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Evanescently Magnificent

Anxious Bloodsucker

PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2019 8:39 pm
Nohea One Year PA
Martial Master - Can use weapons to (within reason) apply to/replace fists in taijutsu techniques.

Ikuyo One Year PA
Studious Swordswoman - Can (within reason) utilize any weapon with any style

Lahlil One Year PA
Glimpse the Unthinkable - Genjutsu that are not kai'd out of right away require an extra ten chakra per post the target was trapped within them to break free. This chakra cannot increase the rank of kai required to break free but should be paid along side it at the time of escape.


NecroPlant
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2019 11:34 pm
Evanescently Magnificent
Pad Chief

Hey there hope you're having a good day C:

Okay so Mantle of Creation is a nono because it's just giving you way too much possible chakra reduction for a pa. Saiketsu can actually do something similar but it has to go through a bunch of hoops and do it through a mix of pa/jutsu/getting close and after all that it has a hard cap on much it do it so I'm not sure what can be done with this to be honest sweatdrop You might wanna just try to come up with a different idea

Blessing of the Earth is a no as well as the regen of sage chakra has been set at the hard cap of what it is although you caaan use a pa to increase your max amount of sage chakra by 100 just like with normal chakra pa's


Thanks for this.

Blessing of the Earth doesn't increase the cap. It increases the amount received per post. So any Sage Chakra gained each round is doubled. To achieve the same effect I've just altered it so the meditation state is obtained.

Replaced Blessing of the Earth with Ward of the Depths.  

Pad Chief

Winner


NecroPlant

Trash Gardener

PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 6:19 am
Evanescently Magnificent
Nohea One Year PA
Martial Master - Can use weapons to (within reason) apply to/replace fists in taijutsu techniques.

Ikuyo One Year PA
Studious Swordswoman - Can (within reason) utilize any weapon with any style

Lahlil One Year PA
Glimpse the Unthinkable - Genjutsu that are not kai'd out of right away require an extra ten chakra per post the target was trapped within them to break free. This chakra cannot increase the rank of kai required to break free but should be paid along side it at the time of escape.



Beep to the BoopI'd like better specifications
Martial Master: {Short} - {Medium} - {Blunt}
Studious Swordswoman: {Medium} - {Large} - {Bladed}
Lahlil: Gucci Gang

I will now Trade You.

•Tox-synchrony: Ukyo's Poisonous Existence feature can be applied to Hojo-ink, inadvertently confers the Hojo immunity as they are unaffected by their own inks effects, also if doing such, forfeits the benefits. Using Ceremonial Blend or if the Hojo-Ink is mixed with foreign chakra i.e an enemies Suiton the immunity from the resistance to one's own tainted ink is also lost.

•Wealth of Knowledge: The amount of {Special} items craftable in each known crafting tree is increased by [1]

•Breaking The Mold: Restricted Class Techniques Can be Learned Up to A-rank once they've been appropriately unlocked. These A-ranked techniques unlocked, however, are treated as B-rank for the purpose of collisions and Korabo.  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 7:07 pm
[ Changes: Job Related PAs for Worker Class replace given PAs from creation. New PA Names are as follows. Molten Steel, Master of All, Personalized Treasure.

Second Change. Free Respec from Mystic Hero to Expert discipline. Side note, I de-aged him 4 years. He was too old.]


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                        ▰ PERSONAL DATA

                        Full Name: Shisui Sakakibara
                        Nickname:
                        Age: 23
                        Birthdate: 3/10
                        Gender: Male


                        ▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS

                        Body Rank: B Rank
                        Hair Color: Black
                        Eye Color: Black
                        Height: 5'8
                        Weight: 158 lbs

                        Bloodline: None
                        Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, 10 jutsu slots

                        Non-Combat Outfit:
                        Combat Outfit:


                        ▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY

                        Nindo: " Killing is a profession, professionals get paid."
                        Personality: Shisui is a jaded man who rarely speaks of the past but is more than willing to throw down his liquor. His sarcastic and irritable personality makes him a hard person for most to ally with. He does not lack manners, although he seldom has use for them. He is well educated for hailing from a village outside the structure of a village. He has a distinct disdain for combat that causes wide spread destruction, believing that all violence should be deliberate and pinpointed at the target. He has a tenancy to hold grudges but will overlook anything to achieve his secret goal.

                        Village: Uzushiogakure
                        Title: Genin

                        Background:
                        Shisui hails from the land of whirlpools. Prior to his time in the village, he lived on a neighboring island some miles off the coast. He is...was a father to two young children and husband to a remarkable woman. Two years prior to his enlistment in the village academy, he was a simple man who tended a small garden, providing for his family from the sweat of his brow. Their poverty meant very little to any of them due to the happiness they shared together. One day, while collecting ore for crafting tools on the opposite side of the island, smoke rose from the location of their home. Rushing to the aide of his own, he found a large ship had docked just off short and a slew of men who plundered for a living had raided their town and uses large explosive combat which was visible due to the blasted ruins and flames. With no surviving members of the village aside himself who had wandered away, he searched his home. There he found his wife had been abused and left for dead, his children slain. Shisui would remain on the island long enough to bury the dead, taking time to pray at each of their grave sites. This process took several days without rest. At the end, Shisui would wander to the main island, frequenting the towns bars until he would happen upon a training session one day of shinobi. He then realized that vengeance was within his grasp. With no happiness and a heart of vengeance, he joined the academy as an adult, vowing to replace his impoverished heart with a wealthy life style while he sought out higher ambitions.
                        ▰ CLASSES AND STATS

                        First Class:Bukijutsu
                        ▱▰▱ Expert:The user has achieved a sense of mastery and focus unlike others and are known as an Expert, a dedicated focus over a weapon they use to near perfection. The shinobi can pick a single weapon, or two if dual wielding, to apply this focus toward with examples such as Katana, Spear, Bows or even Dual Daggers. They acquire a Keystone technique that is unique to them with an additional 2 Custom Techniques derived of this special ability. They gain a moderate [+3] boost to both speed and reflex. Techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon in attack or defense.
                        Second Class: Worker
                        ▱▰▱ Legendary WorkerThe user is able to create one additional legendary weapon for one rpc. In addition, the user can also create one additional weapon for their village or their rogue group that the character is a member of.


                        Chakra Pool: 850
                        Stamina Pool: 765
                        Chakra Element: Doton, Katon
                        Chakra Color: Translucent
                        Chakra Materialization: Whisps

                        Passive Stats Increases:
                        • Strength ► 0
                        → N/A
                        • Speed ► 3
                        → Expert
                        • Reflex ► 3
                        → Expert
                        • Fortitude ► 0
                        → N/A

                        Strengths:
                        • Lucky
                        • Weapon combat
                        Weaknesses:
                        • Walking Nightmares
                        • Gambling
                        Fears:
                        • Sleeping: Nightmares ensue.
                        • Reality of heaven and hell.

                        Modifiers:
                        • Learn 3 extra of any technique per post.
                        • Learn 3 extra Bukijutsu technique per post.
                        • Once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu
                        Personal Attributes:
                        Shadow Forge: The user is capable of replicating any weapon with their craft after studying the weapon for one post. However, the replica is imperfect, only withholding it's durability for a single post. For each rank of the user's weapon crafting skill, the weapon's durability is increased by one post, totaling at five posts as a grand master.
                        Blood and Sweat: Shisui's pours his blood and sweat into his craft, requiring half the job completions to obtain his next rank of crafting as a weapon smith.
                        From Forge to Field: The user is able to create and wield an additional custom weapon for their own personal use.
                        Masterful Handling: For each custom or legendary sword being actively used that was created by Shisui, he receives a mild active increase to speed.
                        Upper Class Clientele: Shisui is able to claim ryo from job missions at 1.5x the normal reward for each rank.
                        Bond Forging: Crafting Missions can be done with a group, dividing the post count for each member. Missions completed in this manner credit each participant in one post of collaboration training with one another.
                        Natural Talent: Shisui starts off as an apprentice smith.
                        Molten Steel: The user's complex bukijutsu may add the katon element the user possesses, granting them a burning effect.
                        Master of All: Shisui gains an additional bukijutsu slot
                        Personalized Treasure: When the user creates the legendary weapon intended for the village via the discipline Legendary Worker, that weapon is able to gain an additional mild descriptive increase to the desired descriptive.


                        ▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS

                        Ryo: 両250
                        AC: 27,300

                        Missions Complete:
                        E Rank :: 6
                        D Rank :: 0
                        C Rank :: 0
                        B Rank :: 0
                        A Rank :: 0
                        S Rank :: 0

                        Crafting Trees
                        • Smithing || → Veteran
                        • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

                        Crafting Jobs Complete:
                        D Rank :: 0
                        C Rank :: 0
                        B Rank :: 0
                        A Rank :: 0
                        S Rank :: 0

                        Job Titles
                        • Weapon Smithing || → Grand Master { Worker Package }
                        • Enchantment Smithing || → Grand Master { Worker Package }
                        • {Job} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Job} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Job} || → {Current Title}

                        Job Missions Complete: {all start at 0}
                        D Rank :: 0
                        C Rank :: 0
                        B Rank :: 0
                        A Rank :: 0
                        S Rank :: 0

                        Mission, Training, and Job Claims

                        PA Reward Claim: [x]
                        AC Transfer Claim: [ x ] 25k AC [ Takumi Saegahara ]
                        Anniversary Reward: [ x ]
                        Reward Claim: [x] 5 Custom Slots
                        Training Claim: [ x ]
                        Jobs Claim: [ x ]


                        ▰ INVENTORY

                        • 5 Training Coupon
                        • 1 Stamina Coupon
                        • 1 Chakra Coupon
                        • 2 Mission Coupon
                        • 5 AC Coupon
                        • 2 Ryo Coupon
                        • 1 Tudor Coupon
                        • Worker Package x 2 [ Claimed ]
                        Weapon Specs


                        ▰ TECHNIQUES

                        Limitations:
                        • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 18
                        • Genjutsu : : 00 / 08
                        • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 04
                        • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
                        • Formless: : 00 / 06

                        Maruton

                        ____• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] | Rank E
                        ____• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] | Rank E
                        ____• Kai [ Release ] | Rank X
                        ____• Ayatsuito no Jutsu [ String Reeling Technique ] | X Rank
                        ____• Kawara Shuriken [ Roof Tile Shuriken ] | X Rank
                        ____• Youji [ Toothpick ] | X Rank


                        Fuuinjutsu
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                        Katon

                        ____• Fukumen no Jutsu [ Veil Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Shoumeidan no Jutsu [ Flare Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Tanebi no Jutsu [ Cinder Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Bounetsu no Jutsu [ Flame-Resistance Technique ] | Rank E


                        Doton
                        ____• Ishi Yoroi no Ude [ Stone Bracers ] | Rank E
                        ____• Doton Bunshin no Jutsu [ Earth Clone Skill ] | Rank E
                        ____• Iwa Tounyuu no Jutsu [ Rock Throw Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu [ Earth Military Movement Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Tsuchi Tou Tou [ Swift Earth ] | Rank X ( Learned as E )


                        Bukijutsu
                        Phantom Slayer
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                        Tetsu no Ryu
                        _ Stage 1
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                        Shigure Souen
                        _ Stage 1
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                        ▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 07 / 09

                        FORMLESS PROFICIENCY
                        ____• Soft Physical Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Hard Physical Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Strange Weapon Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Soft Mental Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Hard Mental Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Projectile Formless: Shuriken
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Small Weapon Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Medium Weapon Formless: Katana
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Large Weapon Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Formless
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                        ____• Formless
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                        ____• Formless
                        _______○ Training Level:
                        Formless Techniques
                        ____• | Rank
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                        ▰ JUTSU TRAINING



                        ____Jutsu Learned [x]

                        Academy Earth Ninjutsu[x]
                        Formless Projectile: Shuriken [x]
                        Formless Medium Weapon: Katana[x]
                        Formless Soft Physical [x]
                        Formless Hard Physical [x]
                        Formless Soft Mental [x]
                        Academy Fire Ninjutsu[x]
                        All Academy Techniques
                        [x]
                        Toothpick Technique [x]
                        Roof Tile Shuriken [x]
                        Formless [ Large/Small Weapon + Hard Mental ] [x]


                        ▰ TECHNIQUES

                        Limitations:
                        • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 12
                        • Genjutsu : : 00 / 08
                        • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05
                        • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
                        • Formless: : 00 / 06

                        Maruton

                        ____• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] | Rank E
                        ____• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] | Rank E
                        ____• Kai [ Release ] | Rank X
                        ____• Ayatsuito no Jutsu [ String Reeling Technique ] | X Rank
                        ____• Kawara Shuriken [ Roof Tile Shuriken ] | X Rank
                        ____• Youji [ Toothpick ] | X Rank


                        Fuuinjutsu
                        ____• | Rank
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                        Katon

                        ____• Fukumen no Jutsu [ Veil Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Shoumeidan no Jutsu [ Flare Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Tanebi no Jutsu [ Cinder Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Bounetsu no Jutsu [ Flame-Resistance Technique ] | Rank E


                        Doton
                        ____• Ishi Yoroi no Ude [ Stone Bracers ] | Rank E
                        ____• Doton Bunshin no Jutsu [ Earth Clone Skill ] | Rank E
                        ____• Iwa Tounyuu no Jutsu [ Rock Throw Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu [ Earth Military Movement Technique ] | Rank E
                        ____• Tsuchi Tou Tou [ Swift Earth ] | Rank X ( Learned as E )


                        Bukijutsu
                        Phantom Slayer
                        _ Stage 1
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                        _ Stage 2
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                        Tetsu no Ryu
                        _ Stage 1
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                        Shigure Souen
                        _ Stage 1
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                        ▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 07 / 09

                        FORMLESS PROFICIENCY
                        ____• Soft Physical Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Hard Physical Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Strange Weapon Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Soft Mental Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Hard Mental Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Projectile Formless: Shuriken
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Small Weapon Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Medium Weapon Formless: Katana
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Large Weapon Formless
                        _______○ Training Level: A
                        ____• Formless
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                        Formless Techniques
                        ____• | Rank
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                        ▰ JUTSU TRAINING



                        ____Jutsu Learned [x]

                        Academy Earth Ninjutsu[x]
                        Formless Projectile: Shuriken [x]
                        Formless Medium Weapon: Katana[x]
                        Formless Soft Physical [x]
                        Formless Hard Physical [x]
                        Formless Soft Mental [x]
                        Academy Fire Ninjutsu[x]
                        All Academy Techniques
                        [x]
                        Toothpick Technique [x]
                        Roof Tile Shuriken [x]
                        Formless [ Large/Small Weapon + Hard Mental ] [x]

 

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Evanescently Magnificent

Anxious Bloodsucker

PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 7:15 pm
NecroPlant
Evanescently Magnificent
Nohea One Year PA
Martial Master - Nohea can use her Greatsword to (within reason) apply to/replace fists in taijutsu techniques.

Ikuyo One Year PA
Studious Swordswoman - Ikuyo is capable of using a medium length blade in place of a buki style's traditional weapon type (Within reason).




Beep to the BoopI'd like better specifications
Martial Master: {Short} - {Medium} - {Blunt}
Studious Swordswoman: {Medium} - {Large} - {Bladed}
Lahlil: Gucci Gang

I will now Trade You.

•Tox-synchrony: Ukyo's Poisonous Existence feature can be applied to Hojo-ink, inadvertently confers the Hojo immunity as they are unaffected by their own inks effects, also if doing such, forfeits the benefits. Using Ceremonial Blend or if the Hojo-Ink is mixed with foreign chakra i.e an enemies Suiton the immunity from the resistance to one's own tainted ink is also lost.

•Wealth of Knowledge: The amount of {Special} items craftable in each known crafting tree is increased by [1]

•Breaking The Mold: Restricted Class Techniques Can be Learned Up to A-rank once they've been appropriately unlocked. These A-ranked techniques unlocked, however, are treated as B-rank for the purpose of collisions and Korabo.

Canges made! Yours are approved! C:  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 7:18 pm
NecroPlant


Sorry for my delayed response. What about adding a +5-+10 cost of natural chakra per post that its active for a start?

In terms of how it interacts with genjutsu I suppose I was mostly trying to hard counter visual trigger genjutsus. Besides that the other use I want to make for this is have it as sort of giving me a different view of the battlefield than normal. Like instead of a first person perspective I'd be able to see pretty much wherever my plants are to an extent, making it into a much larger field of view.

Any recommendations for how it might be best to word all of that cleaner?  

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Anxious Bloodsucker

PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 7:57 pm
Kondo Kaicho

Approved!

Pad Chief

I know blessing of the earth doesn't increase the cap but I was just offering that as a possible alternative since doubling the rate is too much heart

Ward the of the depths is cool except for one itty bity line "She does not receive the penalties for wearing heavy armour" This conflicts with the buki class discipline so it has to be denied





Did nobody get to you guys? I'm sorry!!

Kazuma Of The Wind

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Asura Faulen

I'm sorry but changing the subtype of physical techniques is going to have to be a no heart

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 11:20 pm
Evanescently Magnificent

I know blessing of the earth doesn't increase the cap but I was just offering that as a possible alternative since doubling the rate is too much heart

Ward the of the depths is cool except for one itty bity line "She does not receive the penalties for wearing heavy armour" This conflicts with the buki class discipline so it has to be denied



I see. Ward of the Depths should probably say "does not recieve heavy armour penalties from this armour" but I've removed it entirely as I'm sure that would still run afoul. New PA just allows me to cast Jutsu in the ground or not centred on me when they should be.

Is Blessing of the Earth good as it just gives a constant meditation state (100 NE a round?)

Thanks  

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NecroPlant

Trash Gardener

PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2019 2:10 am
Odoeb
Thats fine for a start but I'd need a deeper understanding to the extent of how its supposed to work essentially.

If you simply want to use the plants as what could be considered scouting points i.e you can see a particular location from a thread from Y even though it is in X and its the plants themselves that are immune to a genjutsu of the sight trigger then that is fine. As assuming if your rpc themselves haven't had their own network personally tainted. If however it was personally tainted then what you see through the plants would be the same as what you'd see on your own then thats fine. I.e so long as you keep your eyes closed to avoid the sight trigger yourself you could use the plants to see bypassing it. This isn't an immunity then so much as its an alternative form of sight which is fine.

If however, its intended function is to use the plants to then discern genjutsu despite the user themselves being tainted already then its going to need to follow that guideline earlier where one would need to expend at least X chakra the rank of the Gen to pierce through the veil and realize its Gen. Essentially one is paying a double cost one to discern and one to kai for a pseudo gen immunity that may still prove incapable of discerning if one didn't spend enough chakra before hand to do so.
 
PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2019 2:22 pm
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                        ▰ PERSONAL DATA

                        Full Name: Kyōkan Hitogoroshi
                        Nickname: None at the moment
                        Age: 13
                        Birthdate: 9/15
                        Gender: Male


                        ▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS

                        Body Rank: E

                        Hair Color: Black
                        Eye Color: Copper
                        Height: 6’3”
                        Weight: 197lbs

                        Bloodline: Hoshigaki/Hatake
                        • Hoshigaki are capable of harnessing natural energy while moving so long as they are in water, and have their own sage mode as well. This sage mode cannot be maintained for long while on dry land, but because they can continuously refresh their own natural energy while in water they are capable of using it for much longer than normal. Requires A rank to access. It only requires 5 posts of deep meditation on their connection to the sea itself for them to access it. This sage mode follows its own rules, and gives the listed Senjutsu techniques as well. Incompatible with another sage mode simultaneously.

                        The Sage mode gives an active supreme boost to fortitude and speed, alongside an equivalent boost to strength and reflex while in the water. The user gathers 50 natural energy per post while in the water (up to 1/3rd of your maximum chakra and stamina), but the sage mode can only be maintained for a max of five posts, even while submerged, after which the user's remaining chakra and stamina are reduced by 50%, and all NE is lost. Water techniques and bukijutsu overwhelm same ranked techniques, following normal sage mode rules.

                        Non-Combat Outfit: Kyōkan doesn’t believe in dressing for out of combat. Fights can find you anywhere and he’d rather be prepared.
                        Combat Outfit: Kyōkan typically wears a sleeveless black shirt with slate grey shoulder pads with his arms wrapped up in bandages, his combat pants are a mottled grey, with sturdy pair of black combat boots to finish the ensemble.


                        ▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY

                        Nindo:
                        Personality: In the beginning and the end Kyōkan loves a good fight. Aggressive yet perceptive, Kyōkan is intent on analyzing his opponent’s fighting style and behaviors to better adapt his own techniques. Brash, Kyōkan likes to taunt as he fights, not at all concerned with shooting his mouth off in battle. His is a flippant grin as he taunts his foes; relishing the opportunity to test his skills against those that stand before him. In truth, Kyōkan has little patience for tasks not involved with combat; still he’ll do his part, if grudgingly. He’s blunt but not cruel, making his point clear to all involved. He’s honest and does his best to keep a bead on his actual skills to avoid the pitfall of pride. He possesses an odd sort of honor, willing to back down from a fight if his opponent is too injured to keep fighting. If they persist, he won’t hesitate to end it. Ironically, beating him in a fair fight is the best way to earn Kyōkan’s respect.

                        Village: Uzushiogakure
                        Title: Academy Student

                        Background: Kyōkan’s name, his full name was not the one given to him at birth. That name has been forgotten. Kyōkan was born to the Hoshigaki clan as the result of a tryst between a wandering Hatake male and low-ranking female member of the clan, a mother who died giving birth to him. At birth, Kyōkan did not display the physical characteristics typical of the Hoshigaki, particularly lacking the odd skin tone or gills of the Hoshigaki. This lead to Kyōkan being bullied and neglected by the clan who were loath to accept the boy as one of their own. In fact, that his father was a Hatake wasn’t known, thus further ostracizing the boy, who believed that Kyōkan’s mother had simply been neglectful in a tryst with a random wanderer. Things came to a head when Kyōkan, finally fed up with the bullying of his various cousins, beat them up in a fight. This culminated in Kyōkan’s exile from the clan, though not from the village proper. His ability to hold his own and surpass his cousins ensured that Kyōkan would have a place in Uzushiogakure, despite the Hoshigaki’s protests. As a result of the fiasco, Kyōkan renamed himself Kyōkan Hitogoroshi, in a blatant display of adhering to Hoshigaki’s exile but denying their place in any future successes he might have. It will be a cold day in hell when Kyōkan forgives or forgets his treatment at their hands.

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                        ▰ CLASSES AND STATS

                        First Class: Bukijutsu
                        ▱▰▱ ExpertThe user has achieved a sense of mastery and focus unlike others and are known as an Expert, a dedicated focus over a weapon they use to near perfection. The Shinobi can pick a single weapon, or two if dual wielding, to apply this focus towards with examples such as Katana, Spear, Bows or even Dual Daggers. They a acquire a Keystone Technique that is unique to them with an additional 2 Custom Techniques derived from this special ability. They gain a moderate boost to both speed and reflex & techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon in attack or defense.
                        Second Class: Bloodline
                        ▱▰▱ Dual Ancestry Dual Ancestry allows you to have full access to two bloodlines upon creation including all techniques, abilities, and personal attributes associated with them. Your primary bloodline's roster is where your name appears. For biographical purposes, your secondary bloodline may be genetic or implanted at your discretion. The Rinnegan may not be chosen as a secondary bloodline. Combo Element Kekkei Genkai and Jiongu users do not have access to Dual Ancestry nor can they be chosen as a secondary bloodline. Dual Ancestry users do not have access to the implant system including the Genetic Palette personal attribute.
                        ▱▰▱ Cross Class:Bukijutsu – Bloodline: Bloodline techniques with Bukijutsu attributes cost [10] less. Able to gain reductions on learning bukijutsu based on reductions given by bloodline.

                        Chakra Pool: 100 (225)
                        Stamina Pool: 100 (275)
                        Chakra Element: Suiton/Raiton
                        Chakra Color: Gold
                        Chakra Materialization: Kyōkan’s eye glow golden, and the chakra emanates off of him to form the face of a snarling demon above him.

                        Passive Stats Increases: {Descriptive ranks may be used in place of numbers for this section if desired. All of these start at 0/no buff, with each increase of 1 denoting a one level increase in the descriptive rank bonus to that stat. When you gain a passive benefit, add it to these totals and denote the source in place of the N/A under the relevant stat.}
                        • Strength ► 0
                        → N/A {Ex. Punch Hard PA, Move Fast Training}
                        • Speed ► 0
                        → N/A
                        • Reflex ► 0
                        → N/A
                        • Fortitude ► 0
                        → N/A

                        Strengths:
                        • Confident
                        • Perceptive
                        • Swordsmanship
                        • Adaptive
                        Weaknesses:
                        • Brash
                        • Poor Breadth of Techniques
                        • Odd Code of Honor
                        • Fight-Hungry
                        Fears:
                        • Fears a Crippled Life
                        • Fears an Empty Life

                        Modifiers:
                        • Learn 1 extra Suiton technique per post
                        • Learn 2 extra Bukijutsu technique per post
                        • Learn 1 extra Bloodline technique per post

                        Personal Attributes:
                        • Barbaric Bloodlust: Hoshigaki clansmen have either a supreme strength or speed boost, gaining one every time they increase in body rank. This is decided at each body rank, the end result will be either a supreme increase at S or a combination of moderate strength and speed at S
                        • Sharklike Aggression: The Hoshigaki clan members start with an additional 2 Buki styles
                        • Raijin’s Blade: All complex and spiritual Bukijutsu gain a lightning element. This additional lightning element added to the technique reduces the opponent’s speed by a slight amount [1] per contact made between the technique and the target per rank of the technique

                        ▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS

                        Ryo: 両0 {starts at 0}
                        AC: 0 {starts at 0}

                        Missions Complete: {all start at 0}
                        D Rank :: 0
                        C Rank :: 0
                        B Rank :: 0
                        A Rank :: 0
                        S Rank :: 0

                        Crafting Trees
                        • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

                        Crafting Jobs Complete: {all start at 0, remove this}
                        D Rank :: 0
                        C Rank :: 0
                        B Rank :: 0
                        A Rank :: 0
                        S Rank :: 0

                        Job Titles
                        • {Job} || → {Current Title}
                        • {Job} || → {Current Title}

                        Job Missions Complete: {all start at 0}
                        D Rank :: 0
                        C Rank :: 0
                        B Rank :: 0
                        A Rank :: 0
                        S Rank :: 0

                        Mission, Training, Events, and Job Claims

                        {This spoiler is where you'll link to your character's relevant claim posts for missions, training, holidays/events, and jobs.}
                        Missions Claim: [ x ]
                        Training Claim: [ x ]
                        Jobs Claim: [ x ]
                        Events Claim: [ x ]


                        ▰ INVENTORY

                        • 15 Kunai
                        • 30 Shuriken
                        • 20 smoke bombs
                        • 10 yards of steel wire
                        • Custom made knee length combat jacket
                        • Black shirt
                        • Belt
                        • Combat Pants
                        • Combat Boots

                        Weapon Specs

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                        ▰ TECHNIQUES

                        Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info, remove if you don't have access to jutsu. Remember that E rank nin/gen/eiseijutsu do not count towards these limits.}
                        • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04
                        • Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
                        • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
                        • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03

                        Maruton: {Everyone starts with the jutsu listed below, except Academy students. Do not remove them from the profile if starting as an Academy student, simply replace the "Default" designation with a training link if you choose to train them before taking your graduation exam.}
                        • Kai | Rank X | TBT
                        • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | TBT
                        • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | TBT
                        • Substitution Technique | Rank E | TBT
                        • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | TBT
                        • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | TBT

                        Suiton


                        Raiton


                        Bloodline


                        Genjutsu


                        Taijutsu
                        Kaiser Fist
                        • Stage Zero

                        Bukijutsu
                        Edge Punisher
                        • Stage Zero
                        Hakyoku-Ken no Kata
                        • Stage Zero
                        Juurai Toorima
                        • Stage Zero


                        ▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 00 {REMOVE. Current formless slots.}
                        {Find in Formless Style and Class information}

                        Formless Styles
                        • {Formless style name}

                        Formless Techniques
                        • {Formless technique name}


                        ▰ ACADEMY STUDENT

                        Learned E Rank Formless
                        • {Formless type learning}


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Hazaan



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2019 4:17 pm
Hazaan


You're free to delete stuff that are in Brackets listed in the profile code. Be sure to remember as well that as an academy student, your learn limits are pretty much ignored for now. Despite small little hiccups and the messy bits, nothing's stopping me from saying, Approved.  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2019 7:50 pm
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cashing in those PAs c:
I Put the Fine in Fish: Kameyo can use somatic movements instead of hand seals in order to cast after The Don made fun of her for having hands and not fins (the b*****d).

My Masked Minds: When Kameyo has her hearts out of her body in the masked monster forms (Jiongu Clan) and she falls under a genjutsu, the genjutsu is passively but instantaneously passed onto the masked creature. (If more than one masked monster is summoned, it transfers to the monster possessing the heart that's been in her the longest). This does not apply if she's under a genjutsu before she summons the creatures, but any genjutsu cast upon her after they are on the battlefield goes to them.

Further explanation of the second:
[ Kameyo can kai the creature out of the genjutsu like normal but if she returns the monster to her body w/o Kai'ing, she falls under the genjutsu. Not sure how to word this simply. ]  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2019 8:33 pm
Pad Chief
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I know blessing of the earth doesn't increase the cap but I was just offering that as a possible alternative since doubling the rate is too much heart

Ward the of the depths is cool except for one itty bity line "She does not receive the penalties for wearing heavy armour" This conflicts with the buki class discipline so it has to be denied



I see. Ward of the Depths should probably say "does not recieve heavy armour penalties from this armour" but I've removed it entirely as I'm sure that would still run afoul. New PA just allows me to cast Jutsu in the ground or not centred on me when they should be.

Is Blessing of the Earth good as it just gives a constant meditation state (100 NE a round?)

Thanks

If you mean in combat it would 50 ne a round yo only get 100 when you are out of combat. So from this PA I am assuming you are wanting to always be able to gain 100 NE chakra out of combat without having to sit and meditate correct? Because if you mean in combat the number cannot go past 50 and to be honest even if I gave you that it would just conflict with your custom razz  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2019 8:34 pm
Class Based PA: Sealer
Touch of Kindness: Selina can perform sealing jutsu through physical touch.
 

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