Suggestions

[NovaKing]

Spastic waffles

I've noticed a slight lack of quality critiques in the guild.

Mine included.

Any suggestions as to how we can get this place better at critiquing other's work?

..Sorry if I offend anyone. I didn't mean to. I just want this guild to be..well...perfect, actually. XD

It's just that most of the comments I see on people's work are simply "that's really good". And that doesn't really help writers to become any better.

Well you could just ignore the author's feelings, but......

hehe ^_^ Thats not why im here though. Im here to request a section devoted to collabrative stories, and the efforts of coauthors.

( I agree, by the way. I'd take scornful correction over meaningless praise any day)  

[KirbyVictorious]

A hug, a kiss, a cookie, and a cure for the DAMN WRITER'S BLOCK.

But I don't mind criticism. I know my writing er......needs work sweatdrop and I don't like it when people miss things.

Like, I made this HUUUUUGE "duh" mistake, and NO ONE WHO COMMENTED NOTICED.

Seriously.

ick.

Much love, Waffles.  

[.nouvel.espoir.]

Secret Santas or Wishlist! heart  

[KirbyVictorious]

I WANT A CHRITMAS PARTY!

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CanIcanIcanIpleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase, Waffles?

PLeasepleaseplease? I'll organize the food and the presents and everrrrrrything!  

[Reese_Roper]

KirbyVictorious

I WANT A CHRITMAS PARTY!

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CanIcanIcanIpleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase, Waffles?

PLeasepleaseplease? I'll organize the food and the presents and everrrrrrything!

OooOooOoo I'llhelpI'llhelpI'llhelp! 4laugh

PleasePleasePleasePlease!

*Turns puppy eyes on Waffles*

 

[NovaKing]

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(o0) {*yawn*]
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[NovaKing]

so what about that collaborative section?  

[KirbyVictorious]

I'm forcing you to be the drink-maker-bartender-dude at the party if you don't stop YAWNING.

I can do that, you know.

I HAVE THE FLUFFY PINK SEVENTH DIMENSION POWER.

twisted  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

I'm forcing you to be the drink-maker-bartender-dude at the party if you don't stop YAWNING.

I can do that, you know.

I HAVE THE FLUFFY PINK SEVENTH DIMENSION POWER.

twisted

That wasnt me! It was the boredom bunny. He's evil!  

[KirbyVictorious]

You let him into your post.

TOTHEDRESSINGROOMWITHYOU. You get a weird Kirby-esque uniform. ):<  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

You let him into your post.

TOTHEDRESSINGROOMWITHYOU. You get a weird Kirby-esque uniform. ):<

NOOO not a weird kirby esque uniform. I couldnt possibly have any fun dressed in one of those.

[hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things]  

[KirbyVictorious]

*is offended*

You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal.  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

*is offended*

You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal.

no! no more kirby related punishments!

[hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby, the other kirby, must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things]  

[KirbyVictorious]

NovaKing

KirbyVictorious

*is offended*

You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal.

no! no more kirby related punishments!

[hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby, the other kirby, must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things]

I heard that.

I love Kirby more than you.

And yes, I punish with random kirby-esque things. Like the pink fluffy pimp stick. *pokes*  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

NovaKing

KirbyVictorious

*is offended*

You have invoked the wrath of Kirby, Insolent mortal.

no! no more kirby related punishments!

[hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she'll never see this. So i can now safely proclaim that i love Kirby so very very much. But kirby, the other kirby, must never know this or else she will not punish me with odd kirby like things]

I heard that.

I love Kirby more than you.

And yes, I punish with random kirby-esque things. Like the pink fluffy pimp stick. *pokes*

AHH! i should type in my head from now on.