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[[Bab! Co.]]

lol, not bad..pretty good coloring, well, way better than me. 3nodding  

[Niphredil Ithilmir]

Thanks. whee

It's for this application to this breedables shop as a colourist.. no way am I going to get it, though. sweatdrop  

[soumakisa]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/31656796/

(ω・ )ゝ ok... it's not that good... so dont laugh...  

[Tanqexe]

Hi all smile



a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map  

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Soumakisa - very nice poetry *claps* 3nodding

Tanqexe - Wow, it looks so real eek

 

[[Bab! Co.]]

Niphredil Ithilmir

Thanks. whee

It's for this application to this breedables shop as a colourist.. no way am I going to get it, though. sweatdrop

How do you people do such good coloring? I suck so much. >.<;;  

[t0shi0]

Tanqexe

Hi all smile

-insert pic-

a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map

Oi, oi.
Tell me you didn't actually do that. o-o;;;

Tosh will now go into a corner and suck her thumb as she thinks about how inferior she is.  

[Niphredil Ithilmir]

xXHotBabiBluXx

Niphredil Ithilmir

Thanks. whee

It's for this application to this breedables shop as a colourist.. no way am I going to get it, though. sweatdrop

How do you people do such good coloring? I suck so much. >.<;;

I used this and then experimented a little on my own. *shrug

Ask Blibbles, he's a lot better than me~

@Soumakisa - Do you mind if I go into constructivecriticism mode? It's a good concept for poetry and you create quite an appropriate and good atmosphere, but the details could do with a bit of tweaking - for example, the rhyming - I like the fact that it only rhymes sometimes, but maybe more regularly is a better idea, because although I know you're trying to create a sort of sense of confusion, it's a bit too fragmented, in my opinion. And maybe it's not necessary to twist the sense into words which may not fit entirely well just for the sake of rhyme? And the last stanza - the 'dark wings' thing really confuses me. No offence, but it feels like it's there because it sounds good.

Overall, though, a nice piece. I really like it <3 I'm just quite nitpicky with poetry.. which is why I never post any of mine anywhere, 'cause it's all so bad by my standards xD  

[[Bab! Co.]]

Niphredil Ithilmir

xXHotBabiBluXx

Niphredil Ithilmir

Thanks. whee

It's for this application to this breedables shop as a colourist.. no way am I going to get it, though. sweatdrop

How do you people do such good coloring? I suck so much. >.<;;

I used this and then experimented a little on my own. *shrug

Ask Blibbles, he's a lot better than me~

@Soumakisa - Do you mind if I go into constructivecriticism mode? It's a good concept for poetry and you create quite an appropriate and good atmosphere, but the details could do with a bit of tweaking - for example, the rhyming - I like the fact that it only rhymes sometimes, but maybe more regularly is a better idea, because although I know you're trying to create a sort of sense of confusion, it's a bit too fragmented, in my opinion. And maybe it's not necessary to twist the sense into words which may not fit entirely well just for the sake of rhyme? And the last stanza - the 'dark wings' thing really confuses me. No offence, but it feels like it's there because it sounds good.

Overall, though, a nice piece. I really like it <3 I'm just quite nitpicky with poetry.. which is why I never post any of mine anywhere, 'cause it's all so bad by my standards xD

Oh, ok..I'll try... sweatdrop  

[Tanqexe]

t0shi0

Tanqexe

Hi all smile

-insert pic-

a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map

Oi, oi.
Tell me you didn't actually do that. o-o;;;

Tosh will now go into a corner and suck her thumb as she thinks about how inferior she is.

^^; 1.5 hour work in Photoshop  

[Niphredil Ithilmir]

Tanqexe

t0shi0

Tanqexe

Hi all smile

-insert pic-

a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map

Oi, oi.
Tell me you didn't actually do that. o-o;;;

Tosh will now go into a corner and suck her thumb as she thinks about how inferior she is.

^^; 1.5 hour work in Photoshop

gonk heart

*wants to be talented  

[soumakisa]

love the colouring tutorial~

and niph~ thanks for ur constructive criticism.. ^_^ i need some in order for me to improve... yeah.. the dark wings.. i have to agree with what u say.. sweatdrop didnt really fit into poem.. xD  

[Niphredil Ithilmir]

No problemo~ sometimes you just need someone else to point out some things which you may not have noticed..

..btw, I took a leaf out of your book and decided to put some of my writing up on deviantart. Here's a little something I wrote a while ago.. warning: there's quite a bit of french in it.. not a huge amount, but random words in places.. just telling you. ^^;;

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31901339  

[[Bab! Co.]]

Niphredil Ithilmir

Tanqexe

t0shi0

Tanqexe

Hi all smile

-insert pic-

a quick piccy for Chibi Hige for his shop/RP thingy's image map

Oi, oi.
Tell me you didn't actually do that. o-o;;;

Tosh will now go into a corner and suck her thumb as she thinks about how inferior she is.

^^; 1.5 hour work in Photoshop

gonk heart

*wants to be talented

Me too. gonk  

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One of the best Artowork i have done in my life, i feel so proud mrgreen
I havent coloured it yet since i know its gonna take ages and i got school tomorrow rolleyes
Took me a few days to draw, i tried colouring the orb using Photo Artmaster, but im not so good at colouring on pc sweatdrop