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 Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:14 pm
HO' s**t IMMA CHARGIN' MAH LAZER!
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:14 pm
Lifeless-Fox You had a story?
Did I ever read it? How did you miss it? It was one of the major stories for awhile there.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:21 pm
Seaphron Lifeless-Fox You had a story?
Did I ever read it? How did you miss it? It was one of the major stories for awhile there. You give it too much credit. Only about five people actually read it.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:21 pm
One of? it reached like 30+ chapters xd then it died because it was dragging on and on and becoming extraordinarily boring with no true conclusion in sight ... and not much.. well there was no... well you couldn't like the characters lol in Seaphron's story you've got all the little side stories and what's going on all at once, Masamunes just had that little bit of Romance with Sherriff and all the other times it was fight fight cut cut [/harsh_critique]
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:23 pm
Masamune 5.0 You give it too much credit. Only about five people actually read it. It was still the second most popular story. Draken is right though the dragging on did start to get annoying.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:24 pm
Seaphron It would be interesting, what kind of ideas do you have is my question? It all depends on what the storyline would be. Well, it would involve all video games, not just Nintendo games, but it would focus more on Nintendo and the N Cult. The plot would revolve with something about how the stability of the worlds is falling apart, and how reality will eventually cease to exist unless someone does something. Kind of along the lines of that. @ Draken: You're entirely right. It had no where to go. With all my other books I actually know how it's ending. With that one I had no clue.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:28 pm
Do you have the Link to the story?
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:30 pm
Sounds intresting, i would be intrested in seeing it or at least a test idea of it.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:30 pm
No, it went far down. It was called Centuries' Chronicles: Cult Edition.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:32 pm
Seaphron Sounds intresting, i would be intrested in seeing it or at least a test idea of it. I may post the prologue/chapter 1 soon if I feel like it. But I won't be updating much. This week is midterm week for me.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:32 pm
Hmm, I wonder what critism people have to say about my novel?
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:34 pm
Masamune 5.0 Seaphron Sounds intresting, i would be intrested in seeing it or at least a test idea of it. I may post the prologue/chapter 1 soon if I feel like it. But I won't be updating much. This week is midterm week for me. Oh. good luck!
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:34 pm
Raui Hmm, I wonder what critism people have to say about my novel? and mine, despite it being only at the third chapter.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:35 pm
Raui Hmm, I wonder what critism people have to say about my novel? You know what I'm surprised about your story? Your's is the first one to take such a big focus on the video games. I'm really surprised about that because there were about five before it. EDIT: I'm setting up mine right now! mrgreen
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:41 pm
Raui Hmm, I wonder what critism people have to say about my novel?
nothing, I haven't read it all because I can't be bothered to trawl through all those pages to find the chapters.
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