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 Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:21 am
Crit Please!Character's Race: Ghost Looking For: General crit, please? Quest Link: Hira Morifune
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Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:54 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Daemon - Succubus Looking For: Overall criticing // Mainly looking for Fear ability help? Quest Link: [ Link ]
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:41 pm
Crit Please!Characters Race: Monster- Sentient Tree Looking For: General Crit- will trade Quest Link: Here
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:42 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Vampire - Undead Looking For: Critique anything. I don't mind. smile Quest Link: Alice Marie LaToure
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2012 4:01 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Inugami - Demon Looking For: Crit and anything else~ Quest Link: Here
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2012 7:53 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Subspecie - Demon Looking For: Crit on everything!! Quest Link: Here
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 10:42 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Micail the Hellhound- Monster or Demon Looking For: Mostly just crit. This is my first time doing this and I want to make sure I'm doing it right. I'm not sure if he would be considered a Monster or Demon. Quest Link: HERE
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 4:46 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Fae - Demon Looking For: On everything, does his family stuff make sense. Does his personality work, and do I need to add more? Do I need to worry about FEAR now? How can he be improved? Quest Link: HERE
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2012 12:57 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Monster - Hippocerf Looking For: Everythinnnggg D: But especially on her personality and FEAR. Quest Link: Click!
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 4:23 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Nurse - Reaper Looking For: Crit on everything really x3 I wanna make sure Im doing this right. Quest Link: here
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 9:39 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: (Victorian-themed) Grim Reaper - Reaper Looking For: Crit on everything, because even after reading a bunch, I'm still not sure if I got anything right. XD And I'd also appreciate it if someone could point out any contradictions she might have with shop cannon because I know shinigami greatly vary no matter where you go. I read the info thread on their race, but even so... Quest Link: Right Here
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2012 6:39 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Subspecie - Ghost Looking For: Crit on FEAR, and race help? Though if you read something that has potential for a good critique feel free to do so as well! I just want to make sure I follow the guide and still make sense! Quest Link: HERE! YA!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2012 10:36 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Ghost/Jaakhin Looking For: Come at me Bro! Crit EVERYTHING. I want to make sure I got his form ready 100% Quest Link: Danny Lighting
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 10:55 am
Crit Please!Character's Race: Monster - Jade Moon Rabbit Looking For: Anything and everything that doesn't look good. Any kind of crit will help. c: Quest Link: Click this one.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:58 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Demon - Yokai Looking For: Crit on everything. D: Since I don't know what I'm missing or doing right. Quest Link: Myst
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