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PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 8:00 pm
Your Rank: Undiscerned; it's honestly up in the bag until the daimyo system is released. It's between S and Kage.

Ninja Class: Sealing Master

Name of Jutsu: Brahmanda; The Universal Swell

Rank of Jutsu: Passive

Jutsu's Element: Nothing

Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No

Description:
Brahmanda is an ability that is one-in-a-thousand to an Uzumaki who has unlocked the powers of sealing, time-space and natural energy manipulation. It is an ability that some humans are exposed to, sometimes through birth and sometimes through a specific trigger that occurs in their life. It is an ability akin to what we on earth call 'astral projection', which allows for one person to extend their spiritual energy to see and feel environments from very far away.

However, Brahmanda is the opposite of that. The far opposite. Instead, it allows spirits to project their own conscious into Christian, making him a sort of medium for lost souls. Generally he can ignore and resist their projection, but in extreme situations or willingly, the spirits that latch onto him can assert control over his body. They can speak to him. They can even change his physical form to resemble their own.

Brahmanda was unlocked when Christian was young, fighting and bleeding to save his close friend, Takahara. When the procedure was complete, the two friends forged a spiritual connection through pain, vexation and even natural energy that alerted both of them to the spiritual world.

This technique cannot be used to aid Christian in combat in any way, shape or form. It is entirely for RP development. I cannot ever use these spirits to relay combat-related information, or use them to augment Christian's physical abilities, or manifest a larger or smaller form to overpower a foe or avoid attacks.
 
PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 8:05 pm
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Your Rank: Undiscerned; it's honestly up in the bag until the daimyo system is released. It's between S and Kage.

Ninja Class: Sealing Master

Name of Jutsu: Brahmanda; The Universal Swell

Rank of Jutsu: Passive

Jutsu's Element: Nothing

Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No

Description:
Brahmanda is an ability that is one-in-a-thousand to an Uzumaki who has unlocked the powers of sealing, time-space and natural energy manipulation. It is an ability that some humans are exposed to, sometimes through birth and sometimes through a specific trigger that occurs in their life. It is an ability akin to what we on earth call 'astral projection', which allows for one person to extend their spiritual energy to see and feel environments from very far away.

However, Brahmanda is the opposite of that. The far opposite. Instead, it allows spirits to project their own conscious into Christian, making him a sort of medium for lost souls. Generally he can ignore and resist their projection, but in extreme situations or willingly, the spirits that latch onto him can assert control over his body. They can speak to him. They can even change his physical form to resemble their own.

Brahmanda was unlocked when Christian was young, fighting and bleeding to save his close friend, Takahara. When the procedure was complete, the two friends forged a spiritual connection through pain, vexation and even natural energy that alerted both of them to the spiritual world.

This technique cannot be used to aid Christian in combat in any way, shape or form. It is entirely for RP development. I cannot ever use these spirits to relay combat-related information, or use them to augment Christian's physical abilities, or manifest a larger or smaller form to overpower a foe or avoid attacks.


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 8:08 pm
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Shane-senpai
Your Rank: Undiscerned; it's honestly up in the bag until the daimyo system is released. It's between S and Kage.

Ninja Class: Sealing Master

Name of Jutsu: Brahmanda; The Universal Swell

Rank of Jutsu: Passive

Jutsu's Element: Nothing

Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No

Description:
Brahmanda is an ability that is one-in-a-thousand to an Uzumaki who has unlocked the powers of sealing, time-space and natural energy manipulation. It is an ability that some humans are exposed to, sometimes through birth and sometimes through a specific trigger that occurs in their life. It is an ability akin to what we on earth call 'astral projection', which allows for one person to extend their spiritual energy to see and feel environments from very far away.

However, Brahmanda is the opposite of that. The far opposite. Instead, it allows spirits to project their own conscious into Christian, making him a sort of medium for lost souls. Generally he can ignore and resist their projection, but in extreme situations or willingly, the spirits that latch onto him can assert control over his body. They can speak to him. They can even change his physical form to resemble their own.

Brahmanda was unlocked when Christian was young, fighting and bleeding to save his close friend, Takahara. When the procedure was complete, the two friends forged a spiritual connection through pain, vexation and even natural energy that alerted both of them to the spiritual world.

This technique cannot be used to aid Christian in combat in any way, shape or form. It is entirely for RP development. I cannot ever use these spirits to relay combat-related information, or use them to augment Christian's physical abilities, or manifest a larger or smaller form to overpower a foe or avoid attacks.


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But you have to glow when you use it
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b***h glow yourself. (Of course Senpai)

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 8:27 pm
I and Sol got skipped.  

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2014 11:18 am
Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Boiling blood
Rank of Jutsu: E-S
Jutsu's Element:Katon
Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List?nope if they want it they must learn it from me biggrin
Description: By doing one hand sign the user blood begins to heat up due to all the katon training the body can take the heat. The purpose of the heat is to kill or disintegrate any poison in the user body. depending on the power of the poison more chakra would need to be used to burn it out.
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Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Sword dance
Rank of Jutsu: S rank
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List?Nope
Description:The user would unsheathe two swords and place one at 12 o'clock and the other at 6 o'clock. By turning both blades in a circular movement the genjutsu is activated if the enemy watches or sees the movement of the blades. In this genjutsu both of the user swords will seem to vanish. As the enemy is confused about whats happening a circle of 1000 blades appear from the floor around the enemy these swords will follow the enemy endlessly. Each time the enemy is stabbed the pain is real though the wound is not. The swords can come from anywhere and everywhere there is no way to avoid them all. If you die in the genjutsu your brain will react and shutdown in real life. If your still caught in this genjutsu after 6 post the enemy body will shut down and fall passed out on the floor. During this jutsu the user may not move. If they move in real world the genjutsu is broken. In the real world the enemy is paralyzed in place while everything happens in their mind
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Reposting((sorry bit reporting xD))because I got skipped :/

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2014 1:37 pm
Your Rank: Kage
Ninja Class: Weponistah
Name of Jutsu: Doton: Moving Earth Core
Rank of Jutsu: E - SS
Jutsu's Element: Doton
Jutsu Type: Nin
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: Naht really.
Description: Using doton chakra, the earth is either raised or lowered according to the amount of chakra paid. For E rank, you can take a ten by ten square area and raise or drop it by ten feet. D = 20x20 and drop/raise 20. The pattern continues until forr SS rank you can take a 70x70 area and drop/raise it 70ft.
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Name of Jutsu: Doton: Rock Golem
Rank of Jutsu: A - S
Jutsu's Element: Doton
Jutsu Type: nIN
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: Naht really.
Description: This technique allows for the user to create a rock golem for either offensive or defensive purposes. This can be used on any earthen material, including cement or stone, but this doesn't change the strength of the tech. The Golem is 30ft tall and it's body can be a vector for earth techniques. It is also slightly faster than one would expect, and resistant to all but lightning ninjutsu. As long as the golem remains attached to the earth, it can constantly reform itself. For A rank chakra you can create up to two limbs of the golem that can be freely controlled until dispelled. This last up to eight posts. Lightning jutsu of up to a rank lower can take chunks off of the golem, which will not reform unless paid for. Water jutsu are null unless a rank stronger than the golem.  

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2014 2:28 pm
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Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Sage
Name of Jutsu: Conducting Mist
Rank of Jutsu: A
Jutsu's Element: Raiton
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? No
Description: Sin Uchiha created this jutsu after living many years in the mist and used his understanding of the mist and Raiton to create it. He expels a mist or fog created by small particles in the misty substance that are conductible upon the spark of lightning chakra that Sin may make at any moment. Unlike other substances, this cannot be started by fire. When the spark happens, the mist will ignite causing a voltage of lightning to surge through the mist, and anyone caught in the explosion will be fried. If a person manages to barely get away they will be paralyzed and burned by the small amount that did touch them. (paralyzing lasts 2 posts)
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Firstly, how long does it take for the mist to spread? Secondly the paralysis can only last for 1 post. Soz.


i forgot that part, it should start in one post be spread a small amount(say 7 feet and be spread out further in the second, 1 post paralysis works for me  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2014 3:01 pm
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Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: The Real Bypass
Rank of Jutsu: A
Jutsu's Element: Medical
Jutsu Type: Medical
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List? Hex No
Description: This medical jutsu has the user to pay the required amount of chakra. This chakra paid will allow the user to use medical jutsu without any hand signs being required for the entire fight. This only works with medical jutsu and no other type of jutsu.
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Jutsu that remove the prerequisite of hand seals are a delicate thing. In the case of Eseijutsu (or Medical Ninjutsu) most of them already don't require hand seals and the ones that do require them for a very good reason. If you would still like to pursue this then there is a Bloodline that doesn't require hand seals for Eseijutsu. The Senju.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 1:40 pm
Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Infinite Atmosphere: Astral Magus
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element: Universal/Senjutsu
Jutsu Type: Sealing
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Yes
Description: A high power sealing jutsu, that uses both the user and the environments chakra at once. The user starts the move by building up a tremendous amount of chakra unto one's own body. As the chakra builds up it creates seals on the user body that run from his head all the way down to his feet. The seals begin as black, but as the chakra builds up they start glowing green. The charge up time for the attack is 2 post, before it's ready to be used. The user is unable to fight during this time, though once his body is charge up he could release the attack at any time. The wait time is able to be cut in half if user knows, Infuuin: Kai (Secret Mark Seal: Release), and has used the technique before hand.

Once the energy is build up fully user releases an explosion, though the explosion is not harmful it is just the effect of releasing the energy. The area is then covered by a bubble of sealing energy. What the energy does is ban all kind of elemental energies making a space of null. As the space is null it also makes gravity disappear making everyone and thing inside the bubble float around. This is a double edged sword as the user will also be without his element. They're only left with anything that is none elemental ex. Universal Ninjutsu, Medical, Sealing, Taijutsu, Weapon, and Senjutsu techniques as long as they don't use any kind of element. Using the technique takes 25% of the user max chakra automatically (ex User has 250 chakra but is down to 100 chakra, it will take 25% of 250 not 100. making the cost 63 and not 25). And the barrier will only last for 5 posts before dispersing from the field. The barrier takes the shape of a hurricane composed of energy while the middle would look like the eye of said hurricane. The barrier doesn't stop anyone from leaving the area, and only effect the area where it was activated. (Ex. If technique is used in the gates of the village the effect is only active there) Though elemental attacks that come from outside the area and go into the area simply disperse once it enters it. Making this the ultimate shield against elemental chakra as long as it is within the area. The reason the area denies all elemental chakra is because it is saturated by the user's chakra and his manipulation of senjutsu chakra together.
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Infuuin: Kai (Secret Mark Seal: Release)
Description: Infuuin: Kai is a Fuuinjutsu technique developed by Tsunade that allows her to use the Souzou Saisei technique. Over a period of time, Tsunade will focus and build up chakra in the seal mark on her forehead. The release command will disperse the seal and allow the stored chakra to pump back into her body.
Rank: S



Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: Sanpo-Oni [Demoni Step] (Bushin Variant)
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Jutsu's Element: Universal
Jutsu Type: Morinaga Clan Jutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: Morinaga Clan
Description: The user utilizes chakra into their footing and kicks the air to jump higher, giving the appearance of flight. It is useful for evading attacks while in midair. This is originally part of the Priestess Dance only known as the Sanpo-Ten, though the Bushin have incorporated to their own style, though unlike the priestess who are able to use it with little difficulty the bushin has to generate a little more chakra to use the move correctly.
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Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Medical
Name of Jutsu: The Rare and Beautiful Art of a Controlled Disaster
(Ippin Seichuu Sanji) (Morinaga Variant of Stage 7)
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Jutsu's Element: Senjutsu
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: Morinaga Clan
Description: A variant of Dakai Sichi using the Hari Ressha [Needle Training] to enhance the movements and training of this stage. The user speed increases by a small margin while performing this stage as it increases their speed by .50 of their usual. The other part of this variant is that they manipulate their natural affinity to senjutsu to extend their attack by 2 feet from their usual natural range. The extra work for this stage causes a small chakra strain on the user of 5 chakra per post making the use of the style 13 chakra instead of the usual 8 chakra points.
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Dakai Sichi
This is a new and pretty much the final plateau for the practitioners of the Ippin Seichuu Sanji. Reaching this point is marked with the removal of the handcuffs the practitioner has been bound to since the beginning of their training. Once removed the practitioner has a much wider range of movements they can work with training their upper bodies to twist and bend while still supporting the body. Not only does this sort of training require the increase in the fluidness of movement but it also requires a certain level of upper body strength to be used properly. This stage is often referred to as the Liberty stage because the practitioner is give back their freedom.

Hari Ressha [Needle Training]: Jounin
The trainee is stuck with needles all over their bodies, they are then told to try to do simple movements. If they feel pain it means they are wasting energy on unnecessary movement. The training is over when they aren't able to feel pain anymore.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 3:45 pm
Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Amagumo (Steam Release: Nimbus)
Rank of Jutsu: C
Jutsu's Element: Suton (Steam)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:No
Description: Yeah, another nimbus jutsu, sorry. Couldn't resist. With this jutsu, the user exhales a controllable amount of dense, thick, boiling steam. She can control it and therefore, say, make a little cloud to sit on and fly around on. However, because steam is harmful, she wouldn't be able to use it on anyone besides herself for transportation except for an extremely short duration and under the right conditions. (Like, they have thick boots on and they'll only be on it for ~5 minutes). Otherwise, the steam can burn them. She can make as large of a cloud as she wants, but really only needs one to accommodate herself for reasons I stated above.


Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Yūrei no yōna tanabiku no Jutsu (Steam Release: Ghostly Wisps)
Rank of Jutsu: C/B (Couldn't decide - you choose which is more balanced)
Jutsu's Element: Suton (Steam)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:No
Description: With this technique, the user exhales steam from her body. Tendrils of the dense, searing fog can extend from anywhere on her body, like her fingers. She can control these ropes fluidly and force them into the orifices of her victim. An assasination technique more than anything, with this she can guide a wisp of steam into, say, someone's ear and basically roast the inside of the head. Once it's in there, they're *basically* screwed.


Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Suchīmu no ōra (Steam Release: Aura of Fog)
Rank of Jutsu: C
Jutsu's Element: Suton (Steam)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:No
Description: A defensive technique. Fun. The user of this exhales steam from any pore in her body at the C-ranked chakra cost. It seems to cling to her and, instead of roaming about the air like steam does, stays around her within about five feet. This gives her a protective barrier against Taijutsu, although certainly not impenetrable. Somebody surely could brave the burns and attack her through the aura of steam, and for a short time, would suffer little more than some pain. But that's a very, very short time. This technique also increases her taijutsu effectiveness, adding a scalding to any jab or punch or kick she throws. Every turn its active drains a C level of Chakra. This can only be used once a fight, as it's rather straining on the body.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 22, 2014 4:36 pm
THE BELOW JUTSU ARE PART OF THE FOUR THAT JINCHUURIKI CAN SUBMIT FOR THEIR DEMONS' USE AS WELL AS THEIR OWN.
(The above three are just custom Steam Jutsu for my Jinchuuriki's use)

Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Īsariaru no Suchīmu no Jutsu (Steam Release: Ethereal Steam)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element: Suton (Steam) [Jinchuuriki]
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:No
Description: This technique can be used by both the Gobi and the Jinchuuriki, in any stage or the lack thereof. If the Jinchuuriki is still a Genin, as long as she's in at least Stage 0, she can use the Jutsu despite its rank. The user performs one single handsign and freezes still. Then a pop and a bang, and suddenly, they've exploded into Steam. And a true explosion it is. Steam will cover the area at a radius equal to an entire Hidden Village. The user has disappeared into the steam and effectively become the steam. They can emerge from it in any form (the upper half of their body, their head, an arm) and sink back into it. This steam is packed with chakra, making it much more difficult to just blow away with Fuuton. In fact, only a Fuuton technique SS ranked (or, possibly, higher) could blow away this steam.

Because so much effort is put into the user dispersing themselves into the steam as well as warding off its weakness to Fuuton, it's not nearly as hot as it could be, and being among the steam wouldn't do more than make you a little bit hot. The user can zip around the steam, however, and heat up small concentrated areas at will, thereby flash-boiling a person pretty quickly.

The steam fades after five posts, and the user reappears wherever he wishes that was within reach of the attack.


Your Rank: Genin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Mizu no Henkan (Steam Release: Water Conversion)
Rank of Jutsu: A
Jutsu's Element: Suton (Steam) [Jinchuuriki]
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:No
Description: Here, the user draws water from all sources of life that have no chakra and any other reservoirs they can get a hold of, and they turn it to steam. Fields of grass would wither, letting out a glob of scalding fog that the user can manipulate as a weapon. Trees would die, releasing what they have. An entire forest could be wiped out using this technique, the steam rising above it as if waiting for command, a target to lock on. This technique is most effective on a lake or a pond, where a colossal amount of steam can be created while removing a potential source of Suiton attacks from enemies.
 
PostPosted: Tue Jul 22, 2014 4:52 pm
Your Rank: chunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of jutsu: Shikgami Jutsu: sutorēji jumon-
Rank of Jutsu: C
Jutsu's Element: None
Chakra Cost: Chakra equivilant of jutsu per tag sealed , then only 5 chakra to activate the tag to release the jutsu.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu/summoning/sealing
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Yes
Description:
Using summoning tags the user can seal a small justu inside with a portion of their chakra and seal it. After which the user will need time to recover their chakra but this is normally done in advance before a mission.
Upon using the tags the user can either place or throw the tags and with a release the jutsu within the tag is activated. This allows for setting small traps or creating useful shields. This is a ninjutsu technique so unfortunate genjustu or any forbidden ritual Jutsu cannot be sealed within the tags. But jutsu such as barriers, projectile, or healing jutsu can be placed inside.
In addition only jutsu known by the user can be stored in the tags, and tags created by others cannot be used either due to the fact it was made with foreign chakra.

Additional requirements:
1.} links to threads where the character made the tags i think should be posted next to your tags in your inventory so that you have proof of making them, for each jutsu tag. (just to prevent people for mass producing them without having to spend chakra, dont want cheaters.)
2.} After making tags one should make at least one post of their character resting to regain their chakra.  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2014 3:57 pm
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Your Rank: Genin

Ninja Class: Taijutsu

Name of Jutsu: Roxanne’s Leitmotif: Drama Queen by Sahar (Tambourine only of course)

Rank of Jutsu: Each member of The Idols is required to have a leitmotif. This song changes as the user changes. Thus, it is possible that as the user’s rank increases, the effects of this jutsu also increase or grow stronger.*

Jutsu's Element:Sound

Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu/Genjutsu?

Do you want your Jutsu added to the Guild List? No, since the effects of each leitmotif are unique to each user.

Description: Over a series of four posts, Roxanne performs her leitmotif. During this time, she dances and twirls to the rhythm she creates with her tambourine. Each jingle and beat she creates resonates with the target’s nervous system. Depending on the situation, Roxanne’s performance is seen as nothing but an intriguing or annoying act at first. However, over time, her target becomes more and more aware of the pulsating sounds emitting from his or her own body. By the fourth and final post, the sound of the target’s heartbeat becomes amplified to the point where it becomes a rather worrisome distraction. The almost sudden awareness of and shock at these sounds places stress on the target, which only causes their heart to beat faster. By the end of the fourth post, Roxanne ceases, the song ends, and the sound of the target's heartbeat returns to normal. However, this could be rather shocking, perhaps leaving the target with the impression that their heart has suddenly stopped.

Of course, this jutsu does have its weaknesses. One, Roxanne cannot stop dancing and playing her instrument, or she will have to restart. Thus, her opponent can simply attack her and disrupt the justsu. Furthermore, while Roxanne can dodge as she dances, she must be completely focused on playing her song, rendering her unable to attack without cancelling the jutsu. In order for the jutsu to have a higher probability of succeeding, it is best executed within a group or more peaceful environment.**

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*I’m actually uncertain about this as each member of The Idols is required to have a leitmotif. I hope it makes sense.
**I had a hard time coming up with the effects for her leitmotif. I’m not sure if this is particularly “epic” or feasible, but help and advice would be very much appreciated!


I praise you and your grammar. You make this bearable. Firstly I have to say that I'm unsure as to if the tambourine is triggering an illusion, or if this is ACTUALLY happening to them. The difference determines whether it sounds more like Genjustu than Ninjutsu so you can start by specifying that. Second point would be that the rank and thereby cost of it is unspecified. Other than that i think this tech is pretty clever I think. the split between Gen and Nin will determine anymore advice I have for you.

Thank you for the feedback!

As for the jutsu type, I guess the tambourine might be giving the illusion that the target's heart is beating louder, but I would like for the stress the target feels and the increased heart rate to be very real. Thus, when Roxanne stops performing and the intensity of target's heartbeat returns to normal levels, the target may actually think their heart has stopped. So, perhaps this is really more of a genjutsu?

As for the ranks, I'm not sure myself. Like I mentioned earlier, each member of the Idols is required to have a leitmotif. So, I'm not sure if it's something that evolves as they grow stronger and achieve higher ranks, or if it's something that they can learn at any rank. However, once the rank is established, how much do you think it should cost to perform this jutsu?  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:55 pm
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Infinite Atmosphere: Astral Magus: Denied.
Sanpo-Oni [Demoni Step] (Bushin Variant): Approved
The Rare and Beautiful Art of a Controlled Disaster: Approved


iAm Techno-san
Suton: Amagumo (Steam Release: Nimbus): The power of flight is actually quite a big deal in Nur, so denied.

Suton: Yūrei no yōna tanabiku no Jutsu (Steam Release: Ghostly Wisps): I'd say S Rank. Also, please be specific on how fast these tendrils move. Not approved nor denied.

Suton: Suchīmu no ōra (Steam Release: Aura of Fog): Approved.

Suton: Īsariaru no Suchīmu no Jutsu (Steam Release: Ethereal Steam): Denied.

Suton: Mizu no Henkan (Steam Release: Water Conversion): Approved.



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2014 3:12 pm
iAm Techno-san
Suton: Amagumo (Steam Release: Nimbus): The power of flight is actually quite a big deal in Nur, so denied.

Suton: Yūrei no yōna tanabiku no Jutsu (Steam Release: Ghostly Wisps): I'd say S Rank. Also, please be specific on how fast these tendrils move. Not approved nor denied.

Suton: Suchīmu no ōra (Steam Release: Aura of Fog): Approved.

Suton: Īsariaru no Suchīmu no Jutsu (Steam Release: Ethereal Steam): Denied.

Suton: Mizu no Henkan (Steam Release: Water Conversion): Approved.



Thanks for your time. With the Nimbus technique, a few pages back, a similar (and arguably more useful) technique was approved at the same rank as mine after an apparent discussion with other crew. Is there any way I can still get this approved with that being said?

For Ethereal Steam, I can totally see why it was denied. It was a long shot when I submitted it and I knew that. But since its a Demon technique and supposed to be unique and powerful, is there any way you suggest I can modify it to meet Guild standards?

And for the tendrils, let me now specify (and I'll edit it if I need to resubmit it) that they move rather slow, so if somebody's aware the jutsu is being used on them, they'd be able to avoid it with ease. It's really not all that useful then, as it requires complete ignorance from the enemy to be used. With this in mind, can I put it at an A rank?  
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