1) the 150 chakra, and 10 technique slots from the Year 1 anniversary are missing from the profile
2) You need to link/list Event Claim Rewards under Mission, "Training, and Job Claims"
3) Body Cultivation & Sword Cultivation are Denied as PAs they are doing too much in terms of flexibility.
4) After You Under Review
5) Without the Other needs some additional cost
6) BEAR WITH A SWORD only works if Body Cultivation & Sword Cultivation are approved. Since those two are denied, this one doesn't work.
Follow Up:
•After You is Fine as is. Tamer Attributes are to be considered 'slightly better Pa's not unlike the bloodline Pa's •Body Cultivation and Sword Cultivation I will agree with, use Eva's example Pa's for Nohea as a guideline.
Quote:
Nohea One Year PA Martial Master - Can use weapons to (within reason) apply to/replace fists in taijutsu techniques.
Ikuyo One Year PA Studious Swordswoman - Can (within reason) utilize any weapon with any style
Which was remedied with providing better specifications. Martial Master: {Short} - {Medium} - {Blunt} Studious Swordswoman: {Medium} - {Large} - {Bladed}
Posted: Sun May 05, 2019 12:25 am
Editing/switching out 4 of my medical PAs to align them with the new systems.
• Mind and Body I [The Santa List 2015] - A sound soul resides in a sound mind and a sound body. To ensure the health of all three, Kagerou tries to master every aspect of medicine. Kagerou gains an additional medical field career branch. •Mind and Body II The Santa List 2016] - A sound soul resides in a sound mind and a sound body. To ensure the health of all three, Kagerou tries to master every aspect of medicine. Kagerou gains an additional medical field career branch at the cost of one crafting profession branch. This branch must be trained separately. If the branch's Career PA gives the ability to use/reproduce/emulate the effects of a technique, Kagerou must know the technique in order to use/reproduce/emulate it. • Mind and Body III [Winter Holidays 2018/2019]: A sound soul resides in a sound mind and a sound body. To ensure the health of all three, Kagerou tries to master every aspect of medicine. Kagerou gains an additional medical field career branch at the cost of one crafting profession branch. This branch must be trained separately. If the branch's Career PA gives the ability to use/reproduce/emulate the effects of a technique, Kagerou must know the technique in order to use/reproduce/emulate it. • Last one... [Winter Holidays 2018/2019] - TBD. Dunno what yet.
I will accept your offering to the great consumer of Toesies. Your exchange of essentially 14 Craftable customs for these additional Career Branches has been determined to be a fair enough trade despite your lack of worker class to have access to them. Additionally, the fact you are of medical class also had sway for these Career Branches. On top of the additional weight you spent over 100 posts dedicating yourself to making posts for having all [five] branches prior to the career shift I provide this leniency but only this once. Gucci Gang
Posted: Mon May 06, 2019 9:11 am
▰▰▰ PERSONAL DATA
Full Name: Ho Saekki Nickname: Saekki [his name is written last then first] Age: 27 Birthdate: July 29 Gender: Male
▰▰▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Body Rank: E
Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Black Height: 6'2" Weight: 176lbs
Bloodline: Power
+2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank
Non-Combat Outfit: Generally, the same. Combat Outfit: Generally, the same.
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: "Never tickle a sleeping bear. Seriously, I tried. Can confirm: not worth." Personality: Saekki is brash and shameless. If we want to put it in a good way, he's lighthearted and straightforward. He's certainly rough around the edges. Though, with his mouth shut, he at least looks like a decent person. However, abrasiveness should not be equated to noise in Saekki's case. He is not one to blab or talk much about needless gossip. Other's peoples are their own, just as his business is firmly his own. A man of necessary words is a good way to put it. Though, at the same time, if he feels something is necessary to say, he also won't pull any punches.
The way Saekki thinks, as opposed to his somewhat hot-headed behavior, is actually quite cool. He tends to be calm and collected in the face of crisis, shamelessly accepting it as it comes. On one hand, "punching it," is frequently a solution to his problems, but on the other hand, "punching it" is a valid solution when he suggests it. It just so happens that Saekki likes to think he's rather good at punching things, and is sort of better at it than other popular solutions, such as "talk no jutsu" and "running away." He's not quite at the scale of a tactician, but he's clever nonetheless.
In the short term, Saekki can be guileful. A trick of the hand here, a fake there. In the long term, however, Saekki dislikes deceitful plots and plans. If a word play isn't a pun, then it has no place on his tongue. He does respect those who are skilled in such matters. After all, there are certain fields where such strengths beat his. However, it's just not for him. Again, "punching it," is his general go-to. Moreover, while he has the patience of a turtle, his persistence is too strong-headed and blunt.
Village: Uzushiogakure Title: A really, really late blooming academy student.
Background: Deep in Swamp Country, there is a tribe with a creation myth where a tiger and a bear besought the king of gods to make them humans. He set forth a trial for the two to complete, but only the bear could last until the end. She was turned into a human, and would go on to marry the son of the king of heaven and give birth to the first leader of the tribe. Isolated far away from the multicolored melting pot of shinobis, the tribe continues to believe in their myths and their spiritual religion to this day. They are so far removed, by both distance and treacherous geography, that they even practice an altogether different style of martial arts.
Saekki comes from this tribe. A b*****d and an orphan who heard hardly a kind word growing up, if his crude name wasn't already an indicator of such conditions. After his rough childhood, he all but forced his way into a clan in the tribe known for its martial prowess, kneeling in front of the gates of the clan's dojo day after day, rain or shine, until he was accepted as a disciple. The Ho clan, was an extremely competitive environment. Like the tigers that they were named after, clan that liked to think themselves elite and the cream of the crop. At the same time, they acknowledged and embraced outside talents, bringing those who showed potential into their fold and even, at times, adopting the best of the best among their guest disciples as new members of their clan. Eventually, but with a speed that marked him as particularly noteworthy, Saekki would rise the rank and receive the privilege of taking on the Ho surname. As a once nameless orphan, words couldn't describe how happy he was to finally have a family name to flaunt.
Though, not all in the Ho clan were so righteous, nor did the Ho clan particularly care about making sure that the only talents they fostered were the noble kind. Power was power, after all, and being able to navigate the social circuits and create clever plots was as much a strength as being able to punch a rock open or weave through a flurry of blades with nary a scratch. To such a person, Saekki experienced his fall from grace. His rough and shameless way of carrying himself was turned against him. Ultimately, the tribe acknowledged power, but that didn't mean individuals could be swayed to feel disgruntled one way or another about someone that was strong. Once he lost all of his allies, it was a much simpler task to trap the young man in a plot. Saekki found himself something worse than framed. Actions and decisions he had made with the best intentions at heart were twisted into villainous acts. Too proud to deny it, but then that just meant that the only possible result was to be hated. Thus, hated Saekki was, and from there, some reasoned that he had to be stopped at all costs. It wasn't long after the accusations that Saekki found himself surrounded. He put up a worthy fight, but at the end of it all, he was beaten to within an inch of his life and all potential stolen from him.
He recovered, eventually, found by a kind soul who nurtured him back to health. However, the damage his body suffered and the long recovery sapped away everything he knew. His muscles no longer remembered, and his memory was no longer the same. After the humiliation he suffered, there was no way Saekki could return and relearn what he had lost. Therefore, there was only one other path he could take. He had heard tales of a nation built on fighters just past the great swamp that few dared to cross. He, who was once a senior disciple, would need to start from the bottom to learn as they did, but this was Saekki. He had no shame, so long as he learned how to fight once more.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
Specialized Class:Tamer ▱▰▱ Specialization → If this class is taken as the first and second class, then you are allowed to choose two disciplines from this class. In addition, your character is able to grant something called a tamer attribute. These tamer attributes may be used to increase one stat by a mild amount. This attribute then increases in ability at B and S-ranked, so that the increase goes from a mild at D, to a heavy at B, and finally a supreme boost by S-ranked. ▱▰▱ Lifelong Companion → A tamer who has a pet for either all or their life, or enough of it where they cannot imagine life without them. These pets learns all of the ninjutsu and taijutsu the tamer trains in per what is granted of this class itself. if the user double classes into tamer then they may have access to all of the techniques the tamer knows. If the tamer trains in an element does not have then the pay may auto-learn ninjutsu equal to the amount learned of the element which they do not have. Pets may not learn genjutsu, but learn taijutsu granted outside of this class, (meaning, the pet can use any taijutsu granted by either a dual class or by guild rewards where another taijutsu style is rewarded). The pet also has access to the tamer's formless training. If a taijutsu style calls for a limb that the pet does not have, then they must utilize a tranformation technique of some kind in order to use it. Finally, pets of this kind are allowed to have one sensory attribute. This attribute enhances one of the five senses to allow them to be able to track individuals. However, in return, the one sense that the pet chooses to have this attribute in makes them one rank more susceptible to genjutsu of that kind. Custom pets of this kind can be appproved with the profile. The format for pets of this kind can be found on the profile approval forum. ▱▰▱ The Missing Link → Tamers of this kind are more beast than man. They gain an extra taijutsu slot at every other rank, (C-ranked, A-ranked, S+ ranked). In addition, the tamer is able to gain a tamer attribute unique to this discipline. This tamer attribute works the same way as the double perk ability.
Chakra Pool:425 200 • Tamer [+250] • Power [+25] • One Year Anniversary [+150] Stamina Pool: 250 100 • Tamer [+250] Chakra Element: Suiton, Raiton, Fuuton Chakra Color: White and black. Chakra Materialization: The white and lack coalesce into the faded shape of a white tiger that moves and acts as Saekki does. When he's happy, it curls up and purrs. When he's seething, it crouches and growls. When he paces, it prowls.
Strengths: • Good looking? Okay, look, we understand that long hair isn't everyone's tastes, but Saekki has his reasons for that. Otherwise, he's got a good looking face, good bone structure and sharp eyes, and toned body that plenty of guys would die for, so yeah. Basically, he's like every other male rpc in the world. • Emotional. It's common to consider this a weakness, but for Saekki, wearing his heart on his sleeve is a source of strength. Emotions, be they positive or negative, are like fuel for someone like him. He'd almost always rather be doing than waiting, so when he feels something, it drives him to action. Weaknesses: • Getting lost. Saekki has literally zero sense of direction outside of his usual stomping grounds. Fortunately, Honey can usually sniff him out and bring him back to where he belongs. She can even read a map. • Fighting alone. Saekki becomes too nervous and so cautious that it ends up hurting him when he has to fight alone. Consider it something like crippling hesitation. Fears: • Having to sleep alone. Saekki gets night terrors when he sleeps without his teddy bear, so to speak. • Losing Honey in general. Saekki is a strong, independent man, so he's okay with parting from Saekki for even hours at time, but at the end of the day, figuratively and literally, he needs Honey back with him. Whether it's sleeping or fighting with his life on the line, he's missing a part of himself if he doesn't have Honey.
Modifiers: • Learn 2 extra of every jutsu style per post. • Korabo costs are reduced by ten [10]. • Offensive, non-Korabo costs are increased by five [5]. Personal Attributes: Power Attributes
• Bear of Yin - Honey the bear is highly intelligent, able to think and learn on the level of humans. She gains an extra element. • Tiger of Yang - Saekki the b*****d is highly cooperative, able to seamlessly work with his animal partner to the point where the two learn as one. He gains an extra element.
Universal Attributes
• Spiritual Cultivation - Saekki can substitute hand seals and manipulate the flow of his chakra with either particular martial movements or by holding up a hand and creating, essentially, magic seal formulas in the air. • Actually a Tiger- Saekki can fluently communicate with cats of all types, be it with meows or human speech. Of course, he can also perfectly understand them. Includes everything from house cats to tigers and even those good old magical cats. • BEAR WITH A SWORD [1yr anniversary] - Honey can use medium bladed weapons using her mouth as the main hand. This gives her access to her tamer's bukijutsu styles, which previously could not be mirrored because of a lack of ability to use weapons. • Genetic Palette [1yr anniversary] - With intensive genetic therapy and strong blood, Honey is able to possess more than one transplant. This allows the character up to two transplants total, of any of the three categories. • After You [1yr anniversary] - Saekki can give Honey his activations for her to use as her own and vice versa.
Tamer Attributes
• Never One: Saekki's and Honey's Korabo costs are reduced by ten [10]. On the other hand, Offensive, non-Korabo costs are increased by five [5]. This applies separately to both Saekki and Honey. • Without the Other: Saekki can use all of the techniques Honey knows. In return, she can use all of the techniques her tamer knows. (This PA excludes bloodline, genjutsu, and summon techniques.) • BEAR IS A SWORD [1yr anniversary] - While transformed using Henge • Kongounyoi [Transform • Diamond-Like Hardness], Honey can cast techniques without any somatic or verbal components, giving her the ability to freely cast techniques even as a sword. Techniques that require movement to execute are not available to be used as, per the original description of Henge • Kongounyoi, Honey isn't able move while transformed.
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
{Replace this with Element 1} •
{Replace this with Element 2} •
Gejutsu • {Remove if none}
Taijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 02 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Formless Styles • {Formless style name}
Formless Techniques • {Formless technique name}
▰▰▰ ACADEMY STUDENT Learned E Rank Formless • {Formless type learning}
NecroPlant
Hazaan
Dear god. I hope for your guys's sake that I got everything...
Non-Combat Outfit: {What your character normally wears out of combat, if different from your profile image or format. Section may be removed if desired.} Combat Outfit: {What your character normally wears when they're prepared for combat. Note that specific gear should not be included here.}
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Personality: Ryōma is a stoic individual, who is borderline sociopathic. He tries to stick to himself, wanting to avoid dealing with people more than necessary which has caused him to have a rather underdeveloped set of social skills. Do to his origins from the Land of Iron and being from a family of Samurai, he tries to adhere to the Bushido as best as he can.
Village: N/A Title: N/A
Background: U/C
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Expert [Daishō(Katana+Wakizashi)] → The user has achieved a sense of mastery and focus unlike others and are known as an Expert, a dedicated focus over a weapon they use to near perfection. The shinobi can pick a single weapon, or two if dual wielding, to apply this focus toward with examples such as Katana, Spear, Bows or even Dual Daggers. They acquire a Keystone technique that is unique to them with an additional 2 Custom Techniques derived of this special ability. They gain a moderate [+3] boost to both speed and reflex & Techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon in attack or defense Second Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Mystic Hero → You are much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. Through your great devotion to this path you can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while wielding a weapon. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. In addition, once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Cross Class or Specialization: → Buki-Buki | Dedicated Disciple: A disciple reserved for those whom chose to specialize in their class's arts. Limiting themselves to three of their class's styles, designating one their primary style and the remainder as their supports. Any additional slots that would be awarded for their class's styles are converted into a moderate increase in a selected descriptive of their choosing. In addition, these masters of their arts are able to have a moderate increase added to their passive DR caps. The user's primary style gains the overwhelming property up to S Rank.
Chakra Pool: 780 Stamina Pool: 730 Chakra Element: Raiton, Fuuton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization:The dragon.
Strengths: • Bukijutsu • Cooking Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Social Interaction Fears: • Aphenphosmphobia – The fear of intimacy • Taphophobia – The fear of being buried alive
Modifiers: • Learn 6 extra Bukijutsu techniques per post. • Techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon [Daishō(Katana+Wakizashi)] in attack or defense Personal Attributes: • Raijin's Blade: Hatake are in tune with their blade and can make all complex and spiritual Melee Bukijutsu can gain a lightning element. Raijin's Blade requires an activation to activate and deactivate while affected techniques become susceptible to the Sosai (Counter-Balancing) system. The additional lightning added to techniques reduces an affected target's speed by a slight [1] amount per rank of a technique used, maxing out to supreme [6] with S-Rank techniques, this debuff applies with each technique that successfully hits a target. This debuff lasts for [2] of the target's posts, each additional hit stacks this debuff and refreshes its duration. Wind and Healing techniques of any rank clears off the debuff and ends it early. • Ryōma is able to incorporate the stance bonuses from Phantom Slayer and Tetsunami Ryu to the techniques from Kazekiri. [Using 2 PAs for this. Bukijutsu class specific PA from anniversary and 2nd character creation PA.]
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 20,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Raiton •
Fuuton •
Hatake •
Taijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Bukijutsu Kazekiri [Primary]
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Phantom Slayer
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Tetsunami Ryu
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 15 • Soft Physical | Rank E | Default • Hard Physical | Rank E | Default • Soft Mental | Rank E | Default • Hard Mental | Rank E | Default • Projectile Weapons | Rank E | Default • Small Weapons | Rank E | Default • Medium Weapons | Rank E | Default • Large Weapons | Rank E | Default • Strange Weapons | Rank E | Default • Armor | Rank E | Default
[Note: Link to 1 year rewards is in profile. Includes Class Package, Custom points, 10k AC, 10 technique slots ]
▰▰▰ PERSONAL DATA
Full Name: Kojiro Kanzaki Nickname: Age: 17 Birthdate: 07/04 Gender: Male
▰▰▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Body Rank: C Rank
Hair Color: Gray Eye Color: Green Height: 5'7 Weight: 148
Bloodline: Hatake Clan
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: "Enforce and Protect " Personality: Kojiro remains head strong and still takes leadership upon himself after several years. His dedication to protecting and serving the people lead him into Kenshin Kosei's circle, eventually being taken as his pupil. He has adopted Kenshin's no nonsense mentality when dealing with injustice but never quite inherited his teacher's harsh and blunt personality when being casual. Kojiro, while no longer chasing the title of hero, still enjoys being in the public spotlight.
Village: Arashigakure Title: Genin
Background:Kojiro was born to a poor farming family in the village of Seizan. He had lived to the age of seven without seeing bloodshed in his small, simple life. That is, until the United Hidden Villages attacked. During the invasion, a soldier would catch him alone and attempt to deliver the final blow. By luck he was saved by a young kunoichi who would meet an untimely demise only moments later. It was her interference that gave Kojiro a chance at survival. Shortly after he reunited with his parents, singing the praises of the young girl. If only others had acted with her, perhaps she would have survived. Perhaps the war could have been stopped. Couldn't someone have protected them? Kojiro would join the village of Kumogakure until it's reformation at the end of the war. Kojiro spent most of his days training with the most simple weapon, the sword. His condensed academy training during this time would give him knowledge to ninjutsu as well, although he was only capable of using the lightning element, it was by far superior to his classmates command of basic ninjutsu. After graduation, Kojiro would pursue the local police academy and his path would cross the famous Kenshin Kosei of the KPD. He would become his student, seeking to become the protector he longed for in Seizan.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Expert → The user has achieved a sense of mastery and focus unlike others and are known as an Expert, a dedicated focus over a weapon they use to near perfection. The shinobi can pick a single weapon, or two if dual wielding, to apply this focus toward with examples such as Katana, Spear, Bows or even Dual Daggers. They acquire a Keystone technique that is unique to them with an additional 2 Custom Techniques derived of this special ability. They gain a moderate [+3] boost to both speed and reflex & Techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon in attack or defense. Second Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Mystic Hero → You are much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. Through your great devotion to this path you can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while wielding a weapon. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. In addition, once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Bukijutsu Specialization: → Dedicated Disciple: A disciple reserved for those whom chose to specialize in their class's arts. Limiting themselves to three of their class's styles, designating one their primary style and the remainder as their supports. Any additional slots that would be awarded for their class's styles are converted into a moderate increase in a selected descriptive of their choosing. In addition, these masters of their arts are able to have a moderate increase added to their passive DR caps. The user's primary style gains the overwhelming property up to S Rank.
Chakra Pool: 590 Stamina Pool: 540 Chakra Element: Raiton [ Lightning ] | Fuuton [ Wind ] Chakra Color: Emerald Green Chakra Materialization: Lightning
Strengths: • Ambidextrous • Bladed Weaponry Weaknesses: • Forgiving • Single Minded Fears: • Darkness • Total Body Immobilization
Modifiers: • Learn 4 extra Bukijutsu technique per post. Personal Attributes: • Raijin's Blade: Hatake are in tune with their blade and can make all complex and spiritual Melee Bukijutsu can gain a lightning element. Raijin's Blade requires an activation to activate and deactivate while affected techniques become susceptible to the Sosai (Counter-Balancing) system. The additional lightning added to techniques reduces an affected target's speed by a slight [1] amount per rank of a technique used, maxing out to supreme [6] with S-Rank techniques, this debuff applies with each technique that successfully hits a target. This debuff lasts for [2] of the target's posts, each additional hit stacks this debuff and refreshes its duration. Wind and Healing techniques of any rank clears off the debuff and ends it early. • Raijin's Will:Opponents affected by negative D.R effects of this bloodline have an additonal slight [1] reduced from each technique used by the user successfully. This does not increase the duration of the parent technique. • Practiced Hand:Kojiro's bukijutsu cost 5 less stamina per rank of the technique, requiring a minimum of 5 be paid for any technique. • Elected Official:Kojiro gains 1.5 ryo for missions and jobs completed.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 10,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Raiton [ Lightning ] • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank
Fuuton [ Wind ] • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank
Hatake Clan • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank
Taijutsu {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ ACADEMY STUDENT Learned E Rank Formless • {Formless type learning}
NecroPlant
Evanescently Magnificent
Hazaan
Posted: Sat May 11, 2019 11:34 pm
Kondo Kaicho
Practiced Hand can only give up to 5 in a reduction or 10 if you increase 5 to something else! Sorry sweatdrop
Evanescently Magnificent
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2019 5:03 pm
Nero Inferni
Needs Fixing
I'm going to need you to double check your math for slots & resources.
On another, I do believe that face is currently in use. So I don't think you can use it yourself at this time.
Posted: Sun May 12, 2019 5:14 pm
Kondo Kaicho
Needs Fixing
Just need you to specify that you are using the Class package to grant yourself an additional 150 chakra and a style. I'm guessing you are doing that cause otherwise your chakra, slots, and DR are off.
[Note: Link to 1 year rewards is in profile. Includes Class Package [ chakra | Style ], Custom points, 10k AC, 10 technique slots ]
▰▰▰ PERSONAL DATA
Full Name: Kojiro Kanzaki Nickname: Age: 17 Birthdate: 07/04 Gender: Male
▰▰▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Body Rank: C Rank
Hair Color: Gray Eye Color: Green Height: 5'7 Weight: 148
Bloodline: Hatake Clan
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: "Enforce and Protect " Personality: Kojiro remains head strong and still takes leadership upon himself after several years. His dedication to protecting and serving the people lead him into Kenshin Kosei's circle, eventually being taken as his pupil. He has adopted Kenshin's no nonsense mentality when dealing with injustice but never quite inherited his teacher's harsh and blunt personality when being casual. Kojiro, while no longer chasing the title of hero, still enjoys being in the public spotlight.
Village: Arashigakure Title: Genin
Background:Kojiro was born to a poor farming family in the village of Seizan. He had lived to the age of seven without seeing bloodshed in his small, simple life. That is, until the United Hidden Villages attacked. During the invasion, a soldier would catch him alone and attempt to deliver the final blow. By luck he was saved by a young kunoichi who would meet an untimely demise only moments later. It was her interference that gave Kojiro a chance at survival. Shortly after he reunited with his parents, singing the praises of the young girl. If only others had acted with her, perhaps she would have survived. Perhaps the war could have been stopped. Couldn't someone have protected them? Kojiro would join the village of Kumogakure until it's reformation at the end of the war. Kojiro spent most of his days training with the most simple weapon, the sword. His condensed academy training during this time would give him knowledge to ninjutsu as well, although he was only capable of using the lightning element, it was by far superior to his classmates command of basic ninjutsu. After graduation, Kojiro would pursue the local police academy and his path would cross the famous Kenshin Kosei of the KPD. He would become his student, seeking to become the protector he longed for in Seizan.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Expert → The user has achieved a sense of mastery and focus unlike others and are known as an Expert, a dedicated focus over a weapon they use to near perfection. The shinobi can pick a single weapon, or two if dual wielding, to apply this focus toward with examples such as Katana, Spear, Bows or even Dual Daggers. They acquire a Keystone technique that is unique to them with an additional 2 Custom Techniques derived of this special ability. They gain a moderate [+3] boost to both speed and reflex & Techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon in attack or defense. Second Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Mystic Hero → You are much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. Through your great devotion to this path you can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while wielding a weapon. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. In addition, once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Bukijutsu Specialization: → Dedicated Disciple: A disciple reserved for those whom chose to specialize in their class's arts. Limiting themselves to three of their class's styles, designating one their primary style and the remainder as their supports. Any additional slots that would be awarded for their class's styles are converted into a moderate increase in a selected descriptive of their choosing. In addition, these masters of their arts are able to have a moderate increase added to their passive DR caps. The user's primary style gains the overwhelming property up to S Rank.
Chakra Pool: 590 Stamina Pool: 540 Chakra Element: Raiton [ Lightning ] | Fuuton [ Wind ] Chakra Color: Emerald Green Chakra Materialization: Lightning
Strengths: • Ambidextrous • Bladed Weaponry Weaknesses: • Forgiving • Single Minded Fears: • Darkness • Total Body Immobilization
Modifiers: • Learn 4 extra Bukijutsu technique per post. Personal Attributes: • Raijin's Blade: Hatake are in tune with their blade and can make all complex and spiritual Melee Bukijutsu can gain a lightning element. Raijin's Blade requires an activation to activate and deactivate while affected techniques become susceptible to the Sosai (Counter-Balancing) system. The additional lightning added to techniques reduces an affected target's speed by a slight [1] amount per rank of a technique used, maxing out to supreme [6] with S-Rank techniques, this debuff applies with each technique that successfully hits a target. This debuff lasts for [2] of the target's posts, each additional hit stacks this debuff and refreshes its duration. Wind and Healing techniques of any rank clears off the debuff and ends it early. • Raijin's Will:Opponents affected by negative D.R effects of this bloodline have an additonal slight [1] reduced from each technique used by the user successfully. This does not increase the duration of the parent technique. • Conduction Arts:Kojiro gains access to the water element. • Elected Official:Kojiro gains 1.5 ryo for missions and jobs completed.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 10,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Raiton [ Lightning ] • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank
Fuuton [ Wind ] • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank
Suiton [ Water ] • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank
Hatake Clan • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank • Name | Rank
Taijutsu {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Non-Combat Outfit: {What your character normally wears out of combat, if different from your profile image or format. Section may be removed if desired.} Combat Outfit: {What your character normally wears when they're prepared for combat. Note that specific gear should not be included here.}
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Personality: Ryōma is a stoic individual, who is borderline sociopathic. He tries to stick to himself, wanting to avoid dealing with people more than necessary which has caused him to have a rather underdeveloped set of social skills. Do to his origins from the Land of Iron and being from a family of Samurai, he tries to adhere to the Bushido as best as he can.
Village: N/A Title: N/A
Background: U/C
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Expert [Daishō(Katana+Wakizashi)] → The user has achieved a sense of mastery and focus unlike others and are known as an Expert, a dedicated focus over a weapon they use to near perfection. The shinobi can pick a single weapon, or two if dual wielding, to apply this focus toward with examples such as Katana, Spear, Bows or even Dual Daggers. They acquire a Keystone technique that is unique to them with an additional 2 Custom Techniques derived of this special ability. They gain a moderate [+3] boost to both speed and reflex & Techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon in attack or defense Second Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Mystic Hero → You are much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. Through your great devotion to this path you can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while wielding a weapon. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. In addition, once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Cross Class or Specialization: → Buki-Buki | Dedicated Disciple: A disciple reserved for those whom chose to specialize in their class's arts. Limiting themselves to three of their class's styles, designating one their primary style and the remainder as their supports. Any additional slots that would be awarded for their class's styles are converted into a moderate increase in a selected descriptive of their choosing. In addition, these masters of their arts are able to have a moderate increase added to their passive DR caps. The user's primary style gains the overwhelming property up to S Rank.
Chakra Pool: 780 Stamina Pool: 730 Chakra Element: Raiton, Fuuton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization:The dragon.
Strengths: • Bukijutsu • Cooking Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Social Interaction Fears: • Aphenphosmphobia – The fear of intimacy • Taphophobia – The fear of being buried alive
Modifiers: • Learn 6 extra Bukijutsu techniques per post. • Techniques cost [5] less Chakra and/or Stamina when wielding attacks with their specialized weapon [Daishō(Katana+Wakizashi)] in attack or defense Personal Attributes: • Raijin's Blade: Hatake are in tune with their blade and can make all complex and spiritual Melee Bukijutsu can gain a lightning element. Raijin's Blade requires an activation to activate and deactivate while affected techniques become susceptible to the Sosai (Counter-Balancing) system. The additional lightning added to techniques reduces an affected target's speed by a slight [1] amount per rank of a technique used, maxing out to supreme [6] with S-Rank techniques, this debuff applies with each technique that successfully hits a target. This debuff lasts for [2] of the target's posts, each additional hit stacks this debuff and refreshes its duration. Wind and Healing techniques of any rank clears off the debuff and ends it early. • Raijin's Will: Opponents affected by negative D.R effects of this bloodline have an additonal slight [1] reduced from each technique used by the user successfully. This does not increase the duration of the parent technique. • Ryōma is able to incorporate the stance bonuses from Phantom Slayer and Tetsunami Ryu to the techniques from Kazekiri. [Using 2 PAs for this. Bukijutsu class specific PA from anniversary and 2nd character creation PA.]
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 20,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Raiton •
Fuuton •
Hatake •
Taijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Bukijutsu Kazekiri [Primary]
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Phantom Slayer
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Tetsunami Ryu
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 15 • Soft Physical | Rank E | Default • Hard Physical | Rank E | Default • Soft Mental | Rank E | Default • Hard Mental | Rank E | Default • Projectile Weapons | Rank E | Default • Small Weapons | Rank E | Default • Medium Weapons | Rank E | Default • Large Weapons | Rank E | Default • Strange Weapons | Rank E | Default • Armor | Rank E | Default
Formless Techniques • {Formless technique name}
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Evanescently Magnificent
Hazaan
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Posted: Tue May 14, 2019 7:16 pm
Kondo Kaicho
Numbers check out, just put the specifics of the Class Package somewhere in the profile itself since you didn't specify in the anniversary grab. Otherwise,