Okay, let's try this again.
I softened the cheek line and added some hair to the top. I realized the head was a bit flat when I was editing. That might've been another cause for distortion. As well as the collarbone area. Don't know how I missed that before, but it was rather off. Urg.
I left the eyes alone because I personally liked how they turned out. Plus, she's kind of squinting a little with that smirk, so it would flatten them out some instead of being all rounded and youthful. Plus, there's that whole saying about how someone's eyes can "look old", you know? Like they've seen/done a lot that's left them a bit scarred. *shrugs*