NUR MANGA or ANIME

[Eris5]

You said earlier that you charge 250 gold per page...well thats a bit much so I dont think we will need your help. All the people working on it so far are doing so for the love of the guild and for the love of being creative which is awsome so ya.  

[iZann]

Oh wel need to include Yuan Shisho's war...well it was a big thing at that time. And did Mist ever had a fall, by any chance?  

[Scrapples]

Mist took over Cloud and no one ever did anything about it. stare  

[Dark-Ninja70]

Eris5

ahh comic relief we can definitely do that...but what will be the serious story of the 1st hokage i know just about nothing about him or his time...I really don't follow the events of the leaf that much.

ninja Alright time for a little Konoha History Lesson! ninja

Back in Konoha nearly 2 years ago (and over 60 years in NUR time) there was a man by the name of Lord Rin he was the 1st Hokage said to have the ability to control time and space with his bloodline. He had a Sannin and Anbu Captain named Ikki Uchiha (Probably the ancestor to people like Hanzo, Jedi, Naro etc) and the town hunk that all the girls went for was a guy named Gohma. Back then Akatsuki were very strong and powerful and things like betrayal and abandonment of your village were high. Rin was probably the most strongest shinobi of the world and there was hardly anyone out there who didn't fear him. His death came after leaving the village to take on the akatsuki by himself, he died fighting and restored peace to the village.

 

[Plexilate]

Dark-Ninja70

Eris5

ahh comic relief we can definitely do that...but what will be the serious story of the 1st hokage i know just about nothing about him or his time...I really don't follow the events of the leaf that much.

ninja Alright time for a little Konoha History Lesson! ninja

Back in Konoha nearly 2 years ago (and over 60 years in NUR time) there was a man by the name of Lord Rin he was the 1st Hokage said to have the ability to control time and space with his bloodline. He had a Sannin and Anbu Captain named Ikki Uchiha (Probably the ancestor to people like Hanzo, Jedi, Naro etc) and the town hunk that all the girls went for was a guy named Gohma. Back then Akatsuki were very strong and powerful and things like betrayal and abandonment of your village were high. Rin was probably the most strongest shinobi of the world and there was hardly anyone out there who didn't fear him. His death came after leaving the village to take on the akatsuki by himself, he died fighting and restored peace to the village.

They still are high in Suna. Right now, there are only 2 people that are Chuunin and above that didn't abandon the village (not counting Kashiim the Kazekage)

EDIT: But that doesn't matter right now, so I'm shutting up. xp  

[Scrapples]

Dark-Ninja70

Eris5

ahh comic relief we can definitely do that...but what will be the serious story of the 1st hokage i know just about nothing about him or his time...I really don't follow the events of the leaf that much.

ninja Alright time for a little Konoha History Lesson! ninja

Back in Konoha nearly 2 years ago (and over 60 years in NUR time) there was a man by the name of Lord Rin he was the 1st Hokage said to have the ability to control time and space with his bloodline. He had a Sannin and Anbu Captain named Ikki Uchiha (Probably the ancestor to people like Hanzo, Jedi, Naro etc) and the town hunk that all the girls went for was a guy named Gohma. Back then Akatsuki were very strong and powerful and things like betrayal and abandonment of your village were high. Rin was probably the most strongest shinobi of the world and there was hardly anyone out there who didn't fear him. His death came after leaving the village to take on the akatsuki by himself, he died fighting and restored peace to the village.

Yea he probably was our ancestor.  

[Eris5]

Hell he could even be my ancestor... Susumu is an Uchiha as well, but for some reason goes with her clans last name the Yasuaki...which I would say is my moms side of the family since it is a girls only clan, but anyways thank you for the lesson. So the first Manga could be constructed a bit like this...

-Title Page - (Awsome drawing of Konoha and maybe a whole bunch of mysterious ninja standing on roof tops and in odd places all silloutted)

~1st page and 2nd page, lord rin talking to anbu captain about dire situations in village

~As Ikki and Rin talk it goes to a flashback as they talk about betrayal and it shows some of the deeds done by Ex-leaf ninja that hurt konoha.

~Rin gets very serious as he talks to Ikki and a quiet moment happens when he finally stands up from his desk and looks out the window and we get our first real good picture of what lord rin looked like.

~As he looks out the window of his village it is seen below Gohma running away from a horde of women (comic relief always good at this point)

~A sweat bead or classic WTF look goes across both Ikki and Rin's face upon watching this event. Ikki then excuses himself and leaves the kages presence to go train or to go on a mission or seomthing

~meanwhile lord Rin does the same thing (maybe they have a friendly spar) to just show of the power of Rin and Ikki.

_____ Perhaps we could end there and pick up the story later on with something like

~ The Show of Akatsuki's power
~Rin deciding that the danger of Akatsuki is becoming to grim and even though ikki and everybody else loyal to the village begs him not to go alone he does anyways.
~Lord Rin's huge fight with Akatsuki which thus brings peace to the village.  

[jedimastersonic]

Dark-Ninja70

Eris5

ahh comic relief we can definitely do that...but what will be the serious story of the 1st hokage i know just about nothing about him or his time...I really don't follow the events of the leaf that much.

ninja Alright time for a little Konoha History Lesson! ninja

Back in Konoha nearly 2 years ago (and over 60 years in NUR time) there was a man by the name of Lord Rin he was the 1st Hokage said to have the ability to control time and space with his bloodline. He had a Sannin and Anbu Captain named Ikki Uchiha (Probably the ancestor to people like Hanzo, Jedi, Naro etc) and the town hunk that all the girls went for was a guy named Gohma. Back then Akatsuki were very strong and powerful and things like betrayal and abandonment of your village were high. Rin was probably the most strongest shinobi of the world and there was hardly anyone out there who didn't fear him. His death came after leaving the village to take on the akatsuki by himself, he died fighting and restored peace to the village.

more like relative, we were still around then. infact the raikage before had quit before eris was even in the guild. and and no kira kira wasnt the first raikgae, nor was snowyloved. i was a genin and was learning the ropes...i invited naro to join the guild because it was cool  

[Scrapples]

Here is my example. This is as much as I could get done because i've been really busy. It scanned like crap too. sad  

[Oni_Soul]

crying i do so miss Rin...and i do remember Ikkie, he and i fought...to much. And Gohma! you could make him his own story and i would read it again and again.  

[Ryoko Earth]

I think I was around then too.  

[Oni_Soul]

DUDE  

[Oni_Soul]

THE MELODY GROVE IS STILL IN THE LEAF VILLAGE!!!!!!!  

[jedimastersonic]

dang naruto i think youve gotten better at drawing

Oni: cool  

[Oni_Soul]

you have no idea what knowledge of the past that thing holds...thats was from WWWAAAAYYYYYYY back in the day.