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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 5:14 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 6:56 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 1:30 am
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xXHotBabiBluXx Niphredil Ithilmir Thanks. whee It's for this application to this breedables shop as a colourist.. no way am I going to get it, though. sweatdrop How do you people do such good coloring? I suck so much. >.<;;
I used this and then experimented a little on my own. *shrug
Ask Blibbles, he's a lot better than me~
@Soumakisa - Do you mind if I go into constructivecriticism mode? It's a good concept for poetry and you create quite an appropriate and good atmosphere, but the details could do with a bit of tweaking - for example, the rhyming - I like the fact that it only rhymes sometimes, but maybe more regularly is a better idea, because although I know you're trying to create a sort of sense of confusion, it's a bit too fragmented, in my opinion. And maybe it's not necessary to twist the sense into words which may not fit entirely well just for the sake of rhyme? And the last stanza - the 'dark wings' thing really confuses me. No offence, but it feels like it's there because it sounds good.
Overall, though, a nice piece. I really like it <3 I'm just quite nitpicky with poetry.. which is why I never post any of mine anywhere, 'cause it's all so bad by my standards xD
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:29 am
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Niphredil Ithilmir xXHotBabiBluXx Niphredil Ithilmir Thanks. whee It's for this application to this breedables shop as a colourist.. no way am I going to get it, though. sweatdrop How do you people do such good coloring? I suck so much. >.<;; I used this and then experimented a little on my own. *shrug Ask Blibbles, he's a lot better than me~ @Soumakisa - Do you mind if I go into constructivecriticism mode? It's a good concept for poetry and you create quite an appropriate and good atmosphere, but the details could do with a bit of tweaking - for example, the rhyming - I like the fact that it only rhymes sometimes, but maybe more regularly is a better idea, because although I know you're trying to create a sort of sense of confusion, it's a bit too fragmented, in my opinion. And maybe it's not necessary to twist the sense into words which may not fit entirely well just for the sake of rhyme? And the last stanza - the 'dark wings' thing really confuses me. No offence, but it feels like it's there because it sounds good. Overall, though, a nice piece. I really like it <3 I'm just quite nitpicky with poetry.. which is why I never post any of mine anywhere, 'cause it's all so bad by my standards xD
Oh, ok..I'll try... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:10 pm
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t0shi0 Tanqexe Hi all smile -insert pic- a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map Oi, oi. Tell me you didn't actually do that. o-o;;;
Tosh will now go into a corner and suck her thumb as she thinks about how inferior she is.
^^; 1.5 hour work in Photoshop
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:10 am
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Tanqexe t0shi0 Tanqexe Hi all smile -insert pic- a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map Oi, oi. Tell me you didn't actually do that. o-o;;;
Tosh will now go into a corner and suck her thumb as she thinks about how inferior she is.^^; 1.5 hour work in Photoshop
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:17 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:31 pm
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Niphredil Ithilmir Tanqexe t0shi0 Tanqexe Hi all smile -insert pic- a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map Oi, oi. Tell me you didn't actually do that. o-o;;;
Tosh will now go into a corner and suck her thumb as she thinks about how inferior she is.^^; 1.5 hour work in Photoshop gonk heart *wants to be talented
Me too. gonk
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