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 Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:18 pm
Guess how much the bid went up to.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:18 pm
StrawBerryApple Guess how much the bid went up to.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:18 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:19 pm
x3 thisismysn x3 StrawBerryApple Guess how much the bid went up to.
Youdidn't guess.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:20 pm
StrawBerryApple x3 thisismysn x3 StrawBerryApple Guess how much the bid went up to.
Youdidn't guess.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:23 pm
[-Lolli-pop-] ♪
I do need a beta reader, since I am the best english writer in my group of friends, so yeah... You are hired and I'll pay you with... *thinks*... Hugs!!
Ok, I'll change that right away...
My first language is Spanish, since I live in San Jose, Costa Rica.
♫ Angel's wings... xD
Ok then...
Lets see...
It actually isn't so bad. A couple spelling mistakes, and some words that
could be switched out... Um... It also would be nice
if you settled on a way of the names going.
In Japan it would be "Ootori Kyouya" Since Kyouya is his first name...
And assuming you write "Sato Riku" in that fashion as well.
In the second chapter, you switched Kyouya's name around.
By accident I'm guessing though...? Sometimes fail...
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:24 pm
x3 thisismysn x3 StrawBerryApple x3 thisismysn x3 StrawBerryApple Guess how much the bid went up to.
Youdidn't guess.
Bah.
You could've just checked my posts.
With all the values of the items totalled up: It went to 416k.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:25 pm
StrawBerryApple That's no fun though.
Bah.
You could've just checked my posts.
With all the values of the items totalled up: It went to 416k.
gonk gonk
Wow. I think part of my head just exploded.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:25 pm
Teh K a a C h a n [-Lolli-pop-] ♪
I do need a beta reader, since I am the best english writer in my group of friends, so yeah... You are hired and I'll pay you with... *thinks*... Hugs!!
Ok, I'll change that right away...
My first language is Spanish, since I live in San Jose, Costa Rica.
♫ Angel's wings... xD
Ok then...
Lets see...
It actually isn't so bad. A couple spelling mistakes, and some words that
could be switched out... Um... It also would be nice
if you settled on a way of the names going.
In Japan it would be "Ootori Kyouya" Since Kyouya is his first name...
And assuming you write "Sato Riku" in that fashion as well.
In the second chapter, you switched Kyouya's name around.
By accident I'm guessing though...? Sometimes fail... ♪
Darn... Did I really did that?? It was a mistake, real mistake... It is in the part he answers the phone, I suppose... Am I right??
♫
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:26 pm
StrawBerryApple
That's no fun though.
Bah.
You could've just checked my posts.
With all the values of the items totalled up: It went to 416k.
I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. I knew I sensed a disturbance in the Force while lying in bed. gonk It woke me up from almost falling asleep. And I know you do the same things, too. So we're really not that different, me and you.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:27 pm
x3 thisismysn x3 StrawBerryApple That's no fun though.
Bah.
You could've just checked my posts.
With all the values of the items totalled up: It went to 416k.
gonk gonk
Wow. I think part of my head just exploded.
When I asked Kit why she wanted to spend so much, it was because she didn't really want anything else on gaia.
mad
I'm just glad she didn't want me to bid the horns.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:29 pm
StrawBerryApple x3 thisismysn x3 StrawBerryApple That's no fun though.
Bah.
You could've just checked my posts.
With all the values of the items totalled up: It went to 416k.
gonk gonk
Wow. I think part of my head just exploded.
When I asked Kit why she wanted to spend so much, it was because she didn't really want anything else on gaia.
mad
I'm just glad she didn't want me to bid the horns.I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. Hell, I'd just donate the money if I didn't want anything else on Gaia. @@ Then I wouldn't have to fuel those... those cheap bastards. sweatdrop
But for me, there's always something more you can buy to make another original outfit. surprised And I know you do the same things, too. So we're really not that different, me and you.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:30 pm
StrawBerryApple x3 thisismysn x3 StrawBerryApple That's no fun though.
Bah.
You could've just checked my posts.
With all the values of the items totalled up: It went to 416k.
gonk gonk
Wow. I think part of my head just exploded.
When I asked Kit why she wanted to spend so much, it was because she didn't really want anything else on gaia.
mad
I'm just glad she didn't want me to bid the horns.
Such a waste. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:31 pm
Tellev I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. Hell, I'd just donate the money if I didn't want anything else on Gaia. @@ Then I wouldn't have to fuel those... those cheap bastards. sweatdrop
But for me, there's always something more you can buy to make another original outfit. surprised And I know you do the same things, too. So we're really not that different, me and you.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:32 pm
StrawBerryApple Tellev I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. Hell, I'd just donate the money if I didn't want anything else on Gaia. @@ Then I wouldn't have to fuel those... those cheap bastards. sweatdrop
But for me, there's always something more you can buy to make another original outfit. surprised And I know you do the same things, too. So we're really not that different, me and you.
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