal is a p***s, and he has made nice judgments to people too.

And you biasing all my judgements in the whole of my life to that one? Oh, how smart. I know what will happen eventually, furry drama, you cry, run away, try to get some idiot like 2 on your side, he doesn't even read your email, you cry more, and write about it in your live journal, but, now it wont happen because you know, you will now A: storm out in a sulk B: claim your smarter than that and come out with something completely unrelated or, C: be a sore loser and try to hack my my server. Been there, done that, now move along.

Ok, now you're just starting bullshit. A fight started over Simon Cowel and I'm getting preached at and having my mind read? Please gtfo Leo. If you have to start this s**t, then just please. gtfo. I'm tired of having to look at your bullshit.

never fails.

This is getting kinda ridiculous... Let's stop here. e_e  

[Fury of Chaos]

Please oh please just drop it.  

[Fury of Chaos]

 

[Fury of Chaos]

Entry 11(June, 27, 08 1:59PM)


Ok I just got done with this one and want some of your opinions. Keep in mind this is supposed to be a bit odd. =3  

[Nurren Pamuk]

I would suggest a battle ready-ish pose for it. It looks creepy as though it was a heartless from Kingdom Hearts :3. Very cool.  

[Fury of Chaos]

Ok I drew A better picture of Ty [the drawing before this one].