TtheHero
Zephyrkitty
TtheHero
Zephyrkitty
TtheHero
Well we can always retuen back to the subjust of my story then.
I gave myself an ability to create solid copies of myself, and a few eps later, and ability to roll into a ball of matter.
Coupled with the power of the Tanuki I discover and the Wind power I inherit even later on, It seems I have a good arsenal of moves there! But two things: I don't want to make myself seem over powered, and at the same time, the moves used are too integrated in the story to just remove one.
I gave myself an ability to create solid copies of myself, and a few eps later, and ability to roll into a ball of matter.
Coupled with the power of the Tanuki I discover and the Wind power I inherit even later on, It seems I have a good arsenal of moves there! But two things: I don't want to make myself seem over powered, and at the same time, the moves used are too integrated in the story to just remove one.
Add limitations? Bonus points given based on how absurd they are? wink
...Yes, of course!
With my Substitute Technique, the copies are slightly weaker than the real deal, and will expire if too much damage is taken.
I have made an instance where my Rollerball ability was used by the others in order to play soccer xd That hurt.
And later on in the series, i do tend to use these two abilities lesser and lesser.
Slightly weaker? Not 'only has a fraction of the original's strength' weaker? Clones are a fairly useful power, so it generally has to come with a big drawback, even moreso if the character has other powers as well.
I should probably ask: do you have a problem with me nitpicking/commenting like this? I'll likely make more negative comments, and if that's not what you're looking for you should warn me now.
It's ok. I gotta look for constructive criticism somewhere. And you're just the person with the smarts to fully understand my work! smile
Now I come ot another power I have.
In my 3-4th season i come up with a ability called the Conversion Technique. it's where I use my handheld device called A.N.A.L.Y.Z.E.R. and scan someone with unique abilities of with elemtal energy.
In season 3 it was Ryu Ken and the gang from Pocket Fighter.
In season 4 it's my usual friends, with their elemental powers.
Now I get to use interesting skills like for instance aftrer copying Ryu, I use a move called Pseudoken. Like the Hadouken, but you understand why i put in the prefix, right?
I didn't have names for the SF-based transformations, but I made some for the elemental Conversions, like HeatConversion after copying Eiji's Fire power and AquaConversion, after copying Ellis' Water power.
Now don't worry about overpowering. it basically add a bit of the other attribute to my Wind power, combining it.
As for how long it lasts, it wears off over a set time period, or when I use a VERY strong move, which expends the acquired power. Plus any Data used to use the Conversion can only be stored one at a time to limit its useage.
Good to know. A lot of people are only looking for praise, and any sort of constructive/negative comments in those cases are pointless.
That sounds pretty interesting. I'd probably have to actually read some of your story to fully see how it works, but I would like to see the device in action.
...Now you're making me want to write a story and I don't even know what it'd be about. sweatdrop
