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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:57 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:36 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:43 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:02 am
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I was thinking something going like this...
"As Tote watched behind the shadows of a tree where not far from where she was, Owwin had killed his newest victim. She slowly got on one knee but she was clumsy with her footing and snapped a twig on the soft forest floor. Owwin, hearing this, quickly turned his head and saw her bent down with a gun aimed for his head. Enraged that he had been found out, he lunged at the squirrel hybrid to dispatch her with his glistening teeth and dagger like claws. Tote was caught off guard by this and reeled back in surprise while blocking her face with the gun. Owwin now stood above her like a god and whacked the gun out of her hands in one swift movement. He grinned his wolfish grin as he looked down at the helpless townie. It just didn't get any better than that. Tote's adrenalin skyrocketed and her body acted on it's own accord as she brought her legs up to her chest and, quick as a whip, launched herself at Owwin's chest. Hitting squarely on the target, the wind was knocked out of him and he was left sprawling several feet from where he was, gasping for breath. He growled in rage as he quickly got back onto his feet. His eyes darted to where he had last seen her but she had already used the time to disappear. Owwin sniffed the air and smelt her fear as clearly as he could see the bark on the trees. He grinned again as he followed the scent through the forest as silent as a wraith. It didn't take long before he was close and could see a tip of red cloth just barely visible behind a tree. He snuck to the other side and then quickly dashed to where she was only to find that her medic jacket was the only thing there. Owwin howled in rage and swiftly turned around to see Tote had already taken aim to his head and was about to pull the trigger. He quickly dodged the wall of bullets and extended his reach in front of him as he charged toward her. Her eyes widened as she clumsily cocked her gun once more and took aim. A sudden clash, a hail of bullets, and a stream of blood. The wolf was dead."
I feel that it doesn't do you justice. :/
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:13 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:21 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:24 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:43 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:49 am
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Totagomi Owwin Totagomi Well I am wearing a squirrel costume. :B I'm quite relieved that you like it even with it being sped typed through while making corrections everywhere. xP I wouldn't really know what you would say which is one reason why I stayed away from dialog. I didn't want you to be too out of character. Did total justice, and dialogue would have been out of character. I think that this was perfect. Sorry, snoozed a bit there. xD So what's next for the ghost wolf? Uh uh nope I am not a wolf, once I am dead the curse is lifted I am free from that bullshit.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:53 am
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Owwin Totagomi Owwin Totagomi Well I am wearing a squirrel costume. :B I'm quite relieved that you like it even with it being sped typed through while making corrections everywhere. xP I wouldn't really know what you would say which is one reason why I stayed away from dialog. I didn't want you to be too out of character. Did total justice, and dialogue would have been out of character. I think that this was perfect. Sorry, snoozed a bit there. xD So what's next for the ghost wolf? Uh uh nope I am not a wolf, once I am dead the curse is lifted I am free from that bullshit. Maybe I shoulda died with you in that clash. xD And then they build a small statue in my honor. cool
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:53 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:08 pm
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Owwin YOU were the hunter! That is how I wanted it to have happened to. I thought it was zeph who was the hunter and you were detective. I should have just waited, but I knew I had no chance so I didn't want to prolong it. Now we can start another game with more people. Tell me about how you were going to do it. I'll play along and make dead noises so it is awesome. Partner.
Zephyrkitty Hobo is far too friendly to be a werewolf. wink I'm torn between it being awesome and horrible that no one took this as a roleclaim.
Anyway, that was an awesome story, Tota.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:20 pm
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