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 Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2013 11:02 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Wererodent(Rat) - Monster Looking For: Crit on everything, please. I want to know what people think so I can adjust appropriately. Quest Link: LINK!
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Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2013 12:28 am
Crit Please!Character's Race: Undead Looking For: Crit on everything! Particularly natural abilities and FEAR, please. ; u; Quest Link: Elium.
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Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2013 12:34 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Demon Looking For: Everything and anything <3 Quest Link: Sovasu
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Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2013 4:41 am
Crit Please!Character's Race: Kelpie - Monster Looking For: Anything and everything, she's my first character, so I want to make sure I have everything within acceptable standards. Quest Link: Gwyn
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Posted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 9:29 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Kelpie - Monster Looking For: Crit everything please C: Quest Link: Eachann the Kelpie
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Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:41 am
Crit Please! Character's Race: Monster- Werewolf Looking For: Anything that will help my girl come to life <3 I would really love to see Lyca in TiH! Quest Link: Lycania Howlls
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Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 2:32 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Incubus - Demon Looking For: General Critique. sweatdrop Perhaps some help for a name for my Fear Ability? He's an OC I've had for years, so I wanna be sure I "reset" him back to square one in a fitting way for TiH. smile Quest Link: Kaeldwyn
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Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 10:27 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Subspecie - Essence Demon Looking For: Crit on everything? First TiH Quest Form; feel like I'm flailing XD Quest Link: N'Finity Deevinar
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Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 7:02 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Hunter Looking For: I'd mostly like help on her and her weapon's backstory/how they fit into things. I feel comfortable with the personalities unless you think it'd hurt me massively by not elaborating on things! Quest Link: Camixi Ryland
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Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2013 5:24 pm
Crit Please!
Character's Race: Human -- Hunter
Looking For: Crit on everything, please? This is my first hunter so I'm VERY NEW to Deus and may have mucked something up, I'm sure. xD
Quest Link: AntaIgnore please!
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Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2013 3:26 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Hunter Looking For: Critique on everything please? Q v Q I'm not sure where I'm going with him haha. orz Quest Link: Cahir
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 11:21 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Anubis - Demon Looking For: Crit it all please, I want to know where and what I might/do need to change! Quest Link: Anepou!
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 12:47 pm
Crit Please!Character's Race: Onikuma - Monster Demon Looking For: Critique on anything. Quest Link: Sid
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 2:12 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Weichon Fly- MONSTER Looking For: Crit ALL THE THINGS. Quest Link: Darcious
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 2:22 pm
Crit Please! Character's Race: Monster- Wereyeti Looking For: Anything. Quest Link: Wynter North
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